After Listening to the Advice: I Became a Male God with Both Ability and Political Integrity.

I hope the author can provide some improvements. I initially found two bugs. The first is that the protagonist in Chapter 7 withdraws 700 yuan from the system and puts it into the Chinese language book, but there is no system reward money in front! The second is that in the first chapter, it is said that the protagonist is an orphan, but in Chapter 36, it is said that the aunt communicated with the protagonist's father and was worried about his grades!

The writing is good and the creativity is good. In fact, it is already half successful. I sincerely suggest again, don't always revolve around women, let the protagonist write poems, articles, videos, sports competitions, scientific research, etc. Don't worry if there is no story line. There is really no need to revolve around women. This kind of conflict and slap-in-the-face plot is not that exciting now. There is also a conflict with the protagonist who works hard and listens to advice. It's even more exciting to be slapped in the face by a career rivalry. Just like the previous plots about weight loss and fitness, the plot of trying to become excellent caught the eye immediately. If the author feels that what I said is wrong, he can also delete the comment. I wish you over 10,000 subscriptions.

The writing is good, but the inner drama of the girl is a bit awkward. I guess the author has never had a girlfriend 😁

It's well written, but I don't know why it's so difficult to substitute for sweet stories now. Maybe it's because the current trend of male-female antagonism on the Internet is so strong that I've been affected to some extent. I feel that the girls in sweet stories are incompatible with girls in reality, and there's a sense of unreality in my subconscious. I don't know if it's just me or everyone feels this way!

I was disgusted with the anti-theft chapter and even ordered it by mistake 😰

Who is the heroine? Single heroine or multiple heroines?

This book is very healing and the writing is also very good. Come on, thank you.

Don't just build top-notch stuff right away, develop slowly.

Feedback said that the protagonist's appearance was too low in the early stage, so I enhanced it a bit, and it should be about the same now.

Author, your creativity is good, and it allows you to have extraordinary power. I hope you can write well and avoid any major poisonous points! You seem to me to be a fusion of two genres in this genre, come on!

The author writes so well, why are there so many haters who keep criticizing the author? I really can't understand it. Is it difficult to admit that the author is excellent?

The author writes so well, why are there so many haters who keep criticizing the author? I really can't understand it. Is it difficult to admit that the author is excellent?

The author writes so well, why are there so many haters who keep criticizing the author? I really can't understand it. Is it difficult to admit that the author is excellent?

The grooming male god is similar to you

Isn't this a copied idea of ​​cultivating a male god? Even the title of the book is almost the same

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Chapter 87: Setting conflict deleted and re-edited

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Aren't the protagonist's parents dead? Why does her aunt say she still calls from time to time? What are you doing?

After taking it, the anti-theft agent immediately persuaded me to leave. My scalp felt numb and intermittently.