Don't Confiscate My Citizenship

This book is one of the few that made me feel comfortable. Every character is very unique. But to be honest, I don't understand Thalia as the heroine, and I don't understand what the author wants to portray her as. The image of the wise, elegant and strategizing protagonist set up in the entire book falls apart as soon as Thalia comes here. Do you think she is worth it? Apart from feeling disgusted with the heroine, I don't see the proper relationship between the male and female protagonists at all. Do you think the author can't write? There is nothing wrong with Xiubao and Sig. Why, why? I even suspect that the author has changed. He has become a novice since returning to Nandalu. Many links even have unclear meaning. It feels like jumping from a different world fantasy to a suicidal romance novel? Please read it twice after you finish writing it. Does the protagonist really like Thalia? These two people were completely forcibly brought together by the author. Do they have a reason to like each other? Why can't they be treated as partners or friends? I know that the author has a strange obsession with Princess Ganmo, but the plot is too weird and the reading is too disgusting. It makes me feel like I am watching a disgusting idol drama on Mango Channel. I begged you to change it, and at least I ordered it in full. I have been enduring the discomfort while watching it, thinking that it will return to normal in the future. Now I just feel very disappointed. 😐

This work is considered a specialized novel, with the protagonist's various outrageous actions as the core attraction. In order to highlight the protagonist's actions to the greatest extent and make the protagonist's actions valid, the rationality of the supporting characters' actions and the storytelling of the plot are sacrificed. Just like a table with eight dishes all filled with cream cakes, they feel delicious when you first eat them, but you feel tired after eating them in one go, but you want to eat them again after a while. It's not enough to catch up on it all at once, but it's good to read parts of it every once in a while as a pastime.

First of all, apart from the label deliberately affixed by the author, the male protagonist is a person who considers himself to be upright, not constrained by means, and has a strong desire for manipulation. He has his own set of rules, and his skin is flawless. It can be said that he is a born politician. In reality, he is an extremely sinister and terrifying smiling tiger. Consistent, the motivations given by the author are mostly related to interests and rights. For example, after falling in love with being the principal after the Corridor of Purgatory, for example, the purpose of saving Hyperion in the first place was the main plot hidden behind it, etc. Of course, since the standards he set for himself include "morality", he would still save Hyperion for no other reason. So in order to downplay the negative characteristics of the male protagonist such as being sinister and low-end, the author dramatized and absurdized most of the male protagonist's "inappropriate" operations. Specifically, it repeatedly emphasizes that the male protagonist is "born", "abstract" and "not a human being", replacing more serious and real evaluations such as "insidious" and "cunning" that the people around him should have, making Leziren readers more enjoyable. In the book, except for the protagonist, all the characters have clear goals and behave uniformly without concealment. There is no character wearing human skin like the protagonist. As a result, the male protagonist is as unscrupulous in this world as if he was frying fish in a novice village.       ""，，—— Everyone can think about it, as a person in the play without God's perspective, what do the characters around the male protagonist think of the male protagonist? Chapter 373 The male protagonist immigrated from a poor place in two months and reached a status similar to that of a "governor". No matter what kind of character he used to show, there is no doubt that he is an extremely talented and extraordinary person. Normal people should admire the male protagonist's talent, be afraid of the male protagonist's methods, and re-examine their prejudices against him. But when the Maomao store manager saw that the male protagonist was rising steadily and had the opportunity to run for president, his reaction was "He is so abstract" and "I can't accept it." This makes all the characters close to the male protagonist appear to despise the male protagonist's ability and ignore the male protagonist's status.       ，，，，，，  However, the problem lies in Chapter 376. In order to re-enact the drama of a hero saving a beauty, the author asked Hyperion to say in front of reporters, "I think it would be better for him not to be the president." This caused a conflict between Hyperion, who thought the male protagonist was "abstract", and passers-by who admired the male protagonist. It clearly shows the irrationality of the idea that the male protagonist is "abstract" - Hyperion, who has always been by her side, never realized the value and status of the male protagonist. This also bursts the entertainment bubble and points out the existence of the "abstract" filter. What's even more outrageous is that even so, Hyperion still failed to take off the filter, taking the male protagonist as a matter of course and lucky, and never thinking about the possible changes in the relationship brought about by the improvement of the male protagonist's status.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                   <   It has been emphasized many times before that "we must let Hugh hold back the male protagonist" and "Mao Mao is ashamed of Hugh for not being able to hold back the male protagonist." In addition, the drama of the hero saving the beauty directly puts the psychological problems of the president and Hyperion, who are popular among the people, on both ends of the scale. The reason is still the "abstract" filter of the people around him. They turn a blind eye to the leadership affinity shown by the male protagonist, ignore other people's respect for the male protagonist, and stubbornly and firmly believe that the male protagonist is harming others. Some book friends may want to refute me and deny the existence of the "abstract" filter from the perspective of the story. They may say: "Huberlian didn't want to lose the male protagonist as his supporting partner, so she said she didn't want the male protagonist to become the president." Hyperian is not a strong or willful person. She should be very clear about the kindness of the male protagonist to her. Due to the experience of being excluded, she should also cherish the hard-won care of others. When she realizes that the male protagonist may become the president, may become someone who is unattainable to her and is not in the same world, she should go to the male protagonist privately to ask questions, or hold back her sadness in her heart. Rather than carelessly saying in front of reporters: "I don't think it's better for him to not become president." It's more like she didn't realize what the male protagonist's high status meant, and simply thought that the male protagonist was causing trouble, not to mention the "you finally recognized me" that seemed to be taken for granted in Chapter 377.

