Game of Thrones: the Deeper

With blue scales on his face and pointed elf ears, are you sure this appearance will not be regarded as a collection specimen in Game of Thrones?

After looking at it, I found that the protagonist, as a time-traveler with an unpredictable future, has too little experience in being a magician and a prophet. Magic sticks and prophecies are the characteristics of the world of ice and fire. The protagonist's spoiler behavior directly created the lowest sewer standards in history for the magic sticks. As a magician, your prophecies should be concise and concise. To put it bluntly, while being the Riddler, you should also be impressive, touching people's hearts, and have far-reaching implications. What you say must not be explained again, or you will just pretend to be cool and run away. Just talking about some possible plot directions will only make the original characters confused. Some people think you are an information dealer, and those who don't know you think you are a liar. As a prophet, you should describe the scenes and events you see about the future in extremely detailed and conclusive terms. Anyway, you want to show that whether you believe it or not, what I say is absolutely true, so that even people who don't believe in ghosts and gods will still murmur in their hearts. Then complete the psychological breakdown of the spoiler character through a true prophecy that can shake people's perspective. Next, even if you are a nonsense and have seen a spaceship falling in the future, they will believe it. When you are a magician, you need to rely on nine false predictions and one true prediction to cast a wide net to deceive people. When you are a prophet, you need to rely on nine true and one false predictions to deceive people in a targeted manner.

How could Joffrey, a tyrannical man, be so obedient? He had never seen charm useful to anyone in the royal family! People have seen so many beautiful things and destroyed so many charming people or things. According to the descriptions in novels and movies, it is Joffrey's character to give you a sword on the spot or call people to surround you and kill you.

What are you writing? The protagonist has no sense of existence at all. Even if you remove the protagonist, I may not be able to detect it. The protagonist disappears at every turn Also, does your book have no outline? A hammer in the east and a hammer in the west

After reading a few chapters, I feel that the writing is good but the plot is very poisonous. First of all, the protagonist starts to intervene in the plot inexplicably at the beginning, and then directly begins to spoil the characters in the plot. The key is that there is no reason. Then Game of Thrones is in the Middle Ages. You, a refugee with no identity, who gave you the courage to talk in front of the nobles? Are you really talking about class as a joke? How many of the characters in Game of Thrones are not nobles? Why do you, an undocumented refugee, stand in front of people and talk?

So what is the protagonist going to do? Now it seems to me that the protagonist is doing completely meaningless things. He has a hand in everything, but nothing benefits the protagonist. This book doesn't look like a hegemony novel to me, so why does the protagonist interfere in the plot? There is no goal, but it is just to intervene. It feels like the protagonist is completely manipulated by the author and forced into the plot. However, everything is of no use to the protagonist and has no purpose. I find it very baffling.

I feel like the protagonist's role is less than that of the corrugated steel dagger.

The first chapter is actually very well written, making people want to read it slowly and calmly. Then you suddenly jump out and want to save the child. Well, just treat this as a kind-hearted person. Later, he had a long discussion with Aria making assumptions and reasoning, which was really baffling. As attractive as the first chapter is, the second chapter will dissuade you.

The setting is not bad, but I was persuaded to quit in the second chapter. He jumped out inexplicably, flattered and rescued people inexplicably, and then lectured Alia inexplicably. No, I don't understand it. You just traveled through time and immediately adapted to the status quo. I won't tell you. Although you know the plot, in the end you are still strangers. Are you an enthusiastic citizen? Where did you get the confidence to convince Joffrey when you just came to this world? Moreover, you are only at the first level, and you are not invincible. Don't you think about the consequences if you fail to convince Joffrey? Wouldn't you create trouble for yourself? Moreover, you have such a strange appearance that it is difficult to hide it if you are wanted. Others can recognize you at a glance. When the author writes, he usually slaps his forehead and writes, which is too natural.

The author thinks that the Lion family is too strong. No matter what, the strongest one is the Lu family. Otherwise, why is it that the deer family is the king, and the lion beat the wolf from beginning to end, adding half a fish, and still won by tricking. Dorne didn't move much. The Rose House and the Stormlands combined a hundred thousand troops. Lan En returned to the Lion as soon as he died, because Joffrey was the king of the Baratheon House. Now Joffrey is not the king. To be honest, if the fat king said a word, the old lion would take the initiative to kill his daughter and grandson to make amends.

Ah, this is really nonsense. If he becomes the king and carries out reform and development, shouldn't he change the fate of more people? Extremely nonsense! ! ! !

