From Pirate to Hokage, I Became Naruto?

The start is awkward and quite dissuasive. I would have thought the protagonist was a native if he didn't reveal his identity. The time-travel fruit is really a show. Are you saying that all fruits are better than playing self-made ones? What kind of momentum can a desperate waste have? Seeing Tianlongxiang's hoof made me think that I will conquer Hancock later.

The part where the confession is performed is really awkward. I think it would be better to say that it is about longing for relatives and a sister like a tooth, otherwise it would be too abrupt. The novel is still good. I think it is much better than most brainless ones, where the protagonist is a fun-loving person who has nothing to do and is not able to deal with the consequences.

Why are you still helping Konoha? How to repay kindness with kindness? If I traveled through time and became Naruto, I would probably consider massacring the village.

I'm speechless. The Kyuubi is just a decoration. It's worse than Naruto blowing off his own tail after traveling through time. It's really rubbish.

I really don't understand why a time traveler has to save the world

Brother, my writing skills are not strong enough. Multi-threaded plots and conspiracies are not so easy to write. If you don't grasp it well, you will not show what you want to express like now, and it will become cumbersome. It's easy to challenge such a difficult challenge from the beginning. But once you get into your own rhythm, you will improve quickly. Come on!

When writing a novel about time travel and being a human being, don't be the protagonist because it doesn't look good.

I don't know what you're writing about, a tragic novel? Inner confession?

Grinding and chirping. Too much nonsense

TM's birth, let's just show it to anyone. Put the author in a small dark room to write. If he doesn't write 100,000 words a day, he won't come out.

Fan fiction is written about all sorts of things now. Needless to say, Naruto, the two newly discovered Bleach books are also written by eunuchs.

Is the starting point tomatoified? There are more and more embarrassing books

Mental state

I can't stand the first chapter anymore. I've wanted to ask for a long time, can the things (economics) summarized in different worlds be used universally? If I say that I have improved, you, the protagonist, don't have that ability!

After seeing the introduction, I had no desire to read further.

Seeing that this name has an ancient flavor, when I couldn't continue writing about Naruto fandoms, I became a pirate and then continued writing.

Personal opinion, the author can take a look, the previous chapter is fine, but I can't handle Chapter 86. I know there is so much foreshadowing, just for this moment, but you have to understand that when Naruto stands on the stage set up by the Hyuga family, it is a sign of cowardice in itself. For the original Naruto, maybe this was the best solution, but it would be better to just explode directly. It would be impossible to explain to them. In other words, in the ninja world, fists are the only rule. As for hitting ten, it's really funny. The power of the Nine-Tails will directly explode and cause a scene in the Hyuga clan. Who dares to BB? Afterwards, the consequences of P, who dares to touch you. Have an opinion? The dead have no opinions. If you say you are not satisfied today, don't sleep too hard at night.

The author is a very creative young man with great ideas. He has the courage to try the writing methods of great masters and is not influenced by external forces.

Seeing my confession is already my limit. Even if I borrow power from Kyuubi and get seriously injured afterwards, it would be better than this.