My Disciple Is Far Too Diligent

It's quite beautiful, but there are still some big holes. Sure enough, humans can't learn lessons from history! First of all, don't set the background of the world to be a chaotic type where warriors kill people at will and there are no official laws. Because there is basically no order in this kind of world, everyone can buy for zero yuan, and commerce is basically impossible to exist. Ordinary people are either slaves or maggots. The masters are all local emperors. They grab whatever they need and kill whoever they want. Every high-level warrior is a native of the motherland. Secondly, the gap between each realm must not be too large. When a warrior of a certain realm can easily kill dozens or hundreds of warriors of a lower realm, it is impossible for there to be multiple top forces or multiple masters in this world. Because the top experts will completely take it all as long as they are not stupid! First, he would kill all the masters who were lower than himself, collect the skills and destroy them all, and then ban martial arts from top to bottom, turning the whole world into his own exclusive slave paradise. Any outsider who dares to practice martial arts will be shot to death, and his subordinates will also control the spread of the martial arts levels so that their strength will never threaten them, and then they can exclusively enjoy the resources and beauties of the entire world. This is reasonable! Finally, don't make sure that once you have established your power, no matter how big the issue is, the protagonist needs to personally handle it. The purpose of establishing power is simply to have someone do things for you, collect resources for you, and defend yourself from fights. If the protagonist does everything himself, stands in the way of everything, and allocates resources to his subordinates who only cause trouble and make no contribution, then why does the protagonist establish power? Are you afraid that you will grow up too fast or that your life will be too easy? Of course, this book cannot be a pure nanny, because the protagonist's golden fingers can cut leeks. However, it is still not necessary to do everything personally, because not everyone has a golden finger, so the original intention of establishing power cannot be to do everything personally or to protect his subordinates.

Why didn't those disciples with such low loyalty be killed or driven away? In ancient times, the master was almost like his father. The disciples ate the master's food and used the master's. The master also taught martial arts. The master was so kind to his disciples but his loyalty was so low. Why should such unfilial disciples be kept for the New Year!

The protagonist is a FW, with 8th level of Qi, so many perfect martial arts and exercises, and the spirit has reached a very high level after eating strange purple flowers. However, killing those with the same 8th and 9th level of Qi depends on the mind, and cannot be crushed openly, and even without a sword that cuts the sky, you can't kill. How useless do you think you are?

I found a problem. The protagonist has practiced multiple times, but the apprentice has not. It didn't take long for me to teach martial arts and other things, so I can become proficient.

Why doesn't the protagonist recruit more apprentices? It's a waste of golden fingers.

A drop of kindness should not be repaid by a spring. What is the difference between this Chen Yifan and the white-eyed wolf? Why not just kill him and replace him with another one? This is the kind of person who is the first to betray when disaster strikes.

After watching it, I feel that the disciple is too "waste" and the protagonist is Bao Ma. Just like a kindergarten teacher taking care of a large class of children. Apart from causing trouble, it is almost useless.

Every time someone is looking for trouble during the day, I kill them at night. Once or twice is nothing, but if you do it more times, fools will know that it was you who did it. Hehe, why did you hide your face? Then you did it directly!

The writing is pretty good, but is it interesting for the male protagonist to wear a bunch of vests to show off?

Instead of complaining about lack of popularity, try to update more in the early stage to attract popularity.