I, the Necromancer, Build a Self-Destruction Army with My Bare Hands

The beginning is too long, there are no surprises, and there is no desire to read further.

The updated version is almost finished. The author's idea is very good, adding some elements such as game, inheritance, system, etc., But it does not have a complete structure. And in terms of attraction, there is nothing attractive in the first three chapters. The plot is very abrupt. From a place similar to a small county town in the countryside, to suddenly being transported to a big city. The technology is very abrupt, and there are also some contradictions in the details. For example, the job transfer in Chapter 11 says that most people's job transfers are loans. However, after joining the team in Chapter 25, no one in the team has a loan system. If there is really no loan system, how did most of the people he mentioned know about it? If so, why didn't his squad have one? This is an obvious bug, and then there is the latest update about the city's rulers. The author's description of the apocalyptic environment is very good, including the despair and helplessness. But in such a desperate world, and a world where force is evident, the author describes the high-level figures as a bunch of losers. This is a very confusing thing. At the very least, they have to be described as useless trash with force. The above only represents the personal thoughts of this reader. If it's useful, that's better. If it's not, just take a look at it for fun (●°u°●)​"

Has anyone seen my book and would like to say something...

The above introduction reads that the essence of the undead lies in violent troops and pollution, and it prefers cooperation in the later stage.

🔥Every time you level up, you can explode troops exponentially. Ancestor summary: As a weak necromancer, the protagonist can only summon skeleton soldiers with one hand, but his skeleton is weaker than him, but the advantage is that the skeleton soldiers are immortal. Everyone in this world has a game system. There is an attribute panel, where you can check attributes and add points. The operation is completely similar to online games, and it feels a bit like playing a first-person [World of Warcraft]. The protagonist's professional ability is low and he can only rely on picking up missed upgrades to gain a few system attribute points, strengthen himself, and strengthen the skeleton soldiers. It is worth mentioning that the number of summons of the protagonist increases exponentially Until one day, the protagonist sees a piece of equipment, similar to a bomb, with the function of self-destruction. The protagonist realizes that the game is simple. Undead skeleton soldiers, go up and send them. The protagonist cheers and shouts 666. 1️⃣Recommendation: ⭐️⭐️⭐️ 2️⃣Work information: Book title: I, the Necromancer, build a self-destruction army with my bare hands Author: Ten Toe Code Article Number of words: 6 W (Serial) Tag: Summon Undead Skeleton Game 3️⃣Tweet: Point 1: The protagonist's current level can only summon skeleton soldiers through corpses. As the level increases, he may be able to summon bone dragons. Point 2: This is a world with Warcraft and monsters, a bit fantasy, you can see colorful magic, and many other different professions. Point 3: The gameplay of killing monsters and upgrading is just like playing online games. After killing monsters, you get skill points, equipment, materials, and levels. {"TopicId":"858522342837256192","TopicName":"Ancestor of Five Poisons"} {"To picId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New book trial"} 🔥🔥👍👍Click on the avatar and ⭐️follow the book list.

Let me tell you, this book is a mess, no background is explained, and the beginning is a poisonous forced conflict. I barely read the beginning and couldn't stand it.

I've almost finished reading it, but the writing is a bit dark. In the end, the protagonist is probably the only light in the world. To be honest, the author is tired from writing, and the readers are tired from watching it. The few relaxing moments are actually the fights in the Linghu base.

Someone is watching. But this is the amount you need. Don't be too hasty.

The battle in the first chapter and the far-fetchedness of the second chapter resulted in not much motivation to read further.

I have a tendency to get sick during this time. After reading the good books on the ranking list, I began to feel that what I wrote was bullshit. The thought of scrapping and cutting books appeared out of control. Anxiety it tortures me. Look at others, the first chapter is fast-paced and the plot is concise and tense. Looking at my own, it's so embarrassing that I can deduct three bedrooms and one living room. God, give me a good idea! I want to write a good book!