Rebirth: Rewriting Youth

The first one actually received green tea. . I wrote it so indifferently at the beginning, thinking that I was really insensitive to tea thanks or that there were other twists and turns in the later stage. But this is the result? It turned out to be me who was licking the dog~. At the beginning, the writing was dull and I thought the protagonist would be the kind of character who would give up without complaining. He got a golden finger, got a pot of gold, and met a goddess who was attracted by his heart but had misunderstandings. I originally thought that he would choose to rise in his career during the four years of college. He would kill the gods and Buddhas and kill the Buddhas. In the end, he would defeat the Liumen and take back the most beautiful goddess. Before we even started to see how he was doing, he was competing with a green tea to see who could hold down the other in bed and couldn't breathe! ! It really felt like I had eaten a fly. . It would be better if you made it clear that the protagonist of Che Ma is just a philanderer. At first, he was so serious and a man, but when he was reborn, he was still playing with green tea. . Hey, as I get older, I can't even keep up with the times in reading! Goodbye

I quite like this kind of youth daily life, but nowadays people are very impetuous. You spent a few chapters writing about a life of failure. To be honest, it hurts my lungs because I am also such a failure. You can shorten it, or mention it when you meet people after rebirth.

This book may be written slowly, but I keep writing and will finish it. Thank you for your support.

I think Hanshuang will be the heroine, which is beyond my imagination. It's not like there are no natural beauties. If I have to find a complete one, there must be many people like me who can't accept this.

This book has all the bad points. It's cowardly and mediocre. Even if it's reborn, it's still a waste. It's the first time I've seen a reborn protagonist get a green thumb on his head.

Li Meng😃😃

There are two biggest negative points in this book. 1. The first girl is paired up too quickly. She has no emotional foundation and is just a prank. However, knowing that this girl is a bit of a money worshiper and writing such a green plot is disgusting. It is completely unnecessary to use this method to start the next harem. Money worshipers are the best to deal with. There was a possibility of being cheated on, so I was relieved at the first moment. I know you want to sublimate the nature of the money-worshiping girl here to show that she is not a good match, but the author please consider the readers. With so many scenes, it can be regarded as a sweet love. If you say no, it will not be there. It is better to set it as a nurturing nature from the beginning. Of course, other things do not matter. Except for readers who think that the protagonist is at risk of being raped, I only express my personal views. 2. When the heroine was in high school, she didn't have plastic surgery and didn't develop. She said she had to study hard and had no relationship progress. She wrote a lot of self-moving feelings. Then the heroine went to have plastic surgery to find the hero. As a result, the hero had a girlfriend, who was still in the room next to her. I'm so impressed. I'm convinced. To be honest, I can't take on the heroine's perspective. I can argue about being together for the rest of my life. Of course, the author thinks that all readers are very open-minded about relationships between men and women, so I can't help it. I just personally feel uncomfortable with it. The heroine can be average-looking, but there's really no need to go under the knife. I can't accept this at all.

It looks quite speechless, the heroine is actually a plastic surgery freak😑

I don't know why, but I can't stand it when I see Li Meng sleeping with me... It always feels a bit sudden It doesn't match the male protagonist's character...

Single heroine? So many female supporting characters and a single female protagonist?

After raising it for several months, why the hell did you just update more than seventy chapters?

After reading the introduction, I excitedly opened the comment section and felt half-hearted.

To be honest, I am a bit picky when it comes to reading books, but this book is already better than most on the website.

Some people say they look down on green tea. Green tea doesn't taste good, but it quenches thirst. Besides, for those perfect people, think about whether you are worthy or not. Who doesn't go from imperfection to perfection? Could it be that they can read and write after they are born? Is your whole life so perfect? Denying green tea is not denying the past or the imperfect self in the past. What breaks inward is pressure, and what breaks outward is growth. My past self failed to meet my own expectations, so I denied my past self. If you can't meet your expectations now, do you have to deny yourself now? Will self-complaint and self-pity solve the problem? How can we solve problems if we avoid them?

Xu Anzhi

The protagonist's father's family in the novel is definitely weird. First of all, Shen's grandfather can send his three younger brothers to school, but he can't support his son who is good at studying for another year. Shen's grandfather's three younger brothers are obviously supercilious, but Shen's father can still talk about family ties with them. Isn't this just funny? I don't know whether Shen's father is naive or cute. It may be due to genetic inheritance. The kind of people who are most afraid of when walking in the world are foolish and loyal, and they cannot understand their brain circuits. There is also the fact that Shen was reborn. How stubborn were you towards your father before you were reborn? The biggest problem is that Shen's father is the kind of person who is always tough-tongued. He is rigid and has a bad temper towards his own family. This is a typical player who is like a rat carrying a gun. This conflict is too contradictory.

After reading the first few dozen chapters, they are quite realistic, but there is no main line. The daily writing is too detailed and trivial, which seems to be unfocused; there are also too many women described. The current conditions of Pig's Feet are not super handsome men, nor are they very rich. How can there be so many women to follow you?

Can you write more plots about Hu Yiyi in the future?

What a pity. It suits my taste better.

....... Did you go in and step on the sewing machine?