Fishing in Seoul

You must not have too many heroines😿

As long as it's single, not too censorious, and not toxic, I'll subscribe to the end and finally found a new book about sheep😭

{"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New Book Trial Reading"} [Recommendation] As we all know, fishermen are the most mysterious group of people in the universe. They leave early and come back late, they travel across mountains and seas, and each of them has unique skills. In addition to catching fish, they can harvest all kinds of strange things every time they fish. Can a fisherman catch a mermaid by putting him in a chaebol's pond? [Book title]: "Fishing in Seoul" [Author]: Cold Devil Pepper [Number of words]: 150,000 words [Status]: Serialized [Type]: Entertainment articles, daily articles [Quality]: Liangcao+ [Highlights] One heroine, Kim Taeyeon, Kim Taeyeon, Kim Taeyeon, say important things three times, it's over. Er has a good mind. If he puts a weird fisherman and a weird country's entertainment industry together, it's not surprising what will happen Sanlezi's daily comedy flow, good writing style, and comfortable to watch.

A first-level author is easy to eunuch. . . It's better to keep it first.

Korean entertainment stories are all lickers, domestic entertainment stories are all scumbags.

Fishing guy + harem, how should I put it, not attractive

After reading a few chapters, I was wondering, are you fishing or fishing for Kim Taeyeon? ? ? I came here for fishing and you showed me YY? Could you please change the title of the book? If it really doesn't work, I might as well change the introduction 😴

It was good in the past, but suddenly he became a chaebol and liked Jin Xiaotai, so he was no longer my type.

I don't know if the author has read it, but I still give my suggestions The author has good writing skills, but his writing power (the ability to control the plot) is not enough. When writing an emotional drama, you must show the details. The last two chapters have been uncomfortable for everyone to watch and for you to write. In fact, it is because you did not write enough foreshadowing (details) and could not make a natural transition. The result was a mixed bag. For example, we need to write about how their contact has become less and less. We can't just mention it in a few sentences (a paragraph). At least two or three chapters are scattered in different places and written in a manner that reduces the chat content and makes them less connected. Then, if you want to write about a breakup, and the female protagonist has a lot of responsibilities, then you have to describe the male protagonist's efforts to maintain contact during the several-month gap, but the female protagonist has fewer unilateral contacts due to personality flaws and work. The male protagonist thinks that the other person is busy, but it turns out that this is not the case, and the female protagonist has not yet realized that it is her fault. At the end of the climax, a quick chop with a knife and a crazy verbal spat (not necessarily verbal) present the pleasure of the male protagonist being tortured into the reader at the beginning, and then the polarity is reversed and the pleasure is returned twice as much. Or write reconciliation, which means that two people are actually new to love, but they subconsciously want to maintain their relationship well. Because of the newbie and the heroine's character flaws, there was less contact, but when the relationship between the two was about to break up, the heroine broke through her own flaws, took a brave step, and reached a physiological climax.

If it had a single female protagonist, it would feel like another sadistic novel, and the male protagonist would also be abused. When I saw that Taeyeon didn't even recognize her dog, I felt bad for the male protagonist, and my mentality would collapse.