
Konoha: the Leader of the Uchiha Rebellion
木叶:宇智波的造反头子
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- Completed
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- 140k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 3y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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After reading three or four chapters, I want to know when the Uchiha White-Eyed Wolf will die, when the protagonist will lead his tribe to rebel, and whether he is a time traveler or a member of the Uchiha clan, he actually accepts a beast like Itachi as his disciple and teaches him sincerely? What do you think? There are too many people in the tribe and your life is too long😡. Weasel will only become a dog that helps the village kill its own people. Some beasts are born. As a time traveler, shouldn't you kill this white-eyed wolf while he is still weak?
This author probably didn't watch Naruto very well. He didn't even know the plot of Konoha's high-level officials blocking Uchiha's support. I guess he and Uchiha Weasel will fall in love with each other and have a deep relationship between master and disciple.
I have been looking for books for four days, browsed three software, and read dozens of books. This is the only one that is not only about consequentialism. It is still a seedling. It should be like this in the comment area. It is really outrageous. There are not many people in the comment area who are not consequentialist. I don't know how long this book can last. Uchiha is exterminated based on consequentialism. Pass From this result, we can infer that the whole of Konoha is the enemy of Uchiha, and f4 is the top management of Konoha. There is no doubt that there will definitely be similar comments Taking Itachi's annihilation of Uchiha as a consequential theory, it can be concluded that he has a father, so there will definitely be comments about killing his whole family Itachi's thoughts originated from Shisui, with the result The theory is that Shisui's whole family was probably killed, and if not, they were dug into the dirt and reincarnated F4's family was killed together, not the kind of wife, son and daughter, the kind that implicated the nine clans Going a little further, when the protagonist becomes stronger, there will be such comments Everyone in Konoha is rejecting Uchiha, so they just split Konoha. , Or start your own business In fact, after carefully studying their comments, it is not entirely consequentialism, but also the whole family theory, which mainly pays attention to the neatness of death Such a long paragraph is for the comment area and has nothing to do with the author. Give the author a mental preparation. If the author does not talk about consequentialism, he will see a lot of outrageous comments next.
Uchiha is really miserable. To be honest, there is a line in Naruto that really impressed me. It was the second-generation filthy queen who commented on Sasuke as "a naturally evil Uchiha brat." At that moment, I directly completed three stages of evolution: "laughing at Madara, understanding Madara, becoming Madara, and surpassing Madara". I haven't understood what's wrong with Uchiha, but the second generation taught me a lesson! But youth spots are really handsome, and age spots are really annoying to humans and dogs...
I'm tired of reading stories about how to lead Itachi to change Itachi. Can anyone recommend a Naruto story about killing a weasel?
If you use it as plain as water, it is a compliment, and you can't even understand it. After reading more than 30 chapters, there is no fighting scene or battle of wits. The relationship between the introduction and the content can be said to be contradictory. No ups and downs at all, man, no orgasms at all, and those bodies I created are useless. If you want to be really slow-paced, you should let the protagonist's abilities improve little by little, instead of suddenly getting the memory of the past life, suddenly turning on the kaleidoscope and gaining abilities different from the previous life, and suddenly letting the subject turn on the kaleidoscope.
Compared to Uchiha Madara, I think Senju Hashirama is more disgusting. Madara put aside all prejudices and hatred and joined forces with him to conquer the world and realize his ideal. As a result, just when he was about to end the troubled times and unify the world, I don't know if this guy had a brain convulsion or some serious illness Run to sue for peace with the defeated subordinates who were tortured by you. First, cede the territory to compensate them. Give them the territory you worked so hard to conquer, and then give them the nuclear weapon (tailed beast) you finally obtained. What the hell? No one can bear it. Whenever he gets angry, he will jump up and hit him. But Madara doesn't know whether it's for the hard-won peace or something else. He finally endured it. Rather than hit him, he chose to leave Konoha. As a result, this time The guy got tough he immediately jumped out and said that if you dare to leave my territory, I will kill you. Finally, he drove Uchiha Madara crazy and ran to destroy the world. This guy is simply poisonous. He is unusually lenient and kind to his enemies. He kills his own people more cruelly than anyone else.
I don't want to say it's inexplicable, I can only say that the sense of separation is too strong The first thing to be separated is the wedge and the main text. The protagonist can't explain it. The writing is so high-level and the strength is so strong. Then in the blink of an eye, he is in love and has deep bonds with many people. He is also a time traveler who knows the plot. Or, not to mention that the mastermind behind the scenes is exterminating humanity for profit, at least you have to be smart and see the situation clearly I have always hated the idea of suddenly gaining memories. When a memory suddenly appears in your mind, are you still you? Which strong person can tolerate this situation and accept it as a matter of course?
I don't want to know if Itachi has been brainwashed or if it is possible to change. I just want to see him die. When I see Mo, I don't think about whether he is a good person or an exception. I just want to die quickly. When I see a mosquito, I don't think about whether it is a male or a female or whether it sucks blood. I just slap him to death.
So does the wedge have anything to do with the main text of the book? I want to read Chuezi's continuation novel 🙂🙂…
I would like to clarify a few points regarding Itachi's question. 1. No matter how Kishimoto portrays Itachi in the original work, in short, he is not in line with the views of the Chinese public and we will never praise such behavior. 2. Fan creation requires some basic logic. At the point in time where the protagonist is in this book, Itachi's values are being formed rather than fixed. Only if he can guide him is it consistent with basic logic. Killing him directly is unreasonable. 3. If you still have grudges about Itachi's plot, it's not a big problem. He won't be a character who appears in a large space.
It's easy to change Itachi. Itachi chose to sacrifice the weaker side. If there was a chance that you could successfully rebel, Itachi would naturally be on your side. If not, let's learn from Obito and achieve the freedom of Sharingan!
Your introduction and wedges have nothing to do with the main text😑🤫
I really can't help but delete the wedge chapter at the beginning. It's too disconnected from the next two chapters. With such a long wedge, the three golden chapters become the wedge and the main text. The plots of these three chapters are too separated, whether they are foreshadowing or not: 1) The plot background of the wedge is too different from that of the first two chapters of the main text. There is no explanation or transition. It cannot be solved by a wedge and the title of the main text. Readers just follow it. After reading the wedge, it is the first chapter; 2) There is no connection between the wedge and the main story. How are Uchiha Ming and Uchiha Akira connected, reincarnation, soul seal? Nothing is said, what is the relationship between the two, how strength, character, and ability are related. Since you have written the wedge, you must write it clearly. The importance of the three golden chapters cannot be overemphasized; 3) The style before and after is too different, the wedge has various high-end styles, and looks like a cold master (Madara, Tobirama), and the next chapter becomes the love brother (Nagamei and Kenji combined). Finally, I wish the author's writing will get better and better and stick to the end.
Let me tell you, I feel that you, the author, are not suitable for writing this kind of thing, it feels so boring... The author should write about daily life
How can I put it, the greater the age gap between the protagonist and Naruto and Sasuke, the less interesting it is because there is not enough understanding of the supporting characters. There are only a dozen or so people that Naruto is familiar with. If the protagonist appears too early, few of the characters around him will be familiar to him. In this book, I basically know the pot monkey, Minato Kushina, Fugaku, Mikoto, and Shisui Itachi, and they haven't even appeared in many roles.
The heavenly father kills the heavenly brother, and the world is blocked. A Yuan is not the rightful owner, so he has to give way...
Can your beginning and end be connected?
I think the red eyes are also the bloodline of the Six Paths. It's impossible for him to grow a pair of eyes specifically for the Byakugan.
At first he became very powerful, and then he became nothing more.
After reading a few