Comprehensive Martial Arts: Jin Yiwei Can Also Fly Knives Like Xiao Li

This is my understanding of Feiyu Suit If Jin Yiwei's work uniform is not Feiyu Suit, then what kind of uniform is it? We can't all dress in a mess, right? I checked and found that the flying fish suit is a general term. Different levels have different colors. The ones given by the emperor are usually the flying fish and python suits, and the four beasts and unicorn suits. They are different.

I suspect you have never seen any of these martial arts, so you are writing nonsense!

Putting aside everything else, if the plot is not even explained clearly in the writing, how can anyone read it?

First, the number of chapters, most people only have 20 or 30 chapters with 70,000 to 80,000 words, but you have doubled it several times. Second, your writing style is very similar to junior high school composition.

The editor said that I didn't need to write it anymore and had already filed for it. From now on, there will only be one update every day, and I won't reply to comments anymore. From now on, whoever wants to read can just read it, and I won't look at the data anymore.

Wrote something random, incomprehensible, inconsistent, and logically confusing

Update faster and faster. Didn't you save the manuscript?

I didn't realize it until I read Chapter 30. The author doesn't know how to write fighting scenes. He reads out the moves and then ding... Chi... All kinds of onomatopoeia, and it's done! How embarrassing.

The writing style needs to be improved, as well as the pacing and fighting scenes... Come on

The inner strength is completely lost. Why doesn't the protagonist practice it by himself? He has always thought about using the method of absorbing energy. Didn't the previous protagonists practice internal energy by themselves? The absorbed energy is used to improve the indestructible power of the Vajra. With the protagonist's current body, I don't believe that he can't refine a trace of internal energy.

It was okay at first, but later on, my face twitched, was it hard? Rub, you are not poisonous, you are poisonous and died, and you pulled it out and whipped the corpse

Is the author going to be unable to write anymore? Can't you understand?

After Chapter 100, each chapter should be more than 2,000 words. It will be more than 3,000 words after it is put on the shelves

It's rubbish. It's so short and rubbish.

Why write mixed martial arts? Write the Immortality style honestly and learn from Xiao Li's flying sword. Currently, no one in the Changsheng stream learns throwing knives.

Is the protagonist single-minded? You only practice four martial arts moves, flying knives, kung fu, and body movements, right? Or just practice a bunch of mess like those?