"We should not completely deny a person because of his past mistakes, because he may just have gone the wrong way, and people will always change." "At this moment, she is no longer the heinous Bishop of Destruction Ivanos, she is just an ordinary citizen of Posen, Inoan, a hero who sacrificed for the people of Posen." "Without her, We will not win this war so easily, and her merits should be remembered by everyone." "If I had to sum up her life in one sentence, it would probably be the last sentence she said before leaving." "Let future generations judge the merits and demerits of my life."

I like this work very much. Although my title and title make this statement less convincing, I still want to say that I like this work. First of all, here are my favorite points: 1. Character design The characters of the three heroines are very lovable. Girls are cute in their own ways. The author uses the most straightforward way to write about the lovely characteristics of the three girls, presenting three very pure characters. I found that the three characters described by the author are difficult to dislike, and no matter whose character they are, I can accept them. Pure loveliness, no bells and whistles, no green tea, no roses, no vase, no Madonna. Maybe it's because I've read too many messy and inexplicable books recently, but this treatment definitely made my eyes shine. I even think it would be perfect if it stopped at three heroines and didn't add too many roles for any female characters. Because with my shallow and tiny brain, I really can't think of a way for the heroine to appear that makes me feel comfortable at this stage. If I have to make an analogy, the ingredients in this dish are exactly what I like. Adding more may make me feel bored. Now is the time to think about seasoning and heat. 2. Character Arc This is a concept in script writing, and I think it is also applicable to novels. Character arc refers to the character's personality changes after experiencing events, which can be an upgrade, a downgrade, or a deepening. For example, in "Watchmen" Rorschach's character changes before and after the tragic death of a little girl. Generally speaking, key characters in a script must have a character arc. I think that in very long online novels, the changes in character arcs should be subtle. This change spans dozens or hundreds of chapters before it finally comes to fruition. If the transition is too fast, it is likely that readers (mainly me) will not be able to keep up, causing confusion. From this perspective, the character arcs of the three heroines are also relatively successful, especially Xiubao. As a character who appeared in the early stage, her core character setting has not changed, but her character has undergone a very soothing but not abrupt change after experiencing repeated adventures with the protagonist. This curve is very comfortable (mostly for me). The character arcs of the other two heroines also feel very natural and unobtrusive. This is mainly reflected in the attitude towards the male protagonist. This subtle change is skillfully hidden in the details between the lines. I like this treatment very much. I've really been reading a lot of Toxic lately, and this novel definitely stood out to me. Following the above content, I would like to talk about a slightly worrying point. This concern mainly revolves around the male protagonist, as well as his personality and character arc. The divine part of the male protagonist is overplayed in the character design, and he has a tendency to be a tool man (mainly from my own feeling that he is irresponsible, bold, full of imagination, shallow, and has a walnut brain). I think there are quite a few "main characters" whose "divine" part is emphasized, such as Jason in "Friday the 13th", or Leatherface in "The Texas Chainsaw Massacre", or other characters who specialize in killing people in horror movies or TV series. Of course, what these characters are amplifying is the complete opposite of divinity. I will compare these characters with the protagonist of this book, because I think that from a certain perspective, these characters have something in common. Some of their non-human parts are exaggerated, making it difficult to reflect the character's own personality, or the character's own personality will be directly partially missing. Such a character cannot become as full as the three heroines mentioned above. He has no desires or demands, or his demands are too great, which makes him somewhat hollow. The detached character has the same way of thinking as a "psychopath". This interesting approach temporarily covers up the shortcomings of the magnified divine part, but this is only temporary. The character arc will gradually bring it to light. If the divinity is overstated, the character arc will not be able to fluctuate. Let us recall the protagonist's original character: a time-traveling beauty. Break away at the beginning and use the law to cleverly solve the problem. This is undoubtedly eye-catching. However, as the plot develops, the author seems to be overly pursuing the external interesting parts of a protagonist and missing the inner exploration and shaping of the character. He is neither sad nor angry nor sad, and has no emotions or desires. It's like a hollow clown puppet on the stage with many interesting settings added to it. I didn't see the same character arc as the three heroines at all, or the author was constructing a path to becoming a god, which is the process itself. But, doesn't this protagonist have to have emotional scenes with the three heroines in the future? However, I am not the author after all. I just expressed my vague concerns. At the same time, I also hope that the author will give me an amazing way to deal with the plot in the end.

