Doomsday Commander

Having only read the first 4 chapters, I would like to ask the protagonist what his background is, has he been exposed to firearms, and has he had any relevant training? Do you really think that someone without relevant training can accurately hit the target when using a firearm for the first time? I thought I was playing a game, so I chose the revolver. . . Well, let me simulate the fate of the protagonist for you. After the protagonist goes out, he wants to hunt zombies to obtain more resources. The protagonist encountered two lone zombies, so he sneaked around the zombies and tried to kill one with the revolver, then found a bunker and shot the other zombie. But the result was. . . . The first shot, due to the nervousness of using the gun for the first time, the recoil of the gun, and the moving target, successfully missed the target and missed the zombie. At the same time, the sound of the gun attracted zombies within more than 100 meters around. The second shot, because the protagonist was shooting at a moving target for the first time while in motion. . . Two minutes later, the protagonist hunted two zombies with great pains. However, the revolver only hit the zombie's torso once before being caught up, which had almost no effect. The two zombies were basically hunted by the protagonist with cold weapons. . . The good news is that the protagonist successfully hunted 2 zombies. Congratulations. The bad news is that the protagonist's revolver was so loud that it attracted a large number of zombies and was surrounded. Oh, by the way, during the hunting process just now, the protagonist was very unfortunate and was scratched by a zombie (Oh, what do you think? Why do some people think that all body armor can prevent cuts and stabbings? You don't have blades. What if you wear blades? What should you do with your limbs, so you need stab-proof clothing, my friend. In the end, why did you choose a gun and a military crossbow? Isn't it good? It has low sound and no recoil...)

It feels like the beginning is better than setting the protagonist to be writing game programs. It's too abrupt. It's okay to collect all the weapons. Later, I said that each one has a price and is named a war system. It directly feels like being discouraged. I know it's a cheat, but the transition is too awkward. My personal suggestion is to change it a little. . The third golden chapter is embarrassing.

[Recommendation] This is a Baobing-style novel with an apocalyptic theme and system elements. I personally prefer movies and novels with apocalyptic themes, so I save them as soon as I see the title and read the latest chapters in one go. The protagonist was a military fan before the end of the world. He personally created a folder that contained almost all military weapons and equipment for hundreds of years. He also uniquely set a pricing system for them with gold as the currency unit. The protagonist was also free enough. Give it to me. I laughed, haha🤣 As a result, what a coincidence, when the apocalypse broke out, it rained heavily, and then the protagonist accidentally stepped on the power cord and got an electric shock. Three days later when he woke up, the apocalypse had already come, and the original folder turned out to be the golden finger of the protagonist as a system. I made myself a gold finger or something, it's so interesting😆 [Work information] Book title: Apocalyptic Commander Author: Green Smoke from the Black Earth Type: Science Fiction·Apocalyptic Crisis Tags: Apocalypse, System, Explosive Soldier Style Status: Serialized (88,000 words) Recommended: ⭐️⭐ ️⭐️⭐️ [Highlights of this book] 1. Setting: The story takes place in a parallel world similar to the Earth, but it should be much larger than the Earth. After all, the empire where the protagonist lives alone has a population of 12 billion. It is conceivable how big the entire planet is, and the country where the protagonist lives is a country with an emperor and nobles. Speaking of such a setting, although the substitution is a bit awkward at the beginning, the advantage is that it avoids a lot of unnecessary troubles, which is also a helpless move. The author has good intentions... 😅 After the outbreak of the apocalypse, acid rain and the air are full of corrosive substances, but it seems to only target metal substances exposed to the air, so motor vehicles, weapons, etc., As long as they do not pay attention to maintenance, they will soon corrode and rust. At present, it seems that zombies can evolve. It is not clear whether they have crystal nuclei. However, in addition to eating people, zombies can also eat dead similar people to become stronger. Survivors: I am so miserable 😭 2. Plot: Before the apocalypse, the protagonist's parents were still alive, and he also had a younger sister who was studying in college. After the apocalypse, the protagonist lost contact with his parents, and only learned from his sister that his parents might still be alive. Alive, so the next plot will definitely revolve around increasing strength and saving parents and sister. As for the follow-up, just look forward to the author's imagination... 3. Plug-in: As mentioned above, the protagonist's golden finger can be said to be made by the protagonist, but for In order to better adapt to the end of the world, the system has also cleverly upgraded itself, so there are many surprises worth looking forward to, such as occasionally giving people a feeling of eating chicken, haha😆 In addition, the protagonist must consume gold, silver, jewelry, diamonds, etc. To redeem it from the system Changing various supplies, weapons, troops, and vehicles 😄😄😄 It's so ridiculous that I can't stop laughing... The protagonist digs a hole for himself and sets up obstacles, but he has to fill them in himself... So the protagonist starts a journey of finding gold and silver jewelry, killing monsters and upgrading in the doomsday. {"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New book trial reading"}

