This Star Comes from a Thousand Years Ago

The combination of tone-deafness and absolute hearing, the world has advanced a thousand years, science and technology have advanced rapidly, and the Chinese music scene has gone back twenty years and it is also a prosperous era. The year 3023 is the golden age for the time traveler Lu Ren! Master the golden finger, the Renaissance is now! {"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New book trial reading"} Book title: "I set the Chinese music scene back twenty years" Author: Da Yu Zhishui Status: 70,000 words (in series) Elements: time travel, AI technology, future world, song collection Introduction: Human society has progressed for a thousand years after the AI invasion, but many good songs in the Chinese music scene have been lost in history. The protagonist Lu Ren carries the singing golden finger to show the golden songs from before the millennium one by one. Emerging from a singing competition involving all reformers, a music legend begins! This book begins with a time-travel reality show. The early pace is very fast, and the various twists and turns of the plot are interesting enough. The author has good writing skills. Book lovers who like light entertainment content should not miss it. The sense of science and technology is more reflected in various modified people. The future world is currently only the tip of the iceberg. Because songs and other content account for a relatively high proportion, the scientific and technological background will be slightly thin. If there is a business war with supernatural powers in the future, I can only say "Meow Meow Meow?" I'd better hurry up and read it. ♥ The reading experience is relaxing and enjoyable. When I follow the updates every day, what I want to read more is the author's street diary. The vivid and clever author's baby is so cute! Add chicken legs for you! Similar recommendation: "This Star is a Little Reckless", a good entertainment book released on June 1

There are too many elements included, and the plot is a bit confusing. A common problem for new authors is that they feel that there are many points to write about, so they just write them all in, but in the end they can't grasp it. There are generally two results. One is to focus on one or a few key points and write them down, and the other blurs are shrunk... The other is that the more you write, the bigger and bigger it becomes, and it spreads out and the author can no longer restrain it, and the end is unfinished or eunuch...

I think it is Qidian's most innovative entertainment, and the plot setting of Qidian is unique to you. The latest chapter "Dance of Flowers" is so well written that I didn't get here in vain. Other people say the pace is slow, but I think Qidian has no shortage of fast-paced books. Both radish and cabbage have their own preferences and stick to their own style. Others can't follow the trend even if they want to. After all, you've already fallen into this trap. A Little Silver Alliance encourages you to write well. To maintain the level, gold is unlikely, but silver is still not a big problem. By the way, your book should not be published in science fiction. If it were published, the city would have taken off long ago

Do your own book review. First of all, the writing is relatively smooth and not eye-catching, and the writing style is relatively detailed. At present, the plot does not have any major poisonous points, but the pleasant points are not too obvious. It does not follow the rhythm of conventional entertainment. Maybe the author is really writing a very new genre. Currently, the most enjoyable thing is the identity reversal in Chapter 2, and the protagonist's sentence in Chapter 3: Hey, grandson, this pretense is so reasonable! And appearing before the people of the Calico Cat Band in Chapter 4. It can be seen that some of the early settings have a fusion of "This Star Wants to Retire" and "The Future King", but they all have their own new ideas and are not copied. The author is trying to describe the confrontation between virtual idols and real idols in the future world thousands of years later. The world view is a little larger than ordinary entertainment literature, so it can be written more than copying songs and making movies. There are many new plot tensions and expectations, but it is also difficult to control. This subject matter is indeed very new, but newness does not mean good-looking, nor does it mean there is a market. Generally speaking, readers of science fiction and entertainment literature rarely overlap. Also, it is difficult for newcomers to write about this new subject matter because the writing style and rhythm are not supportive enough. Most likely you need to work out the word count and slowly understand. I hope the author sticks to it, I think sooner or later he will be signed, and sooner or later he will find radio-savvy readers who will like this book!

Support two small Oscar trophies for passers-by who have upright views. I hope the author writes better and better.

Hachiko

If you don't come for a few days, will you be a eunuch?

