The Wandering Homecoming

{"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New Book Trial Reading"} This is a story from a time-travel rescue battleship, an adventure journey from the commander of the battleship, and a legend belonging to the wandering returnees. Wandering around the world, witnessing the rise, fall and destruction of the world, and composing an epic story of the rise and fall of countless creatures. [Book Title]: The Wandering Returner [Author]: Mengli Yanhua [Tag]: Science Fiction, Heavens, Infinity [Status]: 47,000 words in series [Recommendation Index]: 🌟🌟🌟🌟 [Content]: The male protagonist is an auxiliary police officer who was hit by a car in order to save a child. Therefore, he traveled through time and space to a time and space rescue battleship and became the commander. He inherited the inheritance space of the previous captain, completed various tasks, and witnessed the stories of various worlds. [Evaluation]: I like the background story very much, it is very science fiction, and the description of the timeless battleship is irresistible to everyone who loves science fiction. The setting is very novel. The author has rich imagination and brainstorming. It feels like he is building a large world view. Each small copy has a different and exciting story. The only problem is that the various data panels and statistics are a bit cumbersome, and I always want to jump over them when I look at them. [Pictures]: Pictures and text have nothing to do with it

I don't understand the common problem in this kind of novel. As the supreme commander, you go deep into the front line of the battlefield? Are you afraid that the enemy will not come to behead you? National leaders go to the battlefield to fight as soldiers? The AI ​​is also awesome and is not afraid of the commander dying on the planet. Normally, AI has the authority to stop this kind of death-seeking behavior.

How can I put it, logically speaking, it's pretty good, but there are too many things explained in the front, especially the first few pictures are too dense, and the various settings and resources and equipment are explained too densely. To be honest, if I didn't like reading books about doomsday salvation and rebuilding social civilization, I might not be able to read it, because it really makes people lose the desire to read.

This book is a must-read and a eunuch. Stand as evidence

I like a saying that the protagonist's IQ is often linked to the author.

It's a Chinese-style hard science fiction, but the character plot is a bit hard to accept. The author's experience is too low to hold back a good plot. I suggest you play more Mass Effect, Interstellar, Red Alert, and Star Wars. Remember, hard science fiction doesn't require a sissy. It's outrageous to say that one brother is on the left and the other is on the right.

The novel is suspected of being a hydrology. There are a bunch of unnecessary plots that make the protagonist seem to be a paralyzed person. Things that could just be written down in the past have to be separated into a separate plot. There is also paragraphing. Nowadays, the suitable paragraphing for online articles is one sentence and two sentences into one paragraph. The segmentation format of your physical book is really not suitable for online articles.

Some of the technology is so low-level that it can travel through time and space. There are still pneumatic doors inside the spacecraft? The robots also use cameras? These details are too inconsistent.

The writing is becoming more and more unbearable. It is recommended to read the two books "Developing Dimensional World" and "Me and My Team".

What should I say, too much repetitive nonsense. The story that can be extracted from each chapter is less than two paragraphs. It can only be said to be a novel that pollutes the card pool.

What grade does the author go to in elementary school? What does he know about completeness? Please give an example of what an item would look like if it were 30% complete?

This book must be consecrated to the gods, and affixed as proof

Pick up trash. The world of pulling people is full of resources. You have to cut the garbage

Alien Into Darkness game recommended to everyone

From the setting point of view, it is all future China Technology! As far as the landing craft is concerned, the difference of 600 years should not be too big. Isn't it inappropriate for a landing craft to have only one particle cannon and machine gun to fit the setting? And the fighter planes are from the interstellar era! Still an air superiority fighter? Shouldn't it be almighty? Moreover, your description of the AI ​​Chonglou is too flattering! AIs with autonomous consciousness should not stretch their hips so much! And a database! Look at your unit 1 as a micro world! But the drawing is just that little, do you think it's reasonable? Is there any problem with the military settings? Just take that energy source! It's futuristic technology but it still has the same problem as today's civilian batteries! Is it reasonable? In summary, the author still needs to work hard!

My evaluation is that it is not as good as a fantasy novel

The author must have played Red Alert 3 Corona many times

Thinking, the overall look and feel is quite good (although I feel a bit buggy after just glancing at the data), well, the chapter reviews are almost miserable, thinking, and the image of the sisters is not well created, and the rescuer is personally attacked... It is really bullying a good person, thinking, although the latest chapter said that she has become mature.

It is recommended that the author compare his own chapters with Dashou's to find problems. The subject matter is really good, but the problem is that there are too many loopholes in what you wrote. I was really stunned when I saw Chapter 20. How many years ago did you use the two-dimensional female voice to speak? Whee? ? And they had that level of armament, but the old man who went out to explore the road got a broken shotgun? And the chapters that just jumped in and asked for the mining machine, read it a few times yourself, do you feel comfortable with it? There are too many questions in your book that are useless for communication. The way you speak is from a long time ago, and the characters in the book feel like idiots.

Do you use the basic settings of Star Wars as the basic reference for the main world and the way to travel? To be honest, there is nothing refreshing about your previous two introductions except for the water numbers, and it feels a bit baffling and specious. I only watched two of them, but I didn't watch them.