
Panlong's Life Evolution
盘龙之生命进化
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- 619k Words
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- Myriad Worlds
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- 2y ago
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- Qidian
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So where do you use this bacteria? Just for the water? What can you bring to the protagonist?
Are people who have read the original work a fool? According to the rules, if you have experienced fusion, and you have seven-star strength, you will become a mid-level god~~ In the rule system, when you reach four-star strength, you will naturally become a high-level god. This can actually be wrong in a book written by a fan. I suggest you, this eunuch, go back and read the original work again.
The protagonist was saved, and he joined the Temple of Life. Then he practiced all the way, and when he reached the god level, he went to the God of Life Realm and upgraded to the Great Consummation.
How should I put it, level nine because someone cast a level nine healing spell on me, and I swore with the Supreme God to do three things for free, in the material plane~ The rest of the treasures can make their own decisions.
I am very much looking forward to it. The protagonist writes the rules of life. Most of the previous protagonists were Wind and Earth, because they were Lin Lei's majors in the original novel.
There are not many people who write about Panlong fans, and nine out of ten of them are eunuchs. I hope you can write well, save it first, and give me recommendations.
Most of the Panlong novels are written in random ways. Even the power system and cosmology in Panlong are randomly changed. They just use a few Panlong nouns. I don't know how this one is.
I wanted to borrow the light of the original work, so I changed the setting of the original work. If it were a new book, it would be acceptable, but as a fan, I really can't stand it.
If you don't know how to portray this younger brother, don't write it. You may want to use this younger brother to slap him in the face to advance the plot. This is really a bad idea.
Why are all gods outside the body? My personal feeling is that gods outside the body tend to be popular. People in this category are greedy for life. Everyone's first thought when thinking about becoming a god outside the body is that one life is gained by becoming a god outside the body. And three of the four rule masters are gods inside the body, all of which are Dzogchen. Death rules the rules for godhood outside the body, not the Great Perfection. He becomes a god outside the body, and he becomes a god inside the body. One is weak and the other is strong. And in the original work, it is mentioned that becoming a god outside the body is to split the origin of the soul, which will weaken your understanding of the rules. None of the Dzogchen in the original work has become a god outside the body. Let's just say that the protagonist in the original work is a four-soul mutated person, and he is not a Dzogchen. He just can't handle the fact that he is the protagonist, so he just cheats.
It's good to continue to expand on the settings of the original work, but be careful not to change the settings of the original work, but to expand it. Fan fiction should respect the original work to some extent, right? Even if you want to change it, you can change the rule system so that it can be divided into several mysteries, and then integrate the mysteries. This kind of change is the most difficult to accept. Because you want to change it so much, come up with a new routine if you have the ability. Don't apply the original book's setting of the law system to the rule system, mess with the original setting, pretend to be your own, and then say that this is your own innovation. The author is still stubborn and even quoted the original work, saying that the original work did not say that the rule system cannot be integrated with the occult. Let me just say one thing, if the rule system of the original work also divides the mysteries and then integrates the mysteries, then what is the difference between the cultivation route and the rule system? The original book has always said that the rule system is very special. This specialness is not only different in strength, but also the cultivation routes are different. The original book clearly states that the rule system is a whole, and how to cultivate to Dzogchen is different from the rule system.
The power of faith, you can actually check it out! Don't treat watching as a weakling who doesn't know how to think. If you want to know whether a plane believes in the Temple of Life, you can only go to the current plane to see with your own eyes. This is a certainty. The reason is: instead of pointing out who to believe in, ninety-nine percent of the beliefs are transmitted to the main godhead. How can you check it from the Temple of Life? ? This thing is impossible for even the Lord God to find, and the faith of one plane is not even comparable to that of countless planes.
Can be withdrawn
What's the use of this younger brother? He looks upset.
The system is confusing. After becoming a god, the protagonist inexplicably ascends to Shura. Is this trying to screen readers? ?
There are several great perfections formed in Panlong's body, and there are several great perfections that become gods outside the body. One is poor in early life-saving ability, but has high potential. The other is strong in early-stage life-preserving ability, but sacrifices potential. The world consciousness is fair. People who are talented and confident will 100% choose to become a god inside their body. In the original novel, NBC mostly doesn't know about it. Because when you become a god, the consciousness of the world only says that you can have multiple god clones outside your body, but does not mention the benefits of becoming a god inside your body. So when most people hear it, they think of one more god to distract themselves and multiple life-saving abilities to choose to become a god outside their body. This extracorporeal adult is equivalent to a small hidden reward in a game that needs to be discovered by others.
