I Grew up Wildly in the World of Heavens

The first chapter made me laugh. There is no time limit for running five kilometers a day, and if you can't complete it, you will be wiped out. Even so, I didn't finish it for two days in a row. I fainted immediately after finishing my run on the third day. Those who didn't know thought I had run 50 kilometers?

To be honest, as a former soldier, the human body cannot train your system 123 times a day. Unless you have been doing sports for several years before joining the army. But about your starting data, I can only say. The protagonist finished training on the first day and was unable to walk for several days afterward. Just practice knitting and wait for it to be wiped out!

Merit is merit, fault is fault, it is a joke to say that the merits and demerits offset each other, the author is really drunk when writing.

The writing is okay, but there is a problem. Why complicate simple things? Other books only add points on endurance, strength, speed, etc., But yours is actually divided into nine levels, and it's just about the physical aspect. The spiritual aspect is divided into six. There are fifteen in total, not including skills. I can't remember this! But if you keep reminding me. You may also feel that this is a waste of word count. So even though I've finished reading it, I still don't know what skills the protagonist has, what points have been added, and what level they are.

Soldier Assault is pretty cool to watch, and the crossover to Harry Potter is a bit scary. .

The most annoying thing is that the system will forcefully erase the host at every turn, and the entire puppet

In the world of Harry Potter, the books here have a falling rhythm. The underlying logic principles are different, and the author does not have a system to control it. The rhythm is falling apart.

After reading the introduction, the good guy jumped directly from the military to fantasy.

Come on, keep your own pace and read novels. Some people always read based on reality, so there is no need to worry about those people.

When a newcomer writes a book, be sure not to flatter yourself, because readers have not developed trust and tolerance for you. Readers will automatically leave if they can't keep up with your ideas. People who get excited about writing will forget that you are writing from the author's perspective. Readers must ask you to write it out before they can perceive it.

In fact, just two of them will be enough, physical fitness and mental strength. You can't keep increasing your strength without increasing the speed. It can only be said that if you keep increasing strength and don't add much at the beginning, other aspects will increase very little. The human body is interconnected. As your physique increases, your spirit will gradually become stronger. If you don't believe me, look at those who are physically weak and see if their spirit is poor.

I have never seen what the army looks like, but I felt frustrated and gave up.

This is a novel, what do you call real! Anyway, I added a bookshelf. Can watch

If you're not trying to be brave, you're just pretending to be B.

I really don't understand why I wrote about Harry Potter😓

I ran five kilometers in half an hour in one breath. In the past, when I ran ten kilometers with a heavy load, I was not as exhausted as the protagonist.

When will Harry Potter be over?

If the original work has a score of 10, then readers will be very satisfied if the fanfic has a score of 6 or 7. If the shortcomings of the original work can be made up for, it can be scored as an 8 or 9. But for the plot of the soldier assault, I give it a 0. The plot of getting into Old A was a climax in the original work. The author felt that he could not break through the level of the original work, so he simply forced the plot of Wu Liuyi onto the protagonist. This is the first time I have seen this kind of operation in the past ten years of reading online literature. This is not equivalent to handing in a blank paper when you go to the college entrance examination and think you can't pass Qingbei.

The more levels, the better. Let me help you think of a level: Beginner, Proficient, Mastery, Master, Master. These five levels are enough. We are not writing about fantasy, so why write about the world?

After reading the latest chapter, I know that the author is paving the way to avoid some problems later. So I went to the United States to play baseball or study abroad, but the author never considered one question: should you write a copy or a real-life manifestation? When writing a copy, just write about one chapter or 2 to 3 chapters about reality and you're done. Just don't write too much. When writing about reality, do you feel like you can grasp both lines? I'm afraid that the author will collapse later, so I just lie flat and write!

Brother, please finish "Harry Potter" quickly.

The writing is very good and I could add more special forces characters from military-themed TV series! Doesn't have to be extraordinary

I still think we can add more military themes~