After She Left the Team, They All Regretted It

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This kind of writing is difficult to write. There are too many problems to be solved, and if they are not handled well, they will be poisonous. Why neither the protagonist nor the team knows the protagonist nb. Why kick the protagonist. Why regret it. What kind of characters do the protagonist and the team have to achieve this result? Do readers like this kind of character? How to form a new team. How the old team interacts. Do readers like the plot?

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After watching it, I feel so speechless. I don't even know how to rate it. The protagonist's emotions are too swinging and I can't understand what it is.

No, it's okay for a genre that was eliminated at the cat station next door to come to the starting point for a renaissance.

The author has never been in contact with girls or has never been in love.

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Actually, it's okay to portray Lilia as a yandere. After all, yanderes are the kind of people who can do whatever it takes to get the person they like. Otherwise, there would be no saying that liking a yandere is a story and being liked by a yandere is an accident. You started by asking Lilia to frame the protagonist and added a preface to the text. Lilia said to the protagonist that I really like you, I really want you, so I'm sorry, brother... This kind of foreshadowing words, of course, means this. How to modify it well depends on the writing style, so that people know the origin of the frame-up, so that it will not make people feel uncomfortable and hit their heads, and also allow the protagonist to be mentally prepared. I mean, let the readers easily see Lilia's yandere character, and see that the feelings are different from what you said directly. It's not surprising for the yandere to do anything, which will make it easier for people to accept. Then we can clean up the yandere, find the protagonist to apologize, give some sweeteners, improve the protagonist's grievances, make some demands, and then say you don't want this matter to be told by me. I'm giving you some benefits. You can't just come. Asking the protagonist to do this and that, I feel that just because of slander, I can eat the protagonist to death. After all, yandere is always very extreme to the people he likes and also very humble. For example, the yandere in Cupid Chocolate is extreme, but he is also very humble to the male protagonist, which makes people have a desire to protect Anyway, it is really difficult to write characters like yandere. Either don't write it or look at how other people write yandere.

It's almost 70 chapters, and it turns out that the team regrets very little. If you write about regretting quitting the team, at least follow the theme... What kind of novel do you write? You should at least focus on it. It may be the author's first time writing a book. . . I feel like you can still train yourself more. .