Extraordinary, Start from the Skill Panel

It makes me sick to watch. Rubbish official, but good people. It is clearly: the law of the dark forest + the law of the jungle + hunter + doomsday + killing. It was so fucking stupid to join the officialdom. Garbage

I didn't understand it, forget it, let's wait until the author's writing becomes better.

The writing style needs to be improved. It looks weird. I suggest the author read it again after the excitement has subsided. There are many small points that really affect the perception, and some places are even written like a detailed outline. Moreover, it is written like a game article, with the skills activated and so on. When I was reading it, I even went out to take a look at the partitions. The overall feeling is that the author's brainwaves and images are all in the author's mind, and there are also typos and omissions. My grades were limited by my writing style. I'm really not very good at writing. I only represent my personal views.

Don't look at the apocalyptic articles at Qidian. All the good apocalyptic articles have been blocked, and the rest are all sacred wood articles. I feel like I can even remove the apocalyptic section.

It looks weird, some of it is incomprehensible, and the writing style needs to be improved.

Alas, it can also read memories. How can a villain be so awesome and hide it?

This book is a bit weird. It's awkward to read.

At least in the first volume, there will be no female protagonist. Sorry, dear readers.

If you join an organization and passively accept tasks, can't you become a non-staff member? The main reason is that you can guess the plot after joining the organization.

Why can't another alliance defeat the cult?

Happy Children's Day to everyone!

I obviously know every word, but I just can't understand them all, 😰

The plot is not very coherent. The protagonist does one thing and then does another thing in the next chapter in the blink of an eye. There has to be a transition anyway. Just a few words.

Introduction: What happened to this planet Is there something missing in the middle?

Praise the author: Gan... I can't think of anything Let me think about it again... Forget it, there is something to say and it looks dry Come on!

I feel like no one has read this. How is the writing? I'll tell you the truth after reading it.