The Most Corrupt Official in Ming Dynasty

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How to say it? The writing in the first hundred chapters is really good, with top-notch coherence and no sloppiness. The description of people, events and other details is omitted, and it is really comfortable from beginning to end. I hope the author will keep up the good work.

Overall, the creativity and technique are actually great. Although the writing is not sophisticated enough, the story is good. However, after the author finished writing, it was obvious that he only read through it, proofread it and made slight revisions before publishing it. It is recommended that you pay a little attention to some narratives that can be deleted if they are related to the main plot or set up pits for the future. After all, not all the words need to be broken into pieces. Reading this book feels like eating a crab: it will take more time and you need to be patient, but the author has prepared all the tools. Just don't chew it for me and then feed it to me. This experience will not be good. But whether it's the double-line writing or the profile of Ye Qing through Zhu Yuanzhang's mood changes, it makes me feel very good, very much like reading a script. As for the fact that some readers are not used to the narrative and do not follow the perspective of the "protagonist", it is actually just a reading habit. Those who cling to this point are basically either black fans or self-righteous people, so don't pay attention to it. After all, there are many things they have never seen before. For example, diary narratives are uncommon and typical, but they are not new in movies.

I hate Zhu Yuanzhang from the bottom of my heart. He is the kind of person who can share adversity but not wealth.

In the early Ming Dynasty, only Lao Zhu's sons or relatives could survive. Most of the vassal kings in the early Ming Dynasty were arrogant, corrupt and perverting the law, living in a land of fish and meat. Impeachment reports are being held back everywhere. If you are forced to complain, you will be punished by alienating your loved ones. The most serious thing for the sons was to call them over and beat them up, and then kill the ones who complained.

It's so weird. I've read 58% of it, and it's over 700,000 words long. I haven't even finished the first paragraph of this novel, and there are over 700,000 words of a battle. It's really weird.

It's very easy to ask Lao Zhu to kill you, just click and scold him...

Zhu Yuanzhang must be captured. You said he has guards. How many people can he bring, dozens or hundreds? No matter how many people there are, it is not a caravan. As soon as a thousand crossbowmen or a thousand musketeers come out, he is not a superman.

What can't be killed? . . Wear a dragon robe and hang it on Lao Zhu's face every day to see if you die.

Isn't it easy to die? Your Majesty, I have been studying a delicacy recently. Please see, this is pig's trotters or pig's paws. Because of its spicy taste, it is called Ma Da Tiao. This thing is fat and thick, and can also be called pig fat.

Author, I would like to make some suggestions. I've been reading it, but I always feel like there's something wrong with it. One is that the pace is slow and the whole day is spent talking about Zhu Yuanzhang's psychological activities. I also understand Zhu Yuanzhang's anxiety when facing great talents, but it always makes people feel tired when he is always worrying about things in his mind. The second is that in this case, it is not too much, which leads to the feeling that the protagonist is being manipulated all day long, which is too little fun. It's over a hundred chapters now, and I haven't finished the first battle yet. And I hope the author has a good outline, so he can write very well.

Empty your brain and barely be able to read 🙂

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Zhu Yuanzhang: "I have a system, and the main mission is, if you don't kill Ye Qing, you will become an immortal."

Just charge for Chapter 33? No, you wrote Chapter 33 and then you wrote that Boss Zhu is here? What the hell? Ah? Are you crazy about being short of money?

It's not easy to die. He threatened Zhu Biao with a knife several times, even if Zhu Yuanzhang didn't want to kill you.

Why should a good person behave like a dog to Lao Zhu? Isn't it good to go overseas and become a king? Nanyang, Australia, or America

You're laughing so hard. If you just started a rebellion, you would have died a long time ago.

Just kill Zhu Yuanzhang's sons who like to do evil. I'll see if you die or not. In history, Zhu Chongba did not kill all the psychopaths.

Why are there so many traitors in this comment section? The Revolution of 1911 was not completely wiped out?

I estimate that in the first 200 chapters, Zhu Yuanzhang and Queen Ma may not be able to get out of Yanmen Prison! 🤫🤫

I saw this novel on Douyin, and came to Qidian. Com to give rewards to support the author. Although I did not spend money on reading books at the starting point. A one-time reward is a way to support the author. It is very well written. I have rarely seen such a book in recent years! Maybe I can't get there.

The author's writing style is very good. It's good enough for a new author. It's similar to other novels with other themes. The plot is not sluggish and the writing is very interesting. Great support for the author.

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This book is really chewy. Although he is a newcomer, his grasp of the plot so far is quite good. The protagonist's characterization is also very three-dimensional. I hope that the update speed can be increased and the article will not be unfinished. Even if your article suddenly takes a turn and travels to modern times in the second half, it should be able to be written well. Looking forward to the day when you finish the book, full subscription support.

I saw it on Douyin, it looks good, please write more

I finally made it to the top ten 😰

Really, I have to say, the writing got better and better in the later stage! The author has really made progress

Brother, please update more diligently, it's not enough to read 🤭

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