The Second Master in My Family

{"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New Book Trial Reading"} [Content]: Sweet youth, sweet love, relaxed daily life, this book is mainly a daily love novel. The master the male protagonist met while writing an online novel turned out to be a middle school girl with a quirky younger sister. Two girls with two different styles, what kind of sparks will be created in life? [Book Title]: The Second Master in My Family [Author]: Sweet and Sour Kou Zheyue Ling Jing (so strange) [Tag]: Love, daily life, light novel, campus [Status]: 150,000 words serialized (last It shouldn't be too long) [Recommendation Index]: 🌟🌟🌟🌟 [Evaluation]: The male protagonist and the female protagonist are both online novel authors. If the main plot is about daily love, then the side plot should be the progress of the male protagonist's novel. Master's character is relatively middle-class and... Strange? My younger sister's character tends to be adventurous and try her best to kill herself. I like both heroines so far. The shortcoming is that the plot is not very ups and downs, but this is normal for a light-hearted novel. The beginning is quite attractive, and it becomes more and more interesting later on. The writing style is also very comfortable. Overall, it is a very good article. Picture: Ling'er (I like Ling'er very much)

Expressing dissatisfaction: Is there any relationship between the words pure love and harem?

Does your master know about this novel you wrote? 😏

I have watched relatively few of them. Among the girls who write books on male channels and are relatively popular, I have the impression that one is Wutong who writes about life-style games, and the other is Cao Jie who writes about Shenzhou III. Then others really have no impression.

@All members All 18 chapters uploaded the day before yesterday have been rewritten and can be read independently as short stories exclusive to my sister.

{"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New book trial reading"} [Recommendation]: This is a daily romance novel. The main body of the novel is probably the male protagonist and his teacher. The daily interaction between Zun and his sister is very sweet. The two heroines described by the author are very distinctive and are impressive characters. The writing is delicate and the narration comes slowly and unhurriedly. The content is very attractive. The three golden chapters will pull you into this novel at once. [Work]: "The Two Masters in My Family" [Author]: Sweet and Sour Kou Yue Prism [Number of Words]: 80,000 words [Status]: Serialization [Tags]: City, Love, Daily [Plot Tips]: Lin Zeshu, an author of online articles, met in real life with his master Li Qianrui in the online articles. Unexpectedly, the master who was very good at describing fighting scenes turned out to be a cute girl. This gave Lin Zeshu a contrast, and she was very good in reality, which I really liked. In reality, his half-sister also liked him. In this way, the story of Lin Zeshu and the two girls slowly unfolded. [Review Tips]: In my opinion, most urban romance novels have one heroine, so that they can keep telling the story, but the author of this novel wrote two heroines, both of whom are very cute girls, but I didn't find it annoying. It can be said that the author's description of the heroine is very lovable, and the author is very good at using bit by bit descriptions and behavioral descriptions to highlight the heroine's personality. Also, the author's response to the previous and later contexts is also very good. The plot structure is very in place, full of life style, and very consistent with reality. The author combines these and I like it very much. [Audience]: If you are a reader who likes romance themes, come and read it. The characters are really well portrayed.

When I first saw this title, I thought: Where is the master🧐

Master hehe~Master~

Qianbao

After reading Cat Girl, why do we have two female protagonists? Brother Run is not that kind of mindless harem. The descriptions of the two girls are quite good, but the pure love warrior really can't stand the two girls. Come back for the next book. Good luck, author.

This plot looks like Dao Mengmeng. If you are happy now, you will be sad later. No, I want to watch the happy ending 😭

Why are there so few people? It's so well written.

The description of the characters in this book is very delicate, and the images of both the protagonist and the supporting characters are three-dimensional and full. It is a significant improvement over the previous book and has been supported by monthly tickets. However, I felt that some plots were over-emphasized. For example, the plot conflict and climax of the hospital episode were not strong enough. The entire deletion did not seem to affect the development of the plot. I just hope that this episode will end as soon as possible. I hope the next plot after being discovered by my mother can bring a new climax.

Aren't you going to open a new book😢

This is the first novel where I hope my contribution points can earn 500 points quickly.

Title of the new book: "Wanli Literary Man, Starting from Buying the Maid Sisters" Original title: "Why do you only bully your sister, and what about the slave family?" I traveled through time as a dandy, studying alone in Nanjing, and met a pair of trembling little maids selling food in a tooth shop. My sisters are still Hu Ji, they are naked and pitiful. After buying it, the family had two more little mouths to eat, and encountered difficulties again, so he had to pick up a brush and let the people of Ming Dynasty see something good in advance. From then on, he was out of control and skyrocketed. He became a guest of literary giants and the leader of poetry circles, leaving his name in history. My sister has brown hair, a high nose and deep eyes. She can go to the hall or the kitchen. She has a gentle and pleasant temperament and takes good care of him in every possible way. If I have any shortcomings, it is that I am very jealous. "Master, you have lost weight again, and you can no longer hold the flesh on your face. I will cook whatever you want... This hair smells so good, whose hair is it?" My sister is silver-haired and blue-eyed, petite and cute. You either avoid people when you go out, or you are as cold as ice, but you grumble and cling to people at home. My elder sister always thought that my younger sister only regarded him as her brother, but in fact... "Dad..." The roommate looked at him and smiled with a playful look on his face, his slender legs kept crossing each other, and his shiny fingertips were shaking, making it difficult to tell the real person from the fake. The little Taoist nun is a daughter of a well-known family. She is a talented poet and painter. Ordinarily, he should be waiting for purgation, but he jumps up and down all day long and indulges in martial arts practice. He always wants to act chivalrously and become a hero of the generation. "I'm not afraid of pain, come on... Master, why don't I call you master!" Sisters, dog food, maid, writer, daily life, multiple heroines This book is also called: "Not a buddy!" ? "Well, do you know that a fool violates the laws of the Ming Dynasty?"