Hogwarts: This Wizard Is Not Scientific

The protagonist has been emphasizing that he does not regard himself as a member of this world or a member of the wizards. Repeatedly stating how stupid and short-sighted other wizards are, how smart he is and not wanting to play with them, and repeating this point of view to every new elder he meets? ? Does the author think it's fashionable to write this way? I tolerated it in the past, but after more than 500 chapters, I was still repeating that I didn't take the people of this world seriously. I am from country x, so I don't care much about the presence of dementors in this world? ? Does the author think that this will increase the reader's sense of involvement? Not at all! ! Is the group of my family and lovers not as important as a group of strangers not mentioned in the whole article? The whole logic is so messed up that I can't stand it anymore.

After reading the first 100 chapters, the male protagonist's ambiguous attitude towards the female protagonist was obvious. I thought there was a clear emotional line. Is the author afraid of being scolded and did not dare to write? In this case, I'm afraid it's not like most HPs, who don't write love lines in the third grade, but suddenly have a confirmed relationship at the Goblet of Fire dance. I have seen this routine too many times. What stands out is that it is rigid and makes interpersonal relationships too cheap. Childhood sweethearts have grown up naturally. No problem at all. I don't understand why China Unicom is being criticized.

Author, can't you change the introduction of your work? To be honest, I read this book four or five times, and every time I saw that it was about blind dates for professors, I crossed it out...

On the one hand, the protagonist said that he wanted to be content and let Harry deal with Voldemort, but in the first year, he frantically interfered with the progress of the plot, and directly ruined the original plot. He was not afraid of playing himself to death, claiming to be an adult, looking down on other young wizards, treating everyone else as NPCs, repeatedly emphasizing that he was an adult, and his attitude towards Hermione, did he really want to make readers think that the protagonist was smelting copper? There are also some plots about the game with Dumbledore, which is simply inexplicable. When you first enter school, you have just started to learn the theory and jump directly to the origin of magic. It is as outrageous as an elementary school student writing a doctoral thesis, and the Dumbledore in the novel is also a stereotype. It is really too poisonous. And reading other comments, these problems are not solved in the later period, but the poisonous points are getting more and more. In short, run away

Two points, one is to write a fanfic, but if you don't participate in the plot, why write a fanfic? Second, the magical issues that the protagonist is thinking about are very funny. A young wizard who has just learned about the magical world wants to study magic issues in depth when he knows nothing about it, just like a primary school student who wants to write a doctoral thesis. Isn't it funny? If the protagonist was educated by a magic master like Grindelwald from an early age, it would be fine, and he would have a certain foundation, but this is not the case in the setting. In this case, it would be weird not to kill himself if he randomly studies the will of the mind or even black magic.

You can complain to the author or not. First of all, the protagonist is too lonely. He has no like-minded people. Hermione is just a tool used by the author to cover up that the protagonist is a lone wolf. The protagonist does everything alone. The great cause of becoming a god is just you. To be honest, this routine is outdated. The protagonist has a personal profile of a loudspeaker, and Voldemort's affairs are leaked to Hermione and Isa at any time. These tool people cannot play a role in promoting the plot at all, but there is no real supporting role to take over. If you continue to write like this, you may become a chopstick. The road will become straighter and narrower, and it will become more and more dull without ups and downs.

Withdrawn, personally don't like it. In 90% of Harry Potter fanfics, the heroine must be Hermione, and then she talks nice and works hard to learn magic, but the result is still the same. Personally I don't like writing that is too soft.

The writing is very good and the reading is smooth, but one thing is outrageous. From Hermione's perspective, the protagonist is just a schoolmate who studies together every day. Why does everyone, including Dumbledore, think Hermione is the protagonist's girlfriend? Moreover, when others say it in front of the protagonist, the protagonist simply acquiesces, and a greasy feeling comes over his face. Every time I read this scene, I feel like I am watching a youthful and beautiful idol drama and suddenly find out that the male protagonist is Zhang Han...

It is recommended to change the setting of the transfiguration principle. Wizards' transformation skills are all idealistic. To transform a needle, you still need to know the ingredients, so shouldn't biochemistry and physics be prerequisite subjects for transfiguration?

Only fools help Harry and the others. The protagonist and his family have no blood feud with Voldemort. At most, if Voldemort is resurrected and goes to live in another country, he will not be deliberately hunted down. If the Order of the Phoenix wins and comes back happy, but if it loses and the situation is stable, they can come back or simply live in a foreign country. If Voldemort wins, at best, someone else will rule the world. Voldemort is not a murderer. He will live the same life after he rules the world. There is no guarantee that wizards will live a better life.