I'm really convinced. People always ask why they don't go to the gold shop. . First of all, the protagonist is initially in a second-tier city, which corresponds to the reality of at least one prefecture-level city. Gold shops and jewelry stores in cities of this level will not be placed casually in a corner. They must be in the business district or the inner ring of the city. According to the author's setting of a city with a population of over 100 million (I think this is a bit outrageous), the number of zombies in central areas such as business districts is definitely more than 100,000. It is normal for an accidental triggering of a million-level zombie tide. However, gold shops in big cities should not be thought of in the early stage. Logically speaking, gold shops in small towns can be planned, starting from the periphery, using war to support war, and slowly encroaching. But the main task of the protagonist in the early stage is to save people, so there is no time to do it slowly. Last point, don't think about building an elite team to break through at a single point. The risk is extremely high and the entire army can be easily wiped out. In the early stage, the protagonist does not have many troops at all, so he cannot bear the tossing and heavy weapons. Once surrounded, basically don't think about it.

Five of the six missing novels I read have come back, but you have not come back. How many years have you been preparing for Dawn of Justice?

It's hard to imagine the level of this author. He first sets a city where the protagonist lives with 170 million people, and then buys a gun. Did the author really read high school geography? The population density of 170 million people is a huge sea of ​​people. If nothing else, there are over 7 million people in Hong Kong. It's so crowded that you're just doing this for fun.

Goldfinger, which has this explosive force, was only a county-level force when it was released, or a mid-level force within the county level. It really suppressed the protagonist like crazy. I didn't encounter a gold store on the road, not even a jewelry store. It was so suppressed that I really had no reason to subscribe. I could stop my losses when I saw it on the shelves.

Don't mess around. You can tolerate typos and clichéd plots. Don't make some poisonous points. You, a leader with thousands of troops, are a poor woman, right? You want to write a female reporter to report for you and promote you, right? As mentioned earlier, many communications are broken, and now is a period of striving to develop and gain a firm foothold. If you write a story about penetrating the county and occupying a gold store, and then a wave of data riots, I will be happy to see it, but in the end, I wrote about a female reporter. . .

Intellectual novels, logic and rationality are too low, 10 years old routine

To tell a joke, I have to attack the gold shop by force, and I can't use my brain to think of other ways. So far, with this equipment, I can't even attack a gold shop in the city center with the number of people. How can I lure away the zombies in batches? Helicopters can find a way to parachute people to the upper floors of the shopping mall, build walls to block key entrances to the mall, and clear out the zombies in the mall. Is it possible that the zombies outside can still fly and fly in? Large troops can also clean up large-scale zombies in batches every day (build walls and fortresses at key locations to clean up zombies without risk)

After reading Chapter 20, I couldn't help but want to complain. The protagonist discovered very early that zombies can evolve, and the obvious feature is that they are fast. Especially the female zombie in Chapter 20. If she can't hit her head, she won't hit her torso? The impact of the bullet couldn't slow her down? And there are seven or eight people, and there is also a machine gun to focus fire? You have to be chased as embarrassed as 🐶 in order to show your talent and quick wit? You knew that zombies would evolve, but you didn't make an emergency plan in advance to deal with emergencies? It's okay if you don't have an emergency plan. Are you just fighting on your own? You fight yours and I fight mine, without unified firepower planning and command? Knowing that the road is far away and full of dangers, but still rushing forward regardless, that's the end of it. For example, there is no division of labor to deal with such fast zombies? Either forget about it and rush forward, or just fight randomly? Normally you don't think of any way to deal with it? Do you rely on improvised decisions when something goes wrong? Do you usually look for funds? Just wondering how to get home? What should you do if you encounter danger on the road? The protagonist's aura is glowing. What should I do if I find myself surrounded by corpses while walking? The protagonist's aura is glowing. What should you do if you encounter an evolved zombie on the road? The protagonist's aura is glowing! If you do this, let alone Wanli, every step you take is to survive from a desperate situation. The only thing that can keep you alive is the protagonist's halo!

I was so embarrassed that I almost got cancer. Really, the book of the end of the world has to be written by the great hero. The Holy Mother is a complete mess.

I have already tested the poison, the system talks a lot, and I have to imitate a cute girl and vomit three liters of blood.

I can't bear it when I see the listing part. Let me tell the people behind me. First of all, the author doesn't know anything about weapons and equipment. At most, he has played some games like chicken and knows a few classic weapons (98k and sand eagle are so fun when he sees them). A group of modern soldiers are holding two weapons. War and Cold War equipment, using the tactics of African warlords, relying on the intelligence system of the information age, to fight the wars of the cold weapon age, this is the current situation of this book. Secondly, the author does not understand the most basic principles of market transactions, and has no idea what a seller's market is. Such people are just like those from primitive tribes, and they are just short of I've been wronged and it's written on my face. Even if you go to the vegetable market and find a hawker, you will be better than him. Secondly, the protagonist is a semi-military fan and a game nerd, but I can't see that the protagonist has even the slightest understanding of the military. He is like a bandit. He doesn't plan anything, and he has no idea about logistics and logistics. The tactics are bullshit, and it is simply an insult to military fans. Finally, the author, you want to write this type of book. Almost no one wrote this kind of mindless and unpleasant article 10 years ago. It doesn't matter what you want. Even if you imitate the book "War Commander", I think you are okay. But what the hell did you write?

