Naruto: Starting as Tsunade's Classmate

I think in this development direction, you are already called Aokiji, and you still learn fate... It is not necessary. I guess many people want to see Aokiji's large-scale ice. Ice Age cannot use it. Aokiji has also used the small-scale ice skill. Of course, I am not against using fate. Transition or something like that, it's just that you come up with this name, and you don't use any of them. You're just thinking and looking for a fate... That's not right, right? It's not like you can't use small-scale ones. You can just write a Qing Pheasant that's more famous. At least it gives you something to look forward to.

Okay, okay, the plot of Naruto, the name of the pirate, and the cover of Death, right? It mainly focuses on one hand, three points to return to the vitality, and ninety-seven points to luck.

I think the protagonist should be a rebellious nin now, and he's already been treated like this

No, does anyone really have this kind of aesthetics? A crystal-like thing is inlaid on the head, and the ears turn into elf ears. Is this really good-looking? It feels so weird. Please write it well, don't add everything, just like the plastic surgery women nowadays, with their faces full of technology and ugly.

Asura + Indra = Samsara Eye, has nothing to do with Senju Uchiha

Regarding the last few chapters, the protagonist's emotional intelligence suddenly dropped off a cliff. Does the author have anything to quibble with?

It's boring to write so many stories about psychic beasts. Isn't it just an extension of the original world view when reading fan fiction? If you try to create a new one, the relevance will be smaller. The relevance will become smaller, and the sense of immersion will be reduced.

1. The protagonist is sexually impotent. In the early stage, he was afraid that Tsunade's boyfriend would die, so he did not dare to reveal his affection for Tsunade. Later, he was afraid that Tsunade would become pregnant and Madara would use Tsunade to open his eyes, so he did not dare to touch Tsunade. He's been teasing me, and when he gets serious, he's making up lame excuses. 2. It's cool but not pretentious. There is no difference between Ice Escape and Wind, Fire, Earth, Thunder and Water. Without writing down the characteristics, it is just a guise of blood inheritance limit. He didn't dare to use the Sharingan because he was afraid of being jealous in the village. He never won a fight and felt aggrieved. 3. The author also eats books. Without touching Tsunade, Danzo would have been sent away with just one mission, and he would have died. The Sharingan was exposed casually without functioning, and the previous article was completely in vain. I spent so much time making excuses and analyzing in the early stage. Once the real story is revealed, the protagonist's IQ drops to zero. When the plot needs to advance, the protagonist's IQ is forcibly reduced. 4. Correction later. It may be that the author listened to the advice and decided not to lose his wits. After opening Xian Sangua and Kaleidoscope, and knowing the plot, he could only push forward without losing his wits. When I turned eighteen, I finally stopped looking for lame excuses and started driving hard. It's not a masterpiece, but it's worth looking forward to the integrated version or the next one.

Didn't see what I wanted to see

Why doesn't it develop in the direction of rebellion? It feels more interesting.