Finally finished reading it. The plot is very coherent, the characters are well portrayed, the emotional lines are also very good, there are no poisonous points, the plot is satisfactory, and the ending is happy. The people who deserve to be alive are alive when the people who deserve to be alive are dead. Although it has more than three million words, it feels a bit short. Maybe I have read too many stories about "helping the old lady find the cat in the first chapter and becoming the God Emperor of the Universe in the finale". Reading this book is like reading a short story. There is no transcendent continent or the development of crazy matryoshka dolls of multiple behind-the-scenes masterminds. From the beginning, you are told who the real mastermind behind the scenes is and what the protagonist is going to do. Everything is just right, but there are really a lot of foreshadowings [fn=11 ] Looking forward to the next one, the concept of the Shadow World has obviously not been explored in depth, and Lan Qi has only experienced it four times. At the beginning, he said how difficult and important the Shadow World is, and how serious the consequences will be if it fails. Loren even went to court for this, but the feeling faded later. The final game of eternal punishment that Lan Qi entered for the fourth time should be an eighth or seventh level Shadow World, and how come there is no monitoring in the Kriti Empire? The people of Kriti have not thought about what to do if the Shadow World fails? And the ninth level people didn't say anything about what they were doing The only bad point for me is Tata's performance in the last chapter 882. I really hate this kind of person who does whatever he wants. She takes the role of Xiubao without knowing anything, and she is greedy regardless of the situation. I really put Lan Qi in my place, but luckily it ended with just a few shots at the end. If it were in the mid-term, I would really not be able to stand it😅

Broccoli🥦🥦🥦

This view of mine did not change until the end. To be honest, the previous part is a bit path-dependent and inertial thinking. The flavor of the previous game is too strong, and many characters and plots correspond to each other. Until the chapter of Sigrid, I wrote a completely different, independent, fascinating and wonderful plot; I created characters such as Sigrid and Lao Sang who are plump, very charming and deeply loved by readers (it's really not a joke, look at how long Lao Sang was "remembered" by everyone later 😁). I think this chapter is definitely the most important turning point of the book, not only in terms of plot, but also in terms of the author's skills and creative level! So when will the new book be released? I'm so excited, brother 😭

I didn't expect it to be over after just reading it, but I clearly remembered that there were more than 30 chapters left (annoyed). In this case, please give me some feedback after reading. Your description of Xixi Dog takes up too much. Whether it is the environment, scenes, or characters, there are too many descriptions. Although it will look quite beautiful, after reading a chapter like this, it will feel like you have not read it. I can only say that it is very bland.

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I originally thought it was just a lighthearted and funny novel, but the author's writing style is surprisingly good. The description is very delicate, every corner of the Western fantasy style world, every flower and every pattern is clearly presented before your eyes, showing the author's writing skills. The description of love is eye-catching, and it is not dramatic. Broccoli's love is unspoken. They understand each other, have a tacit understanding with each other, and it comes naturally. In a nutshell: I originally went to the street to eat Malatang for 10 yuan. As soon as I took it into my mouth, I found that the soup base was stewed for a day and a night, and it was a real Buddha Jumping Over the Wall.

This is a story of a time-traveling god who regains his humanity, a story of a lonely princess who stubbornly regains her kingdom and realizes her true destiny, a story of following her true heart, a story of an autistic half-demon girl who finds herself in the beginning of the collapse of the sky, a story of strong self-confidence, a story of an arrogant bishop opening his heart and confirming his true self This is also the story of the fateful priest's confused journey to become emperor, the memorial road of Lao Sang Lao Man, the disintegration of a well-known church, and the story of Little Brown Bread Rescue Laoqi and climb the path to the mythical beast The story begins with the only main line: to reunite Xiubao. On this basis, the tour group continues to expand, with more and more people, and the heart is getting richer, and the strength is closer. The final battle will determine the outcome, and the protagonist regains his humanity with a smile A very interesting book, which prevents me from being bored A very warm book, everyone will not be forgotten 🌹

I haven't seen such high quality in a long time.

