The Zhenwu Emperor Who Covers the Sky

We have already written about the ancient people who covered the sky and the earth. Why not be bolder and write about the overlord who traveled through Western Chu? The combination of double pupils and domineering body is also very exciting! Hang up and go straight to the Fighting Immortal Road.

Author, you have your own ideas, but you are too self-centered. The initial idea was good, but then you married a, well, how should I put it, a vase, not even a vase. Does she help you practice? Need to continue the family line? Especially when the protagonist, the teacher, talks to matchmakers, the targets are still mortals, and strictly speaking, there is no sense of picture. In establishing a dynasty in the world of Zhetian, I feel that the lessons learned by Emperor Yuhua are not profound enough. If you want to write about a female protagonist, please don't write about one without character traits. Too inconsistent.

After reading the introduction, I knew it was a bad article. Why should I write about the Ming Dynasty when writing about Zhe Tian? If I want to write well about both, it means that neither of them can write well. Without that writing style, Zhe Tian is not as good as becoming an immortal emperor or an emperor in the mythical era and resurrecting nine worlds of mortals as an immortal. He lays out his plans in the world, gives birth to children early, preserves his own power, and deliberately suppresses the dark turmoil. I have read too many articles. It is boring. It is a nanny article, or it is only a historical article about how to choose China. The Han dynasty built for Li Zicheng was taken away, the Qing army was not allowed to enter the customs, and the three legs were protected. The protagonist destroyed the Southern Ming and the Qing Dynasty, ruled the world, kept the throne, and restricted the imperial rule. The industrial revolution would impact his dynastic rule. Do you choose whether your dynasty is gone, let the industrial revolution enter the country, or choose to give up the future development of China for your own country like the Qing Dynasty, etc. Writing both is shit, and I can't hold it without the writing style.

Judging from the introduction, the ingredients are really complex, and it's a bad idea that's thrown off the market.

I'm tired of seeing the Nine Dragons pulling the coffin at the beginning. I've always wanted to see people practicing on the earth, at least ten to dozens or hundreds of years old. Not to mention as strong as Yanhuang Emperor and I, it's enough to have the Immortal Stage realm, and to interfere less with reality.

The idea is very good, and my parents and relatives can accept it when going up the mountain, but playing with other relatives makes me frown. Master, the protagonist, I did not entrust you with the inheritance to turn the mountain gate into private property. Even if you don't want to, can a sect be pure if there are too many people? Especially the baby girl, it's upsetting to watch, you either don't write it, or you write it well, but I don't think the heroine can be so amazing in writing, so what's the use of having a background board. I don't think I can resonate with the ancient people's views. How deep of a relationship can you, an adult, have with your ancient childhood playmates?

The protagonist is missing in three chapters, and the main plot is missing in ten chapters. How did you sign the contract◔‸◔?

The author has profound skills, smooth writing, full length, and elegant words. Damn it, I could finish it in two or three chapters, but I ended up writing more than ten chapters.

When you write about the Ming Dynasty, it's just a good word count. What's the use of the dynasty background? To fight Manchu people? Then you might as well write history.

From all the Zhetian fanfics I have read, I feel that this one is written like a short story.

It's too fragmented and abstract. Monks who could fly out of the planet to face catastrophe led hundreds of thousands of people to build the Yangtze River Bridge 🤤🤤🤤. In official history, there were monks throughout the dynasties who helped mortal monarchs conquer the world 🤤🤤🤤

Daming still needs to be saved. If you are worried about the impact on Ye Hei, you can consider moving Daming to the starry sky. If you want to become an emperor, you must have the power to rule.

I flipped through two or three pictures in a row, but I couldn't figure out who the protagonist was? What's the point of having such a long word count? Readers can't keep it.

The protagonist is so closely connected with the secular world at the beginning, so why don't you use the earth as a dojo, change the direction of history, and become the ancestor of humanity to lead the prehistoric human race to change their paths and embark on the path of cultivating civilization? In the end, it's still the same old routine of going to Beidou to fight monsters and upgrade, so what's the point of starting on Earth? Eat it without hardship🤔

It's a pity that half of the plot is useless. The identity of the Zhu family and the historical conflicts of the dynasties are completely unnecessary in a fanfiction like Zhetian. There are problems at the beginning. I will not order it again.

There are more than ten chapters of Jiligulu ahead. If you don't fight, who will?

Did the author want to write about an ordinary practitioner or what? What kind of fanfic can you write about Zhetian? If you want to become an emperor in the future, you will have to cheat, like the system or something, otherwise the protagonist will not have any catastrophes in the four extremes, how difficult it is.

You can understand the mortals who cover the sky as casual cultivators. Ye Fan's first encounter with the Taiyin body. What Li family, what Wang family, every cultivator comes out, and there is a god. What kind of mortals and dynasties are you writing here? Are they saints enough? With one slap, covering the sky is originally a battlefield.

It would be too boring to just write about disciples.

There are no golden fingers to fill in the pits. This book cannot be read. The plot is poisonous, brainless, novice, abusive, pitfalls, childish, fluency, writing, everything will be bad. If you can't surpass the fans who have finished the book, why are you reading this book? Time travel is also unreasonable. Do you think your soul is a super immortal emperor? Brainless routines from ancient times.

I can't stand it anymore, it's such a mess. I haven't even seen the protagonist in three chapters. OK, you want to write it in detail, but what's behind it?

Are you a practitioner? You can either just write without a female protagonist, or you can. Isn't it good to write about those familiar people in Zhetian? I have to write one myself. Are you talented? Or just write it without a female protagonist?

Following the plot is the biggest failure

If you don't like a heavy weapon like the Bell Cauldron Tower, you can change it to something else, but don't give up on your sword. As soon as the protagonist made this choice, I knew that the author was dead. It can be seen from the name that the weapon carrying the path is used to carry its own path. It must be distinguished from the weapon protecting the path. The swords of Shi Hao and Renren were both picked up to protect the path. It can be seen from the original work of the trilogy that weapons such as swords, guns, swords and sticks have little future as weapons for carrying the Tao, and they will be at a disadvantage when competing with other heavy weapons. The purpose of the sword itself is also very poor, it only has a fighting role. It also indicates that the character is trapped in a fate of constant fighting. Stopping fighting means silence. Most of those who carry this kind of weapon will not end well. For example, the emperor died suddenly in the coffin, and it felt like a roadside; the holy emperor was too strong and easily broken, and failed to transform into a war immortal; the immortal emperor fell into darkness; the past immortal emperors were also paralyzed by pollutants.

This name combined with the context, it can be seen that it is the protagonist's eucharistic son, but this name has this effect on my mobile phone 😅

What kind of novel is this? It makes no sense. It doesn't distinguish between four and six. It's a change of dynasties in this world. I wrote two hundred chapters. Don't write novels that are different from others.

I tasted the saltiness and it was indeed not delicious.

I reviewed a dozen of them before commenting! The writing is so detailed! According to what the author wrote, it would be an exaggeration to write it to the end!

The author has some ideas for this book, and I feel the creativity is quite good. I wanted to read a book about traveling through ancient times that covers the sky, and then start practicing spiritual practice. However, the author did not write the main character in the first few chapters, and the heroine is not a familiar female character in the original work. It is too willful.

I remember that someone seemed to have written a book before, and it also traveled to a person named Zhu Gaohuang or something, who was also a clan member of the Ming Dynasty. It is also a worldview that covers the sky.