Coiling Dragon: Lava Storm

Author, you are writing fantasy. Now you actually use so much space to write about romance. Are you putting the cart before the horse? Shouldn't fantasy be about cultivation? You have posted so many updates, but I basically didn't see how you wrote about how the protagonist practices cultivation. What a king of green leafy roads. Isn't this just kids fighting? Do you need such a long space to write these things?

It seems to be interesting. The first chapter is concise and clear, and the following chapter not only makes the characters three-dimensional, but also clarifies that this is a "Panlong" with brains. Unlike most, most authors who write about Panlong fandom do not fully understand that "it is sad that power does not include wisdom" and "strength is only a condition necessary to achieve the goal, not the goal itself." I hope that the author of this book can surpass the original work. After all, the God Realm part of "Coiling Dragon" only has a large framework and basically no details. Lin Lei only took a quick look at such a large hell. The description of hell seems to be detailed on the battlefield. The underworld, the wind god plane, and the light god plane only showed half of their faces, and the others were only known by their names. There is so much to write about.

Hold on, there are 7 eunuchs among the 10 people who write Panlong fan stories, hold on.

Yesterday, I was warmed by the words of a book friend. So, I decided, No more pigeons! Although there will be no income from this book, I decided to generate electricity for love. After all, There are only zero times and countless times for eunuchs. And if I fail, I will feel very uncomfortable, which is why I have been reluctant to choose the finishing state. Lava will continue to write the entire super long novel according to the original idea. I will also actively adopt everyone's opinions. "Lack of training content", "The plot is too slow" These are currently the most common suggestions for Lava. I will pay attention when I write again. Well, that's the basic situation. I hope I can make progress slowly. The future update time will be set at 12 o'clock in the evening. There are two updates a day. If I don't have time to write, I won't stop writing. I will squeeze in one update if I have to. To be honest, my behavior is quite childish. A mature online writer will not waste time when faced with a book that has absolutely no chance of making money. But I am immature.

It's well written, but too depressing. The protagonist, a level 3 magician, has already done so many things, it's too stressful. The protagonist is suppressed once and desires strength, and then suppressed again without waiting for the strength to improve. The protagonist is still unwilling to desire strength and can't do anything. It doesn't matter if the protagonist has a trump card, if you press it, you can still expect an explosion. This does not give the protagonist a trick. Neither the family nor the Holy See seems to be something the protagonist can handle in a short time. This will only make you depressed, and it will be very tiring to watch.

A proud little shadow mouse.

Good guy, he's still talking about a lot of nonsense before he's even developed. The early stage of a book is very important. If it is written in the early stage and makes people uncomfortable to read, it will be useless no matter how good the middle and later stages are.

This introduction. . . Linley is already a pig, so what does your sister's official wife Kalan mean?

The highest quality Panlong fanfic I've seen so far

It feels very good. It is the best of its kind. I give you a recommendation vote.