Global Job Transfer Game

I have some ideas after reading dozens of chapters. In terms of dungeons, it is really not recommended to write that long in the early stage. Generally, you are willing to read the dungeon after about 10 chapters. If it is too long, just pull it to the end and see the results. It would be easy to abandon the entire book if it were driven by copies. There will be a sense of disconnection between the copy and reality. Especially for some books, the copy does not advance the plot very much, which makes it too lazy to read the copy in the middle and late stages of the book. The setting is a bit messy. Looking at the skills now, it gives me a feeling that the combat power system will collapse later. There are so many professions that I really can't understand them, so it's better to try to clarify this part as much as possible.

The first copy was indeed a bit out of rhythm. There are too many settings explained, and the real plot has not unfolded at all. I immediately cut into the copy, which is still decrypted and still settings, a lot of settings... At the beginning of the chapter, it is better to let everyone have a sense of direction for understanding the protagonist... The settings can be laid out slowly, there is no need to be so hasty, it is so tiring to read now... I am tired of looking at the settings...

There are more than 30 chapters in the dream dungeon, and the description of this dungeon is messy and detailed. If this does not run through the main line or is a very important foreshadowing, it would be a bit of a waste of energy.

What can I say? The author's setting is good. It would be nice if he didn't focus on proving whether the five-attribute cultivators are strong or not, and the dream spirit, which seems to be a special profession but actually does not attract readers at all.

The setting is good, but the writing is too messy

The idea is really good, but too messy

I like the subject matter very much, but the plot is a bit unclear. Maybe I'm sleepy, so I'll put it on the bookshelf for a while and then kill it when it gets fatter.

Are you sure there are no contradictions in the settings? In the first few paragraphs, it was said that the core of the dream cannot be destroyed violently, otherwise it will be trapped forever. However, in the next few paragraphs, it was said that how to violently kill the core of the dream

It's not a failure at all, the author must work hard! Compared with some books that are written in a nonsensical way, this kind of plot with real feelings makes people more immersed.

The setting is great! There is a problem with the plot connection! It feels like an anticlimax!

The writing was a little rushed and a little messy. Others are fine. It just feels a bit complicated with all kinds of things stuffed together.

3033 To 3034... Where did the decade come from?

Not bad, but the quantity is small. Looking forward to the follow-up

There are too many professions and the writing is too complicated.

You can use a lot of space to describe the setting (if you think it's watery, just post it). The later things will be inexplicable.

Is the world before the protagonist's time travel normal? Is amnesia a thing of this world? It feels so messy!