Aboard a Pirate Ship, One Call of a Sheep Opens Heaven's Gate

Ornn's power lies entirely within himself; forging is merely a hobby. He can effortlessly forge divine artifacts because he is incredibly strong, not because he relies on his powerful artifacts. The cause and effect relationship between these two must be understood. To think that Ornn's power comes from equipment is truly absurd.

I dislike the fan-made setting of Yamato getting seasick. Sacrificing the original characters to highlight the protagonist and forcibly adding weaknesses is too unpleasant.

Seeing Yamato makes me a little uncomfortable. If his personality were like in the anime, constantly referring to Oden this and Oden that, it would be really irritating. You know, the Wano Country arc in the anime started revolving around him, and it disgusted countless people.

To write a good One Piece story, the protagonist's will must be clearly demonstrated. What does this mean? It means that regardless of whether the protagonist chooses justice, freedom, or anything else, they can be carefree like Shanks, lazy like Aokiji, or even slack off like Kizaru in everyday life. However, when a battle occurs or the face of a powerful figure is involved, they must display their courage and spirit on the spot. Otherwise, it just won't be engaging.

The harem has expanded again, from 2 to 4, and like many other low-quality harem novels, there's no emotional buildup, the plot insertions are abrupt, and it's just the author's desire to collect. The goat's abilities are also rather bland; there are only a few skills from the game, and no other abilities have been developed based on the goat's lore. It all relies on equipment and stacking passive abilities with Heart Steel. At this point, it's become somewhat tasteless, yet too good to give up.

This book should be renamed "Starting from One Piece: Forging Equipment" or "One Piece: Orn's Forging System," and the Devil Fruit should be changed to a system. The setting of the Sheep-Sheep Fruit Orn form is really lame.

I haven't read it yet, but I think you've got it backwards. Ornn is a demigod whose hobby is blacksmithing. To be honest, the author's limitations led to the build focused on items.

My assessment is that it's not romantic enough, not wild enough, and not heroic enough.

The opening scene, featuring a character suffering from seasickness, immediately lowered the overall viewing experience by several levels.

The power levels seem inconsistent. Around chapter 100, the protagonist couldn't defeat Urouge, who hadn't even set sail three years prior, in one move and fought for ages 😥. Is the main character still weaker than Luffy when he first set sail?