I Traveled Back and Forth Between the Apartment and the Messy World

Author, it's almost 100 chapters. When will you go to the apartment?

It's boring. The heroine is very powerful and although they are in two worlds, they are still essentially two heroines. Don't say that the two worlds are separate. The heroines are two people with completely different personalities even though they look the same. The most annoying urban dramas, especially Love Apartment, have multiple female protagonists.

What aesthetic is this? Why do you like this neutral one? I feel that Liu Yifei, Lin Wanru, and Aunt Tang are all better looking than that Zhuge Dali.

Among the few books I have read recently, I feel that Hu Qiang's Decision is better than this one. I feel that there are very few writing about elite fan fiction. The author makes a suggestion. The emotional line is too sloppy. It is better to write it better. Only when the emotional line is written better can readers have a sense of involvement. For example, when you first fall in love with Zhuge Dali, you can basically mention it in one stroke. You can refer to the decision of Hu Qiang, another fan of "Bloody Elite". After all, the author of that book had a romantic relationship for 5 or 6 days. It would be better if you can write the emotional line in a more detailed way (but not too watery)👍

The setting of this book is indeed good, at least I have never seen such a novel writing method. But I still want to recommend my novel "A Certain Irresistible Broke Manager" 😂😂😂

Zhuge Dali

Daliwen again? What kind of aesthetic is the starting point?

I'm thinking about a question. If Dali and Mo Fei both become the protagonist's girlfriends, it would be embarrassing for the protagonist to wake up one morning and shout the wrong name during the double penetration.

Readers please collect it! There are still nine collections to go, one more chapter!

It's so funny that we go back and forth between the two worlds. Chapter 19 begins with romance, chapter 149 returns to love, and chapter 130 of romance. We just want to write about more than just nonsense. The highlight is obviously that we are going back and forth between two worlds. Why do we keep writing about nonsense?

Ouyang Murphy

Come on, among the fics I've read recently about apartments and messy things, this one is pretty good. Especially the setting where the two worlds are separate yet connected is eye-catching.

Well, my evaluation is that the setting is good, but the writing is a bit rough. It feels like you are following the plot too quickly. Oh, by the way, do you plan to follow the plot all the time?

If I remember correctly, are these two worlds under the same worldview? In the past and in the future, I remember that Po Shier was linked to "Love Apartment".

A rare first! !

Let me count on my fingers whether your writing will be long.

It was pretty good at the beginning, but as we approach chapter 80, Ouyang is described like a child who likes to tease people and has no common sense 😅

Copy the original plot, then why are you writing novels? We might as well watch TV series. We have no idea what novels to write.

The Zhuge Dali you wrote is not like Zhuge Dali at all, and it does not fit her character at all. What you write is directly about an ordinary girl in love. It's not at all in line with Dali's rationality and the persona of a love novice. Do you think: Humph! So bad! Is this what Zhuge Dali would say? She is a straight woman. See for yourself what it looks like.

Shalele is more beautiful than the heroine. She should have breasts.

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Broken? Or are you going on vacation too?

This novel looked okay at the beginning, but in the end there was basically nothing to read, because it basically followed the plot, and there was nothing of his own. The protagonist was like a transparent person. I just wanted to ask the author if he could come up with something of his own. It's really like putting it on the shelf and displaying it as a human being.

In what age are you still wearing double-wear? Can't we merge the two worlds together?