To be honest, what I wrote earlier was okay, but Tywin's announcement that Cersei and Jaime were Targaryens poisoned me to death. Maybe ordinary readers think it's okay, and the author also gave a reason. But anyone who knows something about the feudal system in Europe finds it completely unreasonable (Westeros can be regarded as the European feudal system). Europeans value blood, which is different from Easterners (Japan values ​​family names, China values ​​family). Originally, Cersei and James had an incestuous heir who had no bloodline from the Deer family to steal the Iron Throne. If you pretend to be the Dragon family again (the Westeros nobles can see what's going on), this has completely challenged the Westeros noble system maintained by blood. In this case, a rose rebelled before the formation, and Robert died in battle... It all seemed like a power game, but unless the old rose was in trouble, this situation would never happen. This was the lowest level rule, even lower than guest rights and oaths. At least in Westeros, which is based on the European aristocratic system, it is absolutely impossible for the situation written by the author to occur. It has the same concept as the Dong family in the early Sui and Tang Dynasties...

As a DND, you also have a panel that is as powerful as a tabletop game, but you can still do so many things. Wouldn't it be nice to invest your time in spells and just kill everyone? Speechless

It feels like it will be unfinished. If you write it like this, not many people will read it. Basically, you just want to rewrite the ending of the original work, and the protagonist in the author's novel is basically a tool to rewrite the plot. It has no other use. Most people who want to read fan fiction basically want the protagonist to marry the Dragon Mother or the Rose of Highgarden, and then preferably sit on the Iron King. As a cool novel, your book is basically doomed to have no success, unless you greatly increase the plot of the protagonist in the later period, but judging from the previous and previous articles, you explain that the protagonist is just a tool person with no ambitions, focusing on rewriting the plot and then upgrading it. Therefore, I feel that your book is basically destined to be a mess, unless you don't mind the trouble of drastically changing the plot or writing the book just for fun.

I will be here to help with the new Game of Thrones book

After reading the first nine chapters, the protagonist is pretty useless. Game of Thrones is a trashy world. Do you need to be so serious? Playing the whole game is so strenuous, but when you get to the original world, you can just hit a wall and die. After all, the world of Game of Thrones is just a mortal world, and the gods in it are useless. I even think that a five-ring spell can kill the gods in it. It is not easy for a mage to defeat a group of mortals without mysterious and extraordinary powers. There is no need to follow the rules of Game of Thrones. Following the rules of Game of Thrones will instead suppress the protagonist. In a situation like the protagonist's, doing whatever he wants is the best way.

How can I put it, the book is a good book, and it can be seen that the author has a good understanding of the original work. However, this kind of narrative technique is too tiring to read. The protagonist has no sense of existence at all, and there is no exciting climax. Reading it made me drift off to sleep.

I watched your video on Station B today and I have a question, where is your protagonist? There is no sense of presence or participation at all.

This should not be called XX of Game of Thrones but should be called XX from the beginning of Game of Thrones. The lack of a female protagonist has nothing to do with the original set of power trading and hegemony in Game of Thrones. There is no power, no marriage, and no heir. And the original situation is retained, which is equivalent to reading the original work again. It just adds a protagonist who is similar to the Faceless Man but does not need to do anything, as long as he shows up at plot points.

The plot development line is very outrageous, the Reach actually joins the coalition forces in the West. The situation of joining the Lu family is obviously a sure win, and both parties have decided to get married. As a result, Rose unexpectedly flipped out. Even if the author forced the heir to become a eunuch, Robert could have changed his heir.

After reading the synopsis, there is an ending and it is not unfinished. However, it is still the same as what I saw before. The protagonist often disappears, and his influence and participation in the plot are too low. In the early stage, it can be said that he is not strong enough to dare to participate in the power struggle. However, in the later stage, it is unreasonable to start with level 7 magic. He can charm humans, hypnotize, poison, and directly use magic to decapitate commanders, let alone dragons. There are so many things the protagonist can do, but that's it. None or too little was done. When all of us readers thought that the protagonist was going to show off his skills and dominate the continent of Westeros, the author restricted the protagonist's performance in order to prevent the plot from getting out of control or to advance the plot too quickly or for some other reason. This made most of us readers feel stuck in their throats and couldn't see the joy. It's like a lion that is extremely majestic, with gorgeous fur, thick and sharp claws, and a deafening roar, but! But he's in a cage! He can only act according to the wishes of the cage owner, without any freedom. Coupled with the system mechanism at the beginning, the protagonist has very weak reasons to carry out many activities in Westeros. At the beginning, he was pushed by the system without any sense of his own consciousness, and it will not be much better in the later period. Here are some suggestions for the author. Writing novels must be enjoyable, and don't be afraid to let the protagonist Do something that has no bottom line, because it makes you look like a person. Not many people like a guy who doesn't even look like a human being. It's my first time to write a long review, and the expression may not be very good, but I still hope the author can read it. I wrote so much because I just saw the charming Dragon Vein Warlock at the beginning, and thought that there would be many encounters with various beautiful girls in the future. In the end, I felt nothing. That's it. Goodbye👋

