A Hundred Lifetimes on the Path to Immortality

Now I've seen people who are 6 years old and 1.5 Meters tall, and there's nothing abnormal about it.

After seeing the fourth life, after growing up so fast, I really feel uncomfortable with it. I really want to speed up the plot. If you write it, will you die in a few years? Every life grows up so fast, it's so annoying.

The author is stubborn, insisting that the whole three-year-old and five-year-olds look like other teenagers. Does the protagonist's practice of martial arts at the age of three and the martial arts at the age of thirteen have any impact on the plot? You write like this and readers will question it in the chapter review. Then you go and explain it to the readers in the chapter review. There are a lot of things. Maybe you say that people will abandon the book without reading a word for a long time. You write novels to let more readers see it, so that readers will think that your writing is good and subscribe to your book, instead of arguing with readers. If they find the next book with a swipe of their hand, why bother if you lose a reader.

When I first wrote about the height, I considered the readers' concerns about the protagonist's height. But then I checked the information and confirmed that there are indeed people who are so tall who dare to write this. And the most important thing is that they don't suffer from gigantism, they just grow fast. I didn't exaggerate the height of the protagonist in the first life, he just grew faster than ordinary people. The second life is an exaggeration because I have stated that the protagonist is extremely talented, born with supernatural powers, and has excellent martial arts qualifications.

I have to say that the book is really good, but the height is too unreasonable. You can say that you are six years old and 1.4 Meters, but it is too unreasonable to be taller. After all, you grow so fast in front, what should you do in the back?

Momojiji has more than 300,000 words and I haven't started cultivating immortality yet.

It's really well written, and it's a good book. The setting of martial arts is also very reasonable: the master of martial arts is compared to the late stage of Qi training, and the Baodao realm is compared to the foundation building stage. It's not like some novels where the great master of martial arts in Invincible World steps into the world of cultivation and is chased by a first-level qi-training novice for several days and nights! Almost made me burst out laughing

There are more masters in rebellion than in big cities. What the hell is the setting? Why is it not better to do something like rebellion than to get a salary if you have this ability?

It is written about immortals, and there will only be warriors and immortal cultivators Warriors are divided into: Unqualified Third-rate (good players) Second-rate (experts) First-class (strong) Xiantian (top combat power) Grandmaster (the pillar of a country) Inner elixir (fierce) Cultivation of immortals It is divided into: Qi refining (you can fight Xiantian in the early stage of Qi training, and you can fight Grandmaster in the later stage) Foundation building (combat power is approximately equal to the warrior's inner elixir) Golden elixir (theoretically the inner elixir warrior is in the same realm, but in reality it is far superior in terms of lifespan, combat power, and means) Nascent Soul (Gaga Meng) Plot: In the first life, the protagonist lived for two months and died of drought. In the second life, the protagonist was not born and died of drought. The first two lives were all written in one stroke. Only in the third life did I start writing normally. In this life, I wrote a little bit of farming, a little bit of cultivation, and a little bit of fighting. Mainly for the purpose of accumulation in the 4th life. The main focus of the fourth life is fighting, with extremely talented warriors killing everything. It can be understood as Chen Feng, the warrior protagonist of "Apostle of the Stars". In the fifth life, the protagonist should travel through time and become a prince, the son of the prime minister, or something like that. This is also the main focus of cultivating immortals + farming The sixth life will only focus on cultivating immortals.

This book follows the accumulation route. In fact, it has a good intention, but there is a problem with the focus. The pace in the front can be accelerated. For example, if you are engaged in business at the beginning, just mention it. There is no need to write in such detail. Also, in the end, you will switch to cultivating immortals. I think the author's intention is to start with martial arts. Once you have strong strength in the novice period, you can then go to cultivating immortals. The Qi training period may be more comfortable, so the focus should be here. The world of martial arts will be as fast as possible