Aboard a Pirate Ship, One Call of a Sheep Opens Heaven's Gate

Ornn's power lies entirely within himself, and forging is just his hobby. He can forge artifacts at will because Ornn himself is too strong, not because Ornn relies on his powerful artifacts. The causal relationship between this must be understood. I really don't think that Ornn relies on equipment to gain strength.

I don't like the second setting of Yamato's seasickness. It's too uncomfortable to sacrifice the original characters in order to highlight the pig's feet and forcibly increase the weaknesses.

When I see Yamato, I feel a little overwhelmed. If the character is like the anime, where Oden is always long and Oden is short, it will be really annoying. You know how many people are disgusted when the Wano Country chapter of the anime starts to revolve around this guy.

To write a pirate story well, it must express the protagonist's own will. What does it mean? Whether you choose justice or freedom or something else, you can usually laugh like a red-haired person, be as lazy as a blue pheasant, or even act like a yellow ape and try to catch fish. But once there is a battle or an issue involving the face of a strong man, you must show your own courage in the scene, otherwise it will never be interesting to watch.

The harem has expanded again, from 2 to 4, and like many other low-level harem novels, there is no emotional foreshadowing, and the plot is very blunt. It is just the author's desire to collect. The abilities of the goat's body are also very mediocre. Only the few skills in the game are not developed according to the imagination of the goat setting. They all rely on equipment and the passive passive of Heart Steel. After reading it now, some of the food is tasteless and it is a pity to throw it away.

This book should be renamed, starting with Pirates and Forging Equipment, or Pirates: Ornn's Forging System, and then changing the Devil Fruit to System. The setting of your Sheep Fruit Ornn form is really stretched.

I haven't read it yet but I think you got it backwards. Ornn is a demigod whose hobby is blacksmithing. To be honest, the author has restrictions, so I play equipment flow.

My evaluation is, not romantic enough, not wild enough, not heroic enough.

At the beginning, Yamato felt seasick, which brought down the perception by several levels.

I feel like my combat power has collapsed. When I was in the early chapter 100, I couldn't win a single move against Urgi who had not gone to sea three years ago and the fight lasted for a long time 😥. Is the protagonist still not as strong as Luffy who had just gone to sea?