Douluo Dalu: I’m Loved by Everyone for Pretending to Be Obedient

Liu Erlong is actually quite fascinated by the original work. Tang Hao was banned at the age of 44, the master was younger, and Liu was the master's sister. She should have been in her 40s when Tang San entered Lanba at the age of 12. Isn't this 100% banned? This is still raising flowers and grass all day long. It won't be a problem to practice well for 80 years, but it depends on the family's facial expressions. In another 10 years, the account will basically be banned. If you want to marry the master, the family will have to tie Yu Xiaogang and give it to her. I don't believe that Lan Dian will fight against his own account for the sake of face. The only drawback is that the master may not be able to do it if he is an ordinary person in his 50s or 60s, and if Zaoliu dies, he may have to remain a widow for a hundred or two hundred years, emmm, it is still inappropriate 😊

There are too many typos! ! And isn't the leader of the Blue Lightning Tyrannosaurus Sect named Yu Yuanzhen? Isn't Liu Erlong's father named Yu Luo Mian? Haven't all the original works been published?

The ending is unfinished because many things were not clarified and ended in a hurry. The emotional line of the heroine, whether Xiao Ao can recover, the status of the protagonist group, the changes in the world of gods, and many previous pitfalls were not filled in.

I don't want to say it, but the soul power levels are all wrong, and the protagonist doesn't have any points to upgrade himself to any level?

What? Flanders' daughter? Nausea

What about that? Can you recommend what you wrote? I just didn't feel confident when I just wrote it. I don't know how to write it.

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