Old routines, old combat methods, always suppressing the protagonist's level. In order to show that the protagonist is powerful, the protagonist is given a regiment of 30,000 people. 30,000 People per day is equivalent to 3 divisions of the People's Liberation Army! Or 2 US military divisions! And the protagonist is too awesome, so the upgrade is extremely slow! And fighting with survivors, you provoked me several times and I only hit you when I couldn't stand it anymore! It's not as good as World War II when fighting! If you already have an armed helicopter, why don't you just go to the opponent's base and shoot Hellfire directly at the building where the opponent's leader is? Isn't it okay to just launch missiles from drones when the opponent is gathering? There are also zombies. I fought millions of zombies for several days. Those are zombies! Get together! One shot of 12.7*99 Can break four or five! In World War II, German machine gunners faced an American charge for nine hours and killed about 3,000-4,000 people. This was still a skirmish charge, not a zombie charge! Only 12,000 rounds of ammunition were used! The protagonist in the description seems to be impotent and wants to show off, but he can't do it even though the system gives him the strength to show off! Look at someone winning 30 million in the last days! The protagonist they describe is awesome even if they don't have any weapons. Their wooden spears and city walls can carry 100,000 rampaging zombies, and their rifles and machine guns can easily carry 300,000 and 500,000! People think that zombies will go berserk when encountering heavy rains, and they only come during the end of heavy rains and floods! Moreover, there are often super heavy rains, super high temperatures, super storms, and zombies can evolve. This will be the end of the world, and there will be fewer and fewer people! You see, when you write that these zombies are basically similar to ordinary people in the early stages, why are there only so few left? And just in the early stage, zombies stuck the door and killed them at will! Can you make them evolve? Whether it's zombies, survivors or the protagonist you write, they are all too weak.

We fell from the sky and stepped into hell with our feet

The style of writing and the story are as out of place as the Manchu relics

Shit is whatever you write about it. It's poisonous to death. It's a retarded writing style.

Pistol bullets are 0.1 Gold, and the gold price is 500 per gram. A cost-effective price of 50 yuan each. A 9mm pistol bullet actually sells for only 3 cents. Your system is 166 times more expensive than reality. A 1130 close-range anti-gun bullet actually costs 2,000 yuan. Your system is 166 times more expensive than reality, one bullet costs 667 gold, and the close-in defense gun fires 167 bullets per second. My country's gold reserves are 1,884 tons. It's enough for you to fight zombies for 4 hours, boy, just play and cherish it. It's extremely poisonous, I'll retreat first.

The familiar toll booth being stopped, the familiar long journey home to find someone... Why are the current red alert novels inseparable from these plots? It's just like an urban novel, right? 🙂

At the end of the world, in troubled times, pig's feet can still systematically build troops, but they are still playing politics with the so-called nobles? Shouldn't we just destroy them, grab resources, and build more soldiers?

After seeing the latest chapter, I found the concept to be pretty good, the plot is old-fashioned, and the writing is not detailed. The protagonist is immortal and is not afraid of death. A gentleman does not set up dangerous walls and handles all the plots himself. The co-author has a system and is not afraid of cold shots, right? It is now popular to say that the story of the protagonist of this article was poorly written ten years ago. Some people say that the author adapted it based on his previous works. It feels too original. He has brought his brains over from the past. It has been several years and there is no optimization at all. The look and feel is too inferior.

To be honest, the author has no military knowledge. It's written like a child playing house

Write less female characters and focus on telling stories. The starting point is misogyny and people who don't believe in love, including me.

Most apocalyptic novels these days are terrible, but this one is really different! As a new book by an old author, this book is solidly written and has no toxic settings. What is even more surprising is the end-of-the-world commander type. I think many people want to see this genre, but basically can't find it. After all, everyone knows the reason. Hey, now you can find it! ! !

Damn it, this book is a complete copy of an old book. It cannot be said to be exactly the same as the plot of Wasteland Commander, it can only be said that there is no difference. Are the standards for writing books so low nowadays? It's better to go to Tomato to see this, it's free there.

There is a book called Wasteland Red Alert Commander that was completed in July 2023. I can't say that the plot is exactly the same, but the outline is basically the same. I haven't seen much, but it's not much different when it comes to building a city. There's no such thing as a sniper killing the Zombie King in the river. What kind of alliances are there? Even one is Dawn City's Dawn Army, and the other is Chasing Light City's Light Chasing Army.

Hahaha, the male protagonist is so domineering! Interesting!

The author's three golden chapters are so well written. I also took the poison that Zhang Zhang gave me.

When those of us born in the 80s and 90s grow old, who will write about old game articles from more than ten years ago 😭