Ningchuan Covering the Sky

It's so rubbish, I'm going to puke Any passerby who is a prodigy can fight with the protagonist, any person with the level of three emperors in the dynasty can beat the protagonist as if he were 🐷. Hahahahahaha, the Six-Crown Champion will laugh to death if he finds out, as someone who can compete with the Ten-Crown Champion in the early stage.

The author's writing of the protagonist is really rubbish. The protagonist is currently slightly better than the Holy Prince. The Holy Prince can fight against young men. Most of the great emperors and ancient emperors are weaker than the protagonist in the same realm. It takes a lot of effort to defeat a few passers-by. Such rubbish passers-by probably don't even have one ban. They can stand up to two or three bans. Don't think that the genius is a mess. I remember When he was able to transform into a dragon, Ye Fan defeated Xianyi. At that time, he had just crossed eight small realms, and the opponent didn't have a single ban. They were still in Sendai in the Daoji era, and the gold content was much higher than that in the ancient times. There were only four bans in the early stage of the big moon, and then he was randomly killed by the god on the ancient road. You, the protagonist, can't be weaker than the god, right? Is this useless passerby worthy of touching the big porcelain moon? The emperor-level passers-by should be killed instantly. Only the top prodigies of the same generation who have the status of saints or even great saints can take a few moves from the protagonist. You are not in the golden age, how many awesome ones can you have? And the battle has not yet ended, all the really awesome geniuses should have died on the imperial road before. In the protagonist's era, there are probably very few geniuses on the Beidou side who have the qualifications of a great sage, and most of the emperors have never fought against particularly valuable opponents. To put it bluntly, based on the performance of the protagonist, don't go to prove it, just seal it to Ye Fan's period and lick Ye Fan, and then directly enter the heaven. It is more realistic to sneak into the fairyland.

The passers-by are written as too strong, and Ningchuan Emperor's son is really easy to kill against those of the same level. In the original Golden Girl, in her time, the strongest person only took a few moves from her and was defeated. It's unreasonable for a few of you to be so strong.

Why don't you proclaim yourself the Three Heavenly Emperors and destroy the strange ancestor? After all, I'm afraid of death if I lick a dog like this

The author should not have allowed the protagonist to preach on the day when the Dou Zhan Holy Emperor fell. The great changes in the ancient world and the ancient emperor's fall were the most severe suppression. The first emperor of heaven who ended the ancient times and started a new era always feels that the first and last enlightened person in each era are very strong.

It turned out to be a beast with scales and horns, and fine hair.

Come on, the idea is very good, just become the emperor in this world, there is no point in sealing it for future generations.

Don't seal the protagonist and directly achieve enlightenment in this life.

Against the odds, the author is writing it purely as a matter of course, and does not understand the value of being a prodigy at the level of the Young Emperor of the World that covers the sky. Ordinary passers-by at the same level would not be able to break the defense at all against those at the Young Emperor level. Beating passers-by for a day won't hurt their fur. Being suppressed by the young emperor's momentum caused him to vomit blood and was seriously injured. He died with a wave of his hand.

Is there no eunuch in this book yet? Is this the most trashy protagonist in the Zhetian fanfic?

They all claim to be self-proclaimed. How can such a rubbish protagonist become enlightened?

How many years have been wasted from the ancient times to the later generations. The first emperor and the last emperor of each era have special meanings. They carry the beginning and end of the era. They are blessed by the era and can become the helper of the immortal road in the mortal world. The master leads the door. The cultivation depends on oneself. Even if you can't pass the Tao, you still have not enough cultivation and your will is not firm!

The battle strength has begun to be suppressed again. Even the saints of a small planet race cannot be crushed. This is not the golden age. Is this a prince-level genius? Still want to dominate the old road?

You can still watch it in front of me, but I can't stand it anymore when I declare myself to be in Ye Fan's era.

What you wrote in Chapter 25 is really impressive. You hit a few passers-by and were injured. With your talent and divine power, shouldn't you be able to kill the bad guys in an instant? .

The ancient emperors were not as good as their children when they were young. The emperor's children are guaranteed to be at the ninth level of the emperor, a strong alternative to enlightenment. The emperor's son and princess are guaranteed to be eight forbidden in their teenage years. The divine forbidden is not difficult. If you write the protagonist to be stronger than the holy prince, then the fourth level of the protagonist will at least have the eight forbidden combat power. Immortal one and immortal two can touch the divine forbidden. But every passerby of yours has contact with the protagonist. Does every second-hand character have the appearance of a great emperor?

The protagonist's behavior of betraying his own ethnic group and licking the human race is now called a traitor. Damn it, this author is so awesome that he hasn't given up yet. How many people are watching? How much money can you make? If you have perfect attendance, you will need 300 subscriptions. Is 300 enough? Point out in the comment area that your questions are not just one or two, but at least add 0. To sum up, this book can definitely be ranked as the worst Zhetian fanfic.

