Trainer in the Card World

This book is very embarrassing, because the author doesn't want to be a fan and can't innovate, so he just uses the Pokémon template.

There is one thing to say, and the writing is okay, but why can't fan information appear? If you insist on being original, you might as well change your direction. The magical monsters look so awkward, and there is no sense of empathy at all...

Mountain rabbit, very cute, right? It seems to be an auxiliary skill, and the skill is also an auxiliary skill. But once you put on the output-type Taming Soul Breaking Set, a single ultimate move can also produce explosive output damage. Nickname: Yamata Rabbit.

Just play the Crusu card. You will go crazy when I play this card.

At the beginning, when I wrote about the little firebird reaching the speed of light, I knew the author's academic level 🙂🙂🙂 If you study less, write less words like this, okay?

Half-modifying, half-borrowing and not-borrowing, and its impact on the senses... How could there be such a stupid approach...

It's very uncomfortable to watch. Every time I see a card name, I have to think of which Pokémon it corresponds to. It's a bit taxing. Can't I just use the original name? , It's really uncomfortable to look at it like this, it might as well be your own original creation.

What do you say about this book? I wanted to write an original fanfic, so I changed the name so that people know what I was talking about, and I also wrote about politics in the fanfic, Liuliuda

Readers only want to read about pets, so why write so much about business, politics and human affairs? What a pity for such an interesting subject

There are many cute animals with rich personalities living in Fairy Tale Animal Crossing, look! This is the little bunny, this is the kitten, this is the puppy, this is the pony, this is the little fox, this is them playing hide and seek, this is the animal mother, this is the god-killing weapon Arceus!

I just read Chapter 2. To make cards, you need to create an illusion or communicate with the illusion. The illusion will slowly turn into the virtual world. The virtual world will expand and the cracks in the virtual world will increase. Then when faced with war, humans will work hard to create the illusion and make cards. There will be more and more cracks in the virtual world, and finally there will be too many to control the human beings, hahaha.

If you want to write about political struggles, you should write a historical article. What is the point of writing this in a Pokémon Plus Cards article? . .

Pink🐰

It's either original or fan fiction. The current situation is that it's embarrassing to watch Pokémon if you like it, and you don't feel immersed in it if you haven't watched Pokémon.

It's hard to understand. I think it's easy to open a store, and the power of the great system directly abducts pets and sells them to destined people. Good guy, I thought it was an academy style at first glance, but it turned out to be an invincible novel. Then, I just played the game and then switched to the scheming mayor and military commander. There is also the historical issue of the five surnames and seven looks, which are directly integrated into 12 families here. This can easily give wrong information to people who do not understand history In short, the author is too stitched together and stuffs everything into it.

Can we just have Pokémon? Just Pokémon? It looks like a magical monster or something. Moreover, if the setting of the fantasy world can be made by oneself, I don't think there will be a so-called contempt chain. Instead, I have to be wary of any seemingly weird cards. How to say it? Novels like yours that set up a "fantasy world" somewhat despise people's imagination in order to highlight the special characteristics of the protagonist.

I read the latest chapter straight away. How can I put it, the setting is very interesting, but the previous Pokémon chapters are too embarrassing. Fans are just fans, and the names have to be changed. If you really write fan fiction, maybe there will be more Pokémon readers. Then, there are about forty chapters in the middle about politics. The concepts inculcated in these chapters are that the protagonist is weak and the world is complicated. There are those who help him and those who use him. But you have written too many chapters. This is a Yuju-style novel, not a novel about officialdom struggle. You are already so top-heavy that you can't distinguish priorities? What everyone wants to read about beast-control novels is novel beast-control and settings. If you say you want to be a scholar, that's fine, then you can also do research and science and technology. But you have to focus on describing human nature and sophistication. This is completely inconsistent with the theme, right?

Recommend a software to the author to facilitate search

Brother, can you simplify your language? Take a look at the first five chapters you wrote and see what the main content is! Is there one-fifth of the work?

It's not anything, but how is this department given? Does looking cute mean you are a cute creature? What about the fantasy species of Long Dream? What about the dragon species? Forget it that the Clow cards need to be matched. If the chestnut ball is not included in the chuck, how can it not be used?

I feel like it's getting more complicated the more I write. The protagonist's personality seems to have changed. Cowardly

See for yourself

Cute equals weak?