Chao Yao likes to exercise. He and the girl with the ponytail were smiling happily on the treadmill; Having a rope skipping competition face to face with the fitness girl... He was about to teach the new fitness girl the rules of push-ups Suddenly 108 muscular guys on the scene pushed him up to a high position and bowed down. He also made a golden tiger-head chair out of huanghuali wood and placed it in the middle of the hall. He complimented loudly: "The King of Muscles, his power is boundless!" Brothers rushed to show off his biceps, akimbo muscles, and white cut muscles for him... Suddenly, a young man ran in and shouted: "No, Zengtou City is coming to conquer Liangshan!" Nani! Where did the gym come from in Zengtou City? Before Chao Yu could be shocked, a black-faced dwarf jumped out and said: "Zengtou City is worthy of death. Please invite the King of Muscles to march personally to show off my power in Liangshan!" All the brothers and nobles around shouted: "Please ask the King of Muscles to go on a personal expedition to show off my power in Liangshan!" I won't say that even the fitness girls have turned into muscle brothers. Why are we still fighting? Chao Yu, with a confused look on his face, put on his helmet and armor, tied his robe, straddled his horse and held a whip, rushed out of the gym and headed for Zengtou City. The short black man said goodbye to him with tears. As a result, Chao Yu was killed by Shi Wengong in front of the banner of Beitian Xingdao. ---------------------- Chao Yao shouted and sat up from the bed, covered in cold sweat. No, am I not the protagonist? I saw a book falling in front of me, and it said: ... It takes up precious space for publicity, and I wish the author more than 10,000 books every day, thank you.

I'm a little confused... What does the protagonist want? I only see the protagonist meddling in the plot for the sake of meddling in the plot... You have to do what is said in Chapter 3: after the war breaks out, join one of the parties, kill the enemy to gain experience, and improve your level... This is a good reason, then shouldn't the protagonist sit back and watch the plot develop, waiting for the war to break out so that he can gain experience. Then I suggest you join Stannis, first destroy the 100,000 troops of Renly and Tyrell, and then push all the way to the west to slaughter the Lannister. Use magic to kill Stannis, push Celine to the Iron Throne, and then marry Celine. 🥱

You pick up a letter on the roadside. When you open it, it says: My name is Wu Dalang. When you open this letter, I have become an emperor. Although I didn't want to drink the soup Jinlian gave me, I drank it in the end because I used my resentment of bleeding from all seven orifices to open a door to ten years ago! I used this advantage to successfully rebel and became the emperor. I gained the world, but lost the golden lotus. What's the point of my life? No matter who you are, if you pick up this letter, please travel through time to make up for my regrets! Bullshit! Wu Dalang is the emperor. You threw the envelope aside. As a result, the envelope automatically flew into your hand again. After opening it, a line of text is displayed: My name is Ximen Qing. When you read this letter, I have become an emperor. Although I didn't want to go to the Lion Tower, I went anyway. I used the resentment of my death to open a door to twenty years ago. Using this advantage, I successfully rebelled and became the emperor. I gained the world, but lost the Golden Lotus. What's the point of my life? No matter who you are, if you pick up this letter, please travel through time to make up for my regrets. Holy shit, it's a little weird, you still can't believe it and you threw the envelope aside. The envelope flies back into your hand. It says: My name is Wu Song, and when you read this letter, I will have become the emperor. Although I didn't want to go against Fang La, I still went. I used the pain of my broken arm to open a door to thirty years ago, and I used this advantage to become the emperor. I gained the world, but lost the golden lotus. What's the point of my life? No matter who you are, if you pick up this letter, please travel through time and make up for my regrets. Hey, is this true? Am I the next person destined to be destined? You agreed to the envelope request. Another line of words appeared on the envelope: My name is Pan Jinlian. When you see this secret edict, I will be dead, but someone finally comes to accompany me... ... Now, another portal to "Water Margin of Destiny" has appeared. Readers, do you want to come and take a look? …………I am occupying valuable space for publicity. I wish the author more than 10,000 updates per day, thank you.

There are three major types of magic in Game of Thrones. 1. Black magic, which represents professional shapechangers. Real superpowers. The owner is gifted and can possess animals. It can also pull people into strange dreams. 2. Blood magic. The user is a witch. It is suspected of high-end biological transformation technology. It can create poisonous pest plagues, transform the human body and even bring back the dead. It is suspected that the dragon is one of the masterpieces. 3. Alchemy. The inventor is an alchemist. The raw material is unknown and is suspected to be dragon blood and dragon crystal. It is a real chemical technology The above three can be regarded as magic, but they can also be regarded as unknown alien technologies. The Night King and the Dragon are the best among them, and can be regarded as the product of the combination of the three kinds of magic. The time and space reverse modification displayed by the Green Seer may not be that powerful. It is either a trick or a forbidden technique similar to ancient blood. The cost is huge From this point of view, there is no fantasy magic in the conventional sense in the world of Game of Thrones, or it does not exist at all, just some technologies that ordinary people cannot understand.

Found a cheating book, Black Blood and Kingship, not bad🤫