[Compact plot S] In the early stage, I even felt that the development was a bit too fast. [Profound Emotional SSS] It is rare for a book to grasp both the main plot and the emotional line so well. Character 3D SThe image of each character is very full. Interesting Language SThere are always unexpected operations. In-Depth SSThe book that drops the most pearls. I don't know why it is so empathetic. [Alternative Cool Article S] It's refreshing and novel, unconventional. Too much fun Cjumping horizontally repeatedly at my limit of acceptance. [Weakness in the later stage B] Some characters and plots are not as good as those in the early stage. Repeat Cast EMy memory is not bad, I really don't need to paste the settings over and over again. [Protagonist Image B] Although the setting and world view were finally reconciled, the pitfalls were not smooth enough. [Insufficient details B] In fact, many details cannot withstand scrutiny, but they are within a negligible range. [Popular Novel C] There are a lot of overly straightforward modal particles in the later period. The total score is 100, debuff points -3, final score [SSS]

This book is also called "I Don't Want to Be the Big Brother of the Demon King!" ", In fact, it is not impossible for time-travelers to become a supporter of the Demon King; but the prerequisite is to become a living supporter, not to become his supporter in the form of an experience treasure box because of provoking the Demon King... The main artist of the game time-traveled into a game produced by his own company and became a passerby character. If there were no accidents, he would be able to live a life of a rich and evil boy by virtue of his original noble title. But the predecessor managed to defeat the boss's pet pigeon at the end of the game and asked the chef to make the pigeon his breakfast. "I'm so hungry!" The protagonist throws the gnawed pigeon bones into the mouth of the hound to eliminate the evidence of the crime. It seems that he has to re-draw his life plan... "My citizenship is not allowed to be confiscated" [Western Fantasy] [Easy Entertainment] [Magic Cards] Status of the work: Serialization, 170,000 words. The author is Poor Xixi, the lv1 writer of China Literature Group, and has also published a work "The Magic Cards I Made Are Absolutely Problem-Free" on an external website. 1. Game time-travel articles usually involve players traveling into games. The time-travel protagonist in this article uses the rare setting of a game company's main artist. 2. At the beginning of the article, the protagonist provokes the big boss at the end of the game because of the legacy of his predecessor. This plot increases the sense of conflict in the article and attracts readers' interest in reading. {"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New book trial reading"}{"TopicId":"886256127972278272","TopicName":"Weekend Book Recommendation"}

The corners of my mouth are always turning up! What should I do? 😆😆😆😆

"Like a drowning dream" The lingering evening feeling is like the rising dawn; The beautiful eyes are looking at the ears, like a bonfire at dusk. I tear the wings of your dreams and explain your dreams; I ride on a particularly enthusiastic horse to the Moroccan castle. The lemon is sour, and Nuan Meng is ripe; The lemon is asleep, and Nuan Meng is dead. It is difficult for immature people to dream about sadness, change, failure, sadness... Dreams are as warm as silk and feel like joy, and they are made up of drowning dreams.

It's a great book. What I like most is that the protagonist always solves problems from many angles that I didn't expect. As a person who has read novels for more than ten years and has almost never followed up on updates, I am a little eager to catch up on updates. I hope the author will continue to work hard! ! !

Hyperion: Why do you give me every annoying scene😭

After reading this volume, I feel like "she" is like the Bishop of Destruction. After Lan Qi gave her a good time, she became shaken about the meaning of life. Finally, she went to Lan Qi. She didn't say anything but actually asked Lan Qi about the meaning of his existence. Lan Qi understood and his response was "a fair fight" - you continue to be a bishop, you are still you. Unfortunately, what Lan Qi didn't expect was that the Bishop of Destruction had become "desperate" and gave up resistance. It doesn't matter whether it's right or wrong, this is more like a redemption that is not redemption.

The ending was well received, and the overall atmosphere was relaxed and pleasant. I originally thought that the title of the book meant that the content was very funny, but after reading it, I found that it was the process of the protagonist's gradual transformation. The plot content is very substantial, the characters are well-developed, the scenes of Frey and Wilford's father are a bit small, and there is no chapter about Lao Lan's marriage (bad review!!!) I hope the author can work hard in the next book and achieve greater success.