Ning Chuan actually felt like vomiting. When I read what you wrote, I felt like vomiting.

You can slip away, the protagonist is sealed to Ye Fan's era, and the plot begins next!

In such a young age as the ancient emperor, you can't even survive the tribulation? Take a look at what you wrote? A humanoid lightning who has transcended the quasi-emperor realm through the Dao Dao Tribulation, and Ye Fan's four extremes of transcending heaven and punishment are not as exaggerated as you. Are you still kidding? Just commit suicide. And he slept for hundreds of thousands of years. Are you unable to write about the age of ancient mythology? If you can't continue writing, don't write about that mythical era to keep your appetite.

So what is the significance of this protagonist? In this era, we still live in peace with Ye Fan. What about the Immortal Emperor? He is fighting Wu Shi to death. How to deal with the grudges between the Holy Prince and the Heavenly Prince? Why does it feel like the protagonist is just a mess? Apart from being enlightened and improving his strength, nothing has been dealt with.

I don't want to watch it when I see the protagonist proclaiming himself to the Ye Fan period. With your talent, you can still watch it until you can suppress it and dissipate from the Dou Zhan Holy Emperor Road to preach, but if you directly seal it to the Houhuanggu, a million years of time will be wasted.

The Emperor's Son (Supreme Son) is a piece of shit. He is still facing off against the Six-Crown King. He is just a descendant of the Supreme. Even if he grows up to the top, he will be compared with Jin Taijun (Jin Taijun can also compete with the top of the Jida a few times, which is a different kind of enlightenment at least).

When writing about Ning Chuan's fights with others, the author kept emphasizing that the protagonist could easily defeat his opponent if he just wanted to, but the fact is that the opponent can always fight with him for a long time, and even use some special methods to make the protagonist suffer. He also did not write about the protagonist's sense of relaxation when he deliberately let go. It feels like the protagonist clearly has the best equipment but cannot use it at all.

I, Ning Chuan, will always be the most loyal dog in the human race! ! !

After reading a few chapters, my opinion is that the writing is excellent, comparable to that of high school students.

Monkey was attacked by the Immortal in his later years and destroyed the Immortal Dojo. It is very likely that he also sealed the Immortal Taoist. Ning Fei should not take action. Even if the peak Douzhan royal family does not have a prince born, there should be no less quasi-emperors or even quasi-nine. After the Immortal Taoist broke the seal, most of the Douzhan lineage was reduced, so they should not all die.

I don't understand what the author wrote. It feels very messy. The combat power is a bit broken

What a talent. If you can't write, don't write blindly. During the period of the Great Sage, Di Que could definitely take the elixir of immortality + some things that replenish longevity to extend his lifespan. When he reaches the quasi-nine level, he can use the divine liquid to seal himself, and he can attain enlightenment after the fighting path is gone. But in the end, Di Que simply took the elixir and lived out his third life before he became enlightened? ? With this strength, what's the use even if he becomes a saint and lives in his fourth life? I'm afraid that even the third generation of the Holy Spirit cannot be defeated, and three lifetimes will be wasted! It would be better to just take away an Immortal Gold Holy Spirit! Haha, originally, even if Di Que couldn't become a worldly immortal due to his talent, he would still have no problem living as an emperor in the fifth or sixth life. He might not be able to reach the Heavenly Emperor level in three lives, but as a result, with the author's tricks, whether he could live in the fifth life was still a problem. And he is also the weakest fourth emperor in history! The truth of the fourth generation is ≌ the second stone emperor < the first life has no beginning. Haha, you have turned the truth into a joke. The truth of the four generations is not as good as the beginningless life. Hahaha, awesome! Besides, I don't understand what the protagonist was doing during Ye Fan's time? You wait until Di Que Dao dissipates and become an emperor, and then abandon the former Taoism and live out the second life to prove the Dao again like the emperor; or secretly plot the restricted area, swallow a few supreme Tao fruits, live out the second life, and then reverse your own path, and follow the path of immortality in the ancient era. Isn't it better than you proving the Tao during Ye Fan's time? Do you have to waste time? How do you deal with the dark turmoil behind it? Or do you think you have the talents and talents of the Three Heavenly Emperors? Can he become a quasi-immortal emperor in more than two to three million years? The best time period for a time traveler is the time period before ancient times, so that you have enough time to become a mortal immortal, and you can become an immortal king during Ye Fan's period. It takes a million more years to practice than Ye Fan and other three emperors. However, the protagonist wastes this time so hard that he is also a talent.

I'm too lazy to comment on this writing style. Did you fly here? How can a junior high school student gain the confidence to write about Zhetian fanfiction?