I found the first three chapters quite interesting. Although there were a lot of settings, they were very imaginative and seemed quite innovative, so I read on. I feel like the dozen or so chapters are a bit slow and the pace is not very good. Writing about the director threatening Bai Jie, I felt it was quite repetitive. It would be nice if it could be more concise. Maybe the author wants to foreshadow the complex relationship between the consortium? I feel like I can insert hints and foreshadowing into the storyline every time, instead of pouring out a bunch of settings at once, which looks a bit boring. The latest chapters are getting better. The plot is quite interesting and the amount of effective information is relatively large. Come on, author, write new ideas. Added to bookshelf.

Passers

What are you writing about?

The pace is too slow, there are all kinds of unnecessary side descriptions, and only a few hours have passed in dozens of chapters... I'd better wait until this incident is finished before continuing to read it😢

There has always been no shortage of people who follow the crowd or follow the trend. Being innovative is also important, isn't it? Since Ci Miao's future king is mentioned, Ci Miao's few books have not been popular among the public, but there is no shortage of people reading them, right? So just stick to the creativity at the beginning. Even if not many people read the first one, Ci Miao's books are the same (I started reading it from the first Star Hunter, but it was only when the second book went back in time and became a cat that it started to attract most of the readers. Hui Mao is more popular than the other books) If there is something new, as long as it is not a batch of bad writing, there will always be people who will read it. After all, this is the first book for a newcomer, so I can tolerate poor grasp of the content.

The writing is okay, but the world view is very problematic from a scientific perspective. A thousand years have passed since human beings have already entered the post-communist era. Music in an era when everyone can create independently is more exciting than in the past.

The plot has been expanded too much, and it can't be tied together, and it looks confusing, but the three views are very correct, and the core is interesting. Let's wait until science fiction is released before watching

Single girl or harem?

This book is quite nice! The diary of the author of "The Streets" is also good to read.

You can write the song "Flowers in the South of the City Have Bloomed", the story behind it is sentimental. The original song is pure music. Someone later wrote the lyrics for the flowers in the south of the city: Composition: Three acres of land The gates are closed for snow in March and the sky and the earth in the south of the city are white The remaining flowers fall at night and the weeds are buried in the snow The snow is deep but there is still love Spring is far away and will eventually come May peace be good forever The flowers in the south of the city have bloomed Ah~ The flowers have bloomed Old friends are coming and the fragrant breeze is coming The spring breeze enters the south of the city. The south of the city is no longer cold. May you always be here. The southern swallows return. There is the south of the city. Go and see the flowers bloom. The flowers will not fail when they bloom. Looking at the old Nancheng in the distance You are no longer there anymore. I go under the flowers again, but I see things in the world of mortals. I don't see you coming to pick them. The flowers in the south of the city have been defeated. I don't regret your future. Spring will be back next year. I hope you will come to pick. The flowers in the south of the city are blooming again. Waiting for you to come. Spring will be back next year. I hope you will come to pick The flowers in the south of the city are blooming again. Waiting for you to come.

After reading it, I felt a bit confused. This is the second sci-fi entertainment article I have read. The first one was "The King of the Future" with a lazy tone (Ace Pigeon), and the second one was this one. 😡

It's hard to understand.

Support the author, sort out his ideas, and write better works.

We can't even imagine a civilization in 100 years, let alone a thousand years, even after the wasteland is rebuilt. The title of the book is interesting, but it feels more like traveling through another world.

Even the eunuch's declaration was written in pieces and incomprehensible. . . . An author doesn't mean he has a good article if he has many words, and he doesn't mean a three-line-one-cut camera means an awesome montage.

I saw Chapter 15, the pace is too slow

At the beginning, I felt like a future king

No, when I was shopping for new books, why was this one recommended to me 🥵🥵🥵

Very good, the writing is very visual

Passers-by, when they saw Chapter 35 and were persuaded to retreat, everything was going well before. Chapter 35 suddenly took a big dive.