From Ordinary Flesh and Blood to Conquering the World

The protagonist's personality is indeed quite strong, but the author writes too much unnecessary dialogue, and also gives him a burdensome, dementia-stricken grandfather who restricts him. His personality is all about defying all odds and crushing everything, but adding restrictions is like putting shit on a plate of delicious food.

Seeing 0.1, 0.1, It's annoying. Excessive force, what kind of cheat code is that?

You need to update more frequently in the early stages, otherwise it will be difficult to achieve good results. If you update less in the early stages, others may think it's okay, but they will just let it run its course, which will easily lead to poor results.

... I've read a bit of the story, and the main character is basically never idle. He runs into thugs whether he's at home or just going out. He always acts tough first, then gets slapped in the face. He's been fighting thugs for more than 10 out of 20 chapters.

The first chapter features someone throwing an ID card at the police station entrance, and the second chapter features someone throwing a banana peel at a beautiful woman's feet. It feels like they were forced to write it because they had no other options.

Can you tell me what you're writing, author? I can read it without thinking, provided it's entertaining enough. It's been awful ever since those two women appeared! What I find most unacceptable is that a protagonist in a yakuza-style wish-fulfillment novel has to write songs to earn money because he's broke? What's wrong with your brain?

It's the same old formula: celebrities and nurses, they can't walk without women.

I'd like to ask if there's a kind of retro, light novel aesthetic to it?

There are too many female characters. I've read 41 chapters, that's an average of one every 10 chapters: a nurse, a class monitor, a celebrity, and I even slept with one. A few more would be better, it's getting a bit cloying.

This is so tedious. Even writing an apology takes this long. And after dealing with the water ghost clones, I've been practicing on everyday tasks, but it hasn't been very effective; it's just a constant, drawn-out routine.