It seems unreliable for the protagonist to split the rules of life and then fuse them with the Mysterious. The Rule of Life is a whole. Even if you split it into several parts and name them Mysterious, a whole is still a whole. It will not be able to be fused like the Elemental Law just because you name the parts it is split into Mysterious. Your fusion is just a re-splicing of the separated Life Rules. How can the median god have the strength of a five-star and six-star demon like the Elemental Law 😅
The idea is good, but the writing is not attractive. It is a good thing to add too many of your own ideas. The problem is that your ideas must be consistent with the original work.
If one person studies life, it is better to find someone to reproduce it.
Is there anything that everyone thinks is bad that needs to be corrected?
This is my first time writing, so I don't know how it goes. If any readers feel that it doesn't work well, I will try my best to change it. Book reviews, chapter reviews, paragraph reviews, you can comment anywhere. I read comments every day. I really hope to have some interaction.
There are two questions in the first chapter. The first question is, does the protagonist's time travel and possession like this still count as a native life? If you don't count as a main god, you won't be able to enter. The second question is, after the non-god-level Panlong dies, his soul will go to the underworld. The original soul is in the underworld. How is the subsequent plot set? You don't want to inherit the human relationship, right? The rightful owner is still there.
It's so poisonous, I tried to persuade him to quit in the first two chapters.
It's pretty good. The setting of the fusion of the mysterious rules is different from the original work. Many people think it is a poisonous point, but it has little impact. Whether it is to fully understand it or to merge it into Dzogchen, I can do it. The most exciting thing is the exploration, exploration and study of life and the world itself, which surpasses most fans. Obtaining the main godhead is also based on layout and planning rather than the author's cheating, which is very comfortable. Linley is a four-element soul mutation plus four consistent main godheads. The same four rules should be relatively special and can be used as a reference point.
Many settings are different from the original work. It is recommended that the author carefully sort out the settings and details of the original work.
There is a sense of division, come on, I can't stand it 😭😭😭
It's too easy to break through. Many authors didn't understand the original work. Especially Dzogchen, which is really difficult to break through. It's rarer than the Lord God. Do you think it's difficult? In fact, it's also difficult to become a high-level god independently. Don't think that high-level gods are worthless.
Start with Oath of the Supreme God? ? ? ? ? ? ? There's a trap, right? The main god of the material plane doesn't understand anything and is the supreme god.
So becoming a god inside the body is simply Tomato's stupidest setting. He wrote down the potential of becoming a god inside the body as worthless. It's so stupid. The rules of heaven and earth specifically ask you when you become a god, do you want to become a god inside the body or outside the body? Why do so many things? Wouldn't it be nice to just set it to become a god outside the body? Therefore, fan fiction should make a big fuss about becoming a god within the body, breaking through the limitations of Tomato, and slapping Tomato in the face. This is what a good fan writer should do. Speaking of which, let me just come up with a wild idea! For example, the physical body of a god who becomes a god in the body is particularly powerful, or the probability of achieving Dzogchen is higher (the author is thinking about how high it is specifically), and then a setting is added that after completing Dzogchen in one system, you can then cultivate other systems, which is equivalent to having multiple godheads in the body and strengthening the body multiple times. Don't the main themes of Coiling Dragon like infinite lifespan? Then follow this main theme and give some benefits to those with less talent (Didn't Panlong always emphasize the flow of genius? Then most of us who read novels are ordinary people, don't we miss it? I'm going to counterattack, okay!). As long as you have great perseverance, becoming a god inside the body will eventually be very strong. At least it can compete with the multi-system Dzogchen of becoming a god outside the body. This is the final correct solution! Since ancient times, Taoism has focused on cultivating itself. It makes no sense that the clone flow is stronger. Xiao Huangshu's clone flow is still poisonous, right? Actually, I am not optimistic about the clone flow at all. The main body is the best and the human race is the master of the world! ! ! ! ! ! Otherwise, wouldn't the Rules of Heaven and Earth ask you specifically for the behavior of an idiot? Oh, just to tease you and give you a trap? Is it necessary? It has no emotions. Isn't this setting stupid? We can think of it this way, that is, the plot of the multiple clones was already figured out in a flash of tomato brain (easy to write), and the god in the body did not waste any effort to set it up (the pit was not filled in)! So what the fan author has to do is to help Tomato go further, and at the same time make himself famous for once. As long as your writing skills are good and the plot design is strong enough, this will be another masterpiece! It's a pity that many people are afraid of trolling (are they afraid of trolling because of the original work's party setting? Haha, readers are just following the crowd and have no brains. Do you understand? As long as the author writes well, some people will praise you and be afraid of it). I want to say that you will never become a great author if you are afraid of trolling!
Why do you have to forcefully add a mysterious fusion setting with rules that has no impact on the plot? Do you have to change the settings of the original work to appear original?
Please
Good brothers, please help me with some data for my children's new book. If it's not well written, don't leave and just scold me. The book is at the starting point. The title of the book starts with great luck. Great Luck Cultivation to Immortality.