I Am Lucky in the Lord Word Game

I am watching "I am in the Lord Word Game Lucky Laman", not "I am in the Lord Word Game Woman Laman"

I don't understand. The most taboo thing for new authors is emotional drama, because most authors from Qidian can't write it well! Even some great masters can't write well! Easily poisonous! It just so happens that some new authors just don't believe in evil! Just write it! Just write it, the data is not good anyway, everyone who reads it will run away, and it's not me who can't make any money! I just watch it for fun

The writing is good, but I suggest you write less about reality and less about emotional drama. Take my advice, the emotional drama is too deep for you to grasp.

It is recommended to write less emotional scenes, at least in the early stages. Originally, it is a niche subject that is mainstream, but if you spend so much time writing about a female supporting character or a female protagonist in just ten chapters, isn't this driving people away? At the very least, you should wait until most readers are interested before writing. Of course, it is not recommended to write if you cannot write well.

Don't write about reality, don't write about emotional drama... If you think there are too many people, just say, "Let's go," but don't be disgusting...

Usually new authors write about romance and women because the author is young, naive, and yearns for the stallion life and vulgar relationship routines, 💀

I don't know if I want to read it or not. I got hooked on Chapter 9... If you can't write about women, don't write. Emotional dramas are generally difficult to write... Sigh. I don't know if I can continue reading...

First of all, it was Xia Qianqian's chapter that made me so angry that I couldn't sleep. There are two main reasons for this poisonous story. One is that the author's writing is not good, and the other is that the plot is too blunt. Maybe the author wanted to write about the beauty of childhood sweethearts, or maybe it was more fun to be chased by a beautiful woman. But one who just regards her as a sister can't help but remind people of famous scenes such as "I just think of you as a brother" and "She is just my sister", which makes people feel sick. Moreover, Aunt Wang's appearance was abrupt. It would be better to add a reason, such as someone in the family being sick and wanting to get paid in advance. It's not very silky anyway, it feels fake and unreal. The author may not have sorted out the outline of reality well and the writing is confusing. I hope the outline can be reduced or sorted out.

After reading the first ten chapters, the first is the forum. What is the situation of the protagonist? It must be that not long after everyone started this game, why do everyone around them know about the treasure land, there are various discussions in the forum, and guilds are started. They have only entered the game for a few days, and already the selected players have adapted to become players at the speed of light. All guilds and administrations have been established. Is this reasonable? There is no reasonable explanation at all in this place (for example, in reality, someone has received some news a long time ago, how and why, but there is no explanation at all here. I don't believe that if there are really various guilds and the like, no news about this has been disclosed on the forum, and no one has discussed this issue, but it seems to be common sense. Everyone knows it, but the protagonist does not know, or the protagonist knows it but the readers do not know). If not everyone has just started this game, and there are veterans (players who have been in this game for a long time), then why is the protagonist looking around the forum today and there is no such thing as a beginner's guide? Do those veterans really don't care about the newbies? And what's going on with those old birds? Not at all. I feel that the whole plot is very abrupt. Although many things may be common sense, as a guide to the world view, is it not reasonable at all to introduce the world view of your book to readers? The second thing is the emotional line. Many people have said it, so I won't say much. I can only say that it is really embarrassing and stupid.

Um, in reality, I no longer want to read it since I joined the Alien Bureau. Since the author likes it so much, I will not subscribe. I wish the author will write better and better.

Chapter 10: Death from poison. The protagonist, the aboriginal, can just use the golden finger. He keeps talking about scientific practice, but the result is a waste of talent time and civilization points. Tell me what is the purpose of your experiment? Just to see if the extraordinary game is real? Didn't you say before that deleting the game, turning off the phone, and accepting the settings won't work? You can take out the package from the game, right? What else do you want to try? Do you have to waste resources just for the sake of "seeing is believing"? All fools know that resources are tight in the early stage, and good steel is used on the blade. If the author hadn't cheated, how long would this virtue have survived? If you insist on wasting resources to recruit something that you can easily verify using your brain, and still boast about your scientific spirit, you are an idiot.

Lord Wen, it's not impossible for you to mix in reality. But where are your lychees? Suddenly the screening started.

This writing is really outrageous. Let's not talk about the reality of backpacking. Just what you wrote in Chapter 7. We are writing about lords, not cities.

I really can't do without women everywhere, the key point is that it's so awkward to write

Are legendary heroes that weak? Are you tired of fighting hundreds of goblins? Isn't this setting unreasonable?

This thing actually made it to the celebrity column

The 20-year-old book fairy thinks your book needs major revision or else it won't be readable.

Everything was fine before the first sign, but this emotional description, whether it is the NPC or the real world, is really difficult to describe. If it doesn't work, let's concentrate on fighting for hegemony. Otherwise, this emotional description is too difficult to describe.

Well! I have saved up since it was released and have ordered 40 chapters. The quality is getting more and more impressive and I regret it a bit.

Stop subscribing after joining the Extraordinary Bureau

Chao Gai is a good man, everyone says so. Brother Lin Chong, since you recognize me as your brother, I will take you to the capital and kill Gao Qiu until he bleeds like a river! Fellow Taoist Zhao Ji, since you call me senior, I will give you this red umbrella white stem fleshy Ganoderma lucidum taken from the Yaochi Lake in Yunnan to make elixirs for you. Aguda, since you are willing to die to prove your ambition, then go ahead with peace of mind, your wife, I will support her! Toba Japanese King, since you kneel down and ask for surrender, why don't you surrender your country as soon as possible? Don't you know that Jun's father hasn't swallowed the meat on his lips yet and is very hungry? Haosan, I heard that you have made a fortune selling curry. The girl on her left hand has money on her right hand, and she races gods by the Ganges River. Then double the gold and silver tribute. Why don't the Western barbarians kneel down when they see the miracles of the East? A piece of knee is missing and the legs cannot be bent straight? Then cut it open, crush it, and let me take a look at it for you! Don't thank me, I'm just a good person who likes to smash people to pieces. Chao Gai was sitting on the top of Weiyang, facing the morning sun, bathing in golden light, and welcoming all nations to come to court. Suddenly, a big book that was thousands of miles long fell down overwhelmingly, and the pages were opened to reveal a line of large characters: ... "Water Margin of Destiny" occupied precious land for publicity.

🌿, I just discovered the eunuch after watching it! 😡