Naruto Who Started as a Civilian Ninja

I really don't recommend reading this fanfic. The author uses the settings from other fanfics. He doesn't read the official settings and just makes his own settings for fun. What kind of sword escape, spiritual mist, and physical fitness skills are all in a mess... There is no way to bite the lighter. The setting of fan fiction is the most classic. Why is Hashirama's wood escape so powerful because of his yang chakra? Is Kishimoto's setting the official setting, or is the setting of the fan novel the official setting? Why are all the settings moved? Mudun, again copied the settings of other fans, just like copying answers in a test, all wrong answers must be copied, and it is a simple fusion of water and soil to create Mudun Does the author know what the limit of blood inheritance is? Blood inheritance is blood inheritance, and the limit is within a designated range. Do you really think that with chakra, you can get any blood inheritance limit? Why not create a system for the protagonist 😅 Chapter 95, the ultimate Yang escape, a white chakra can create eyes? Naruto's eyes were made with the power of the Six Paths. Is Bai Zetsu on the same level as the power of the Six Paths? Bai Jue is just a cannon fodder, where does Yang Dun come from, speechless

I feel that the current Naruto fandom is not good. There are all kinds of conspiracy theories or bitter hatred. There is no sense of passion like in Naruto, and the battles are not as hearty as Naruto's victory over powerful enemies. They are not positive enough, and they always have the will of black fire. I understand that the protagonist is not a native and has no sense. There is no need to go crazy and black.

The protagonist is too kind. I'm not talking about the Holy Mother. It's just that in the ninja world where everyone can be stabbed to death by shurikens when they go to the battlefield at the age of ten, the protagonist's character is really a bit uncomfortable. He has invented any ninjutsu and told others. In addition, with the spiritual mist that can penetrate into other people's bodies, the protagonist's own super chakra perception and good ninjutsu talent can know other people's ninjutsu and the changes in chakra properties. This is simply a skill that steals the master's magic. You can tell people, oh, is the author writing a hot-blooded comic? I am afraid that those insidious villains will not come to the door. It's obviously a good idea, but the more you watch it, the more uncomfortable it becomes. After all, there is no system cheat, and you have to rely on yourself for your own strength. However, the character of the protagonist suddenly brings down the enjoyment level.

Without the ultimate Yang Release chakra, the upper limit of ordinary people's Wood Release is only Yamato No. 2.

When I see shadow clone organs being used to replace injured organs, I have no desire to continue reading. This kind of logic does not make sense. What you dispense is just a ball of chakra, which is the same on the outside but has different functions! It is better to regenerate cells, use shadow clone organs to model, use Yang Chakra to control cell regeneration, create organs, and finally transplant them. At least the logic is OK. You can directly change the shadow clone organ into a shadow clone organ and directly replace the original organ! Super dramatic!

The power system concept is obviously better than other Naruto fanfics. But, but, there is too much nonsense. Moreover, the protagonist is so indecisive and special.

Civilians are really worthless. You wouldn't think it's just Orochimaru, right?

I don't quite understand why the protagonist is working so hard for Konoha? And when you are weak, you actively go to the battlefield, even if you are blind in one eye, you still have to fight. What are you trying to do?

I originally thought I had seen a novel story, with many new settings from the author at the beginning, but as the plot unfolded, it was still the same old rush, and I basically couldn't write a story without the original script... I promised to live well, but ended up risking my life for the mistakes of my teammates during the war... I knew the ending would be bad, but I just made it up with the excuse of seeing it, without considering the power gap, and stopped watching it. I really didn't like it, and I felt it was better to go back and watch the original anime.

All I can say is that even if there is water in the Toxic Flow Rain Ninja Jonin, it will not require a long distance to trap and kill a Konoha Genin who is entering the battlefield for the first time. There is no need to send people to ambush and intercept the protagonist on the road... And he happens to be killed by the protagonist. Tell a joke, the protagonist Just after graduation, I killed the Sunagakure jounin alone, and the other two friends used a ninjutsu. Fainting without strength is equivalent to nothing. What about the rain ninja jounin, who was defeated and dared to fight for his life... Not to mention the protagonist, a civilian, there are people who give five-attribute low-level ninjutsu.

The author regards himself as a perfectionist savior, and the protagonist rushes to save people no matter what. He is nothing, and he is left with disabilities.

You don't have anything. Someone with three magatama has practiced for many years more than you.

In terms of combat power, dogs would shake their heads just looking at it. A newly graduated genin can defeat a jounin to death. This is how cheap it looks to be a Jonin

The Naruto setting is a trap, and many fans are in it. I wonder if you are here.

This is a rubbish plot. Bian Que shook his head after watching it. He was poisoned to death.

To be honest, you really shouldn't lose one of your eyes for a fool you haven't known for a few days. It feels like there is not much difference between you being reborn and not being reborn. Either you can find a way to become an awesome master, or you can just be more modest and be a medical ninja and work hard with others. I guess if you write it later, the third generation will definitely teach him something or accept him as an apprentice, and then play some friendship with the fourth generation. The next plot is very different... It slipped away.

Personally, I think that the promotion of civilians is mainly based on the Blood Succession Snare. The Blood Succession Snare can be practiced. The seven attributes are combined into the Seeking Dao Jade to form the Blood Succession Snare. The attribute chakra is first cultivated. When combined with the Blood Succession limit, it is eliminated in the Blood Succession. When it comes to the Blood Succession Snare, the Qiu Dao Jade will be completed in six ways.

There is no golden finger, no blood successor, only after surviving two ninja battles and having full luck attribute points.

He worked hard for Konoha and lost one eye. It is recommended to delete the setting of the time traveler.

The problem with this book is not that the civilians are not civilians, but that the author did not give the protagonist a way to become stronger from the beginning. No matter what, it is very important for readers to see the protagonist's path to becoming stronger, and the sooner the better. If you don't draw any cakes, and the protagonist is not strong enough in the early stage, what do readers have to look forward to? Example: "The World of Naruto through the Eyes of Reincarnation", the title of the book points out how to become stronger. "From Ninja to Daimyo", the name is called at the beginning, and the boundaries are limited by blood stains. "Naruto: The Strongest Water Escape", as mentioned earlier, because he is a time traveler, the protagonist has a high soul strength and strong chakra control, and he becomes stronger by combining the technology of his previous life.

It can be developed for sealing techniques. To be honest, this thing is very buggy.

Naruto can be inappropriate, but Tsunade cannot be ignored!

I'm a bad name maker. If any book friend wants to enter the world of Naruto with a certain identity, please leave your name and the ninja village where you are, and I will use it There will be a large number of original characters in the later part of this book.

Knowledge is power. Don't you dare to deceive me?

The background is useless. . . Bloodline is king

I would like to make a small suggestion, make the nouns more localized, like the Eye of God at the beginning, you can change it to Eye of Amaterasu, Eye of Tsukuyomi, etc. Otherwise, it will look very dramatic.

TikTok has Naruto Chronicles summarized by Naruto fans. You can refer to it,

Isn't the treatment of Danzo in the latest chapter 93 too outrageous? Compared to Orochimaru who was found defecting after doing human experiments, and now that Tsunade is the mistress, Danzo will have to retire even if he doesn't die.

One of the most exciting Naruto fan fictions in this period 😁

Come on author, the plot is very good