Slime, Evolving

The setting is okay, but the main character feels a bit silly.

It's another hot summer. No fan, eight-person room. Where can I enjoy the cool air on the Hundred Acre Campus? Don't say that the mind is naturally cool, go into the bedroom and sauna room. I expected this summer to be longer. Sweat runs down my back, breaking my defense. Broken window angrily scolds the mother who lost her mother in school. Don't try to shirk blame and make excuses, rnm, it's a shame.​

Have you ever made slime? Take some things for granted.

Author, you are lying. I have collected all these things. I put them all together and haven't typed them out yet.

I'm curious, why did it start to smoke after I mixed the ingredients together?

It turns out that Goldfinger is called a creation editor. It should not only edit slimes, but the author can consider herding all living beings. Give birth to more high-level creations

The protagonist behind this book is the system, and the pig horns are the workers of the system! All of 🐷Jiao's behaviors were induced by systematic arrangements, including sudden resignation, returning to a remote town, and disconnection from social relations. Whether he is a perfect tool man will wait until the system has trained the tool man later and the metaworld invades reality. Then put the pig's trotters in the vest or the mastermind behind the scenes on the bright side. Cooperation with certain interests is a good reason for this world. Complete the great cause of system coverage and erosion of the real world!

Let me talk about my feelings. I have seen the latest chapter 53, and I feel that so far I can only say that it is average. Some plots are too blunt, and some parts are particularly obvious The first one is the way to deal with the batch of slimes before the Three Kingdoms. Because the benefits of death caused by the battle are higher, this batch was directly decomposed, and then directly transferred to the Three Kingdoms without any back-up protection? Without thinking about what to do if you fail at all, without any means to make a quick comeback, you change to a direction that you are not familiar with before. Can't you experiment on the original basis first? For example, by reducing resources, then setting up an arena, a battle royale competition, and then the winner gets survival resources to experiment with the intensity of the battle and the profit ratio? Otherwise, why is it that in the same battle of life and death, the first batch only has more than 500 source materials, and the second batch has more than 1,000? And it can also provide support to prevent the failure of the Three Kingdoms or other models. Then there is the original slime No. 13. Doesn't the author have a collecting habit? He collects all kinds of special slimes, and some plots can be developed on this basis in the future, such as glasses slime starting the inheritance of language and writing. The second thing is that the angel slime's exit is different from the forced exit in those disgusting plots. He can fly, and then he has to complete a plot of saving people and then receiving a box lunch. Can't it be changed to delaying time and then being locked up in the central world? And then he got rid of the meat bug because he could fly? Then explore the central world and end up accidentally wandering into a place and being put away by the protagonist? Then when the rabbit slimes complete the unification, can the four worlds be turned into one, giving the slimes the illusion that the world is evolving, and then releasing a slime that fails to merge every seven days to invade them as usual. First, they will win miserably, then train their troops, and then fight. Isn't this also a kind of battle? Moreover, at some point, the angel slime can be released to see the subsequent development, so that it will not turn into the original Buddhist development as soon as the Three Kingdoms Conflict is over. And in the latest self-circulating world, two batches of slimes can also form a new battle. The third one is the clone plot. From the moment I thought about being able to clone, I never thought about whether I could bear it. Just start with 100 clones? No experiment bit by bit? Didn't you ever think about whether you would die if you couldn't bear it? It all depends on the author. If I think it works, the protagonist just does it without any thinking. The feeling that the protagonist is just a puppet is too prominent. It feels the same whether there is a protagonist or not. The fourth part is that the system thinks that the protagonist should be a god or something, so that civilization can advance further. It is completely unnecessary. The system is the same as the protagonist. If the author feels that fighting for the progress of civilization is necessary, here can completely let the protagonist understand the subsequent plot development, and serve as a control group. It not only fleshes out the protagonist, but also has content to write about. It would be best if the author finds it useful. It doesn't matter if he wants to follow his own outline. I hope he can write more and more exciting things in the future 🙏

This is the first time I heard that in real life, you need a CD to play Tieshan Kao... During a fight, you need to play it and then wait for a long time for the CD to be hit, and then play it after the skill has cooled down? Although what I said is one-sided, it would be outrageous to release a CD in the real world.

It's pretty cool, but No. 13 Disappeared inexplicably, and all the failed products are still there. It's gone because it was killed by the others. So the hero was decomposed and destroyed by the protagonist. Can't we put this one away and use it later?

My brother, fluorine has to be minus 200 degrees to be a solid, and it can be liquid under high pressure. Ammonia has to be minus 33 degrees to be a liquid. How did you get the gram? Under standard conditions? You use two gases to rub slime?

Yes, it feels like it has the potential to be a fire like raising all human beings. Players deserve creation, and online game streaming can only be adjusted by matching niche creation streams. Three-hundred-pound players are becoming increasingly useless, resulting in each book not being as good as the other. What everyone actually brings in is their own evolution and interaction. , Epic plots, mythological wars, etc., Rather than just a pool of stagnant water for self-entertainment, Raising All Humans is really good at the beginning. Compared with I Am God, it is more of a grand mythology. It is a bit out of touch with online literature. The reading threshold is a bit high, but it is also a classic genre.

There are many taken-for-granted errors and inconsistencies in the author's book. I feel that the author's accumulation of common sense is not enough. I hope to listen to more readers' opinions and correct some obvious fallacies.

The protagonist's IQ is given to the system, right?

I think it would be better if Goldfinger was changed from the creation editor to the slime editor.

When I saw it was Qi training and foundation building again, I suddenly didn't want to watch it anymore. It was all the same old routines. Isn't the gene lock good? It's okay to work on the superpower system. After a long time, it was about cultivating immortals. The cultivation of immortals was already written badly.

I have always felt that selling for 1 yuan is a witty plot. A price tag of one thousand to ten thousand yuan is normal. After all, there are already 12,000 pieces of equipment.

The creativity is good, but the writing and plot arrangement are quite lacking. .

The gene lock system is very good. I hope the author will not add any fantasy training system in the future, otherwise it will feel messy and highly toxic.