The Ultimate Immortality: Liver Experience Begins from Breathing

The idea is good, but the protagonist is too boring. Don't kill when it's time to kill. Yes, it's true that the protagonist doesn't owe them anything. Let me tell you, I first destroyed the entire Shi Village, and then I destroyed Shi Wei, a mere first-grade warrior. It's easy to kill you, just a little villain who just won't kill you and has all kinds of conspiracies and tricks. Haha, let me say: Don't worry about dynasties, emperors, yamen, etc., Just use all your strength, as long as you have enough strength. Not to mention warriors, even princes, generals and ministers will all die. Moreover, the background of the protagonist is: a world of cultivation in which thousands of great powers are attributed to oneself, rather than a real world without extraordinary beings. In the cultivation system, individual power can destroy the world, not that the power of the group is greater than the power of the individual.

It's a good book in terms of setting. What a pity. The writing is useless. . . Before I had no strength. Just install it hard. Hey, just play. The villains all sensed a threat. Just don't kill the protagonist. Just play. Just keep the protagonist by your side and wait for the protagonist to develop. Where is the protagonist? Even though he is not strong enough, he is just playing around. All kinds of exercises are done in front of the villain. What kind of murderous intent was directed towards the villain. Just play. . . Really vomited

It is true that it is never too late for a gentleman to take revenge after ten years. The problem with this book is that it does not explain how big the strength gap between the protagonist and Shi Wei is, and whether Shi Wei can be killed by force. Just because I didn't know, I felt anxious about why the protagonist wasn't killed yet, and then I waited and waited. In the end, there was no sign after more than 40 pictures, which was very annoying. After all, the hatred of killing the father and mother and domesticating the original owner is too great, so I want to see it solved as soon as possible and enter the next unit.

The author originally wanted to write a cool article, but it just made people uncomfortable, so he gave up.

The biggest poisonous point of this novel is an enemy who should be easily dealt with. He refuses to deal with it and insists on leaving it until the last one to kill. In ancient times, unlike modern society, surveillance is everywhere. In ancient times, it was so easy to kill a person without being charged with a crime. How many people support a police officer if he is not a head catcher? ? Don't tell me you killed him. Will the people who support him desperately avenge him? ?

The logic is flawed. A head catcher has become a symbol representing the yamen across the country. There are various reasons for not wanting to kill him openly. I am afraid that I will be wanted by the Yamen and be on the run. Why do you say it was a flaw? Not to mention the status of the head catcher, let's just say... If the yamen were really that powerful, there wouldn't be so many killers and robbers who committed murder and arson, let alone fringe forces like the black market. This is also true. A small role, so much to write. The head catcher is just a minion, but the protagonist is repeatedly verbose and suppressed repeatedly. It can be said that the unhappiness has accumulated to an extreme... Good luck.

Not killing the enemy? It's not interesting, give up

This book has not been changed much at the beginning. Basically no one clicks in, they just read the front and then run away.

The setting is good, but the content is very familiar. I can't remember which book I applied it to, but that's not the point. You can set it up with better content! This familiar content is poisonous. The author of the new book, if you don't write something more enjoyable and write something more poisonous, do you want to enter the palace?

It's a pity. It was originally a good book, but a small villain in the early stage has not been killed after dozens of pictures. He could have been killed without killing him.

A revenge plot has been copied dozens of times and it hasn't ended yet.

There is a golden finger. To put it bluntly, even if I can't offend him in the early stage, it would be great if I hide in the mountains and come out to crush him with my strength. I have to grind and worry about this and that. Even a little head catcher (who hasn't even been promoted yet) Karami can write dozens of chapters.

The same ninth-grade pig's trotters are still dual cultivators. Why don't they take revenge? ? Drag it around

Is the author going to write this little villain until it's on the shelves?

As long as the protagonist lives, the enemy can live as long as the protagonist takes revenge. He still has to wait ten years.

It's so boring, the plot of a novice village lasts dozens of chapters

Many people in the comments mentioned the problem that the protagonist was reluctant to take revenge on the killer in the early stage, and felt that it was necessary to explain it. 1. The protagonist is not strong enough. This is the most fundamental reason. He can directly kill Shi Kun, and then what? On the run? When he is on the wanted list, not only Shi Wei will mobilize his strength to pursue him, but many warriors who are looking for merit and silver rewards will also join the pursuit. Does the protagonist really want to be quick and put himself in a desperate situation? And you still can't wait for a month or two when your own strength is not enough? He must kill, and he must kill happily, but he will not arrange it until the protagonist is strong enough to kill Shi Wei. It was written right away... In this way, even if the protagonist wants to flee, he must kill the dog and his son first, instead of just killing Shi Kun alone. 2. Why doesn't the protagonist hide and come out after practicing enough? Those with limited cultivation resources can accumulate resources faster and improve quickly by relying on the county. Moreover, the mountains are turbulent in the early stage and the protagonist is not strong enough. How to get there? There is no detail in the early stages of the book, but it will be mentioned later... After the turmoil, the protagonist caught Shi Wei at the critical moment when he was promoted to the head catcher, and did not dare to go too far with him, so he did not need to escape. It was not bad to make a fortune from fishing, but it also caused trouble for the enemy, wasn't it good? Of course, it's also possible that I don't have enough writing skills to write out this logic. 3. Based on everyone's feedback, I also realized that the foreshadowing was a bit long and the hatred was a bit high. On the contrary, the protagonist was slow to act, which made the viewing point unpleasant. I designed a lot of small buffers in the middle, but it seems that the effect is not very good so far. This is a problem with my writing ability. I also admit that I can only try to avoid it later. 4. This article is a refreshing article. It does not overwhelm the protagonist or abuse the protagonist. Please feel free to read it.

Actually the book is pretty good. The author's main problem is that Shi Wei's identity and strength are not highlighted. The protagonist is worried about the skin on his body, but the author wrote it. . . . It is necessary to introduce the resistance of the officialdom as the protagonist without actually bringing the government into it. He is obviously a powerful figure in a county but behaves like a security captain. This is the contradiction. The problem in the comment area is that they only want to read mindless cool articles and game-like writing. Some of them are reasonable, and some of them are purely. . . Take your time and read more books by similar authors

Will the protagonist kill him so easily in the future? It's not ruthless enough. In the future, the plot of the father and son can be kept until the finale. For example, you can refine a soul-gathering sail, kill the father and son, and put their souls into it, and tell them that the glory and wealth you enjoyed when you were alive will have to be repaid a hundred times a thousand times a billion times after your death. As long as I don't die, you can achieve a different kind of immortality. It's great. Repaying evil with kindness can also allow them, father and son, to gain immortality.

So is the Shi family an aristocratic family or a dynasty?

Killing without decisiveness

It was originally a good subject, but revenge was too boring. It was just a small enemy who was repeatedly drawn into more than 60 pictures. It was easy to write like this. I couldn't stand it until I saw you take revenge, so I gave up the book.

What a waste. Did you buy those labels with money?