Duoduo

After "Spreading Flowers", will there be a next one?

Ms. Tata, sometimes, when I calm down and think about you, I feel that everything is incredibly beautiful.

It suits them very well, doesn't it

Lanqi When she was young, she wanted to become stronger. At that time, the Church of Resurrection was the largest and most powerful, so she joined the Church of Resurrection without hesitation. Later, everyone knew that she had the most powerful frontal combat power among all the bishops as she wished. At least in terms of strength, few people could compete with her. Later, Sigrid began to like collecting, so she built her residence into a private collection. The best and most rare things from different regions and times were either snatched or donated, and eventually they all came into her hands. ——So, if Sigrid wants to like someone, then this person must be the best in the world. What is the best person like? Probably even stronger than her. She thought then. But that person will definitely not be Rocky. When the cat tentatively asked her, Sid quickly denied it in his mind, but then started to lose focus while thinking about it. Holy Son... That brown hair doesn't complement him, but his emerald green eyes are very beautiful, as clear and gentle as lake water. ——Although in West Germany's eyes, it looks more like a snake. It is the poisonous Bamboo Leaf Green lurking in the jungle in ancient legends. There is a purity in his pupils that is more like an animal than a living person. When you are stared at calmly by him, you will even have a creepy feeling that you are about to be hunted. Such a beautiful yet dangerous... Pet. It should belong to her. She thought. But is a snake's body temperature also so warm? In the hotel room in the border snowfield, Sigrid quietly poked her head out from under the soft quilt, looking at the figure reading a book by the window, thinking of the steady embrace she fell into from mid-air. The wind and snow outside the window were still there, and they were still on the way to escape. Countless subordinates from the Nirvana branch wanted to use these two lives to make meritorious deeds. She was seriously injured and should have been in a panic, but it seemed... Even if the sky fell, as long as the Holy Son was still there, nothing would happen. No matter what happens, they can have fun and speed off on a sleigh, leaving the whole world behind them. His gentle words came: "Go to sleep if you feel sleepy. I'll wake you up after Boss Cat has finished cooking." "Yes." Sigrid shrank into the quilt, half-covering her face and mumbled softly in response. This is her Son. The most important treasure that must never be taken away from her. She closed her eyes and thought quietly. —————— "What about now?" Under the tree-lined avenue, a young man with black hair and green eyes glanced at her with a half-smile, with a helpless and tolerant smile at the corner of his mouth, "From a pet to a treasure, in your eyes I am nothing. "Have you never been a human being?" "You don't know whether you have been a human being or not?" Sid said confidently, "But now..." She spoke in a long tone, suddenly took two steps forward, turned around with a smile, raised her hand to hook the neck of the person in front of her, and raised her head to kiss him. Sigrid fell in love with the best man in the world. ——This is hers now.

Thalia arrives at the castle. "Lan Qi, where is my familiar? I want to take it away." Lan Qi put down the pigeon bone in his hand and wiped the oil stains from the corners of his mouth. "Such a big pigeon, I thought it was a monster, do you want some?" Talia frowned, looking at the pigeon bones in Lanqi's hand, feeling a little unhappy. "Lan Qi, I'm not here to joke with you. Where is my familiar?" Lan Qi smiled, stood up, and dusted himself off. "I know, I know. Your familiar is here," he walked to a corner and took out a cage. In the cage was a humanoid creature wearing an Ultraman Tiga leather suit. Talia walked over, took the cage, and looked at the monster inside with a smile on her face. "Thank you, Lan Qi. I'm leaving here now." Lan Qi nodded, looking at Talia's leaving back, suddenly there was an indescribable feeling in his heart. Talia walked out of the castle and looked at the scenery outside, filled with anticipation. She opened the cage and Ultraman jumped out. "Let's go," Thalia whispered as his body began to glow brightly and a blue ball of light formed around him. This is his energy field and his channel through time and space. His body began to shrink gradually, and eventually turned into a meteor and disappeared into the depths of the universe.

"Today is the song "So Cute I Want to Eat You" presented by the legendary singer Miss Lanfu for the Holy Emperor's enthronement" [Lanqi looked at Loren sitting on the throne with a confused face and the black cat on his head and smiled] Suddenly, Lanqi looked at Sid and Tata who were gathered around and began to feel something was wrong. Sid: It's time for the Son to leave with me. Tata: Who are you? Why should you let him go with you? [West Germany starts to make fists] Lanchi: Tata, you are so cute, so cute that I want to eat you. Tata: (starting to be shy) Sid: So it's just a plate of food

By: Non_replica (Weibo)

Thalia