My Disciple Is Far Too Diligent

It's quite good, but there are still some major flaws. It's true that humans can't learn from history! First and foremost, never set the world in a chaotic setting where martial artists kill indiscriminately and there are no laws. Such worlds are fundamentally devoid of order; everyone can buy anything for free, making commerce virtually impossible. Ordinary people are either slaves or parasites.

Why not kill or drive away those disciples with such low loyalty? In ancient times, a master was almost like a father. Disciples ate and used the master's food, and the master even taught them martial arts. The master treated his disciples so well, yet their loyalty was still so low. Why not get rid of these unfilial disciples and keep them around for the New Year?

The protagonist is a complete waste. He has the eighth level of True Qi, so many perfect martial arts and techniques, and his spirit has reached an extremely high level after consuming a strange purple flower. Yet, he has to rely on his cunning to kill someone with the same eighth or ninth level of True Qi, instead of crushing them fair and square. He can't even kill them without the Heaven-Slaying Sword. How useless do you think he is?

I've noticed a problem: the protagonist trains much faster, but his apprentices don't. They're being taught martial arts so quickly; how can they possibly master them?

Why didn't the protagonist take on more apprentices? He's wasting his cheat ability!

He doesn't expect a thousandfold return for a drop of kindness. What's the difference between Chen Yifan and an ingrate? Wouldn't it be better to just kill him and get a replacement? This kind of person is the first to betray you when disaster strikes.

As I watched, I felt the disciple was too "useless," and the main character was a stay-at-home mom. It's like a kindergarten teacher taking care of a large class of children. Besides causing trouble, she's practically useless.

Every time someone causes trouble during the day, I kill them at night. Once or twice is fine, but if it happens too often, even a fool would know it was you. Haha, why bother with a mask? I'll just kill them directly!

The writing is alright, but is it really interesting for the male lead to have a bunch of fake identities and show off?

Instead of complaining about a lack of popularity, focus on updating frequently in the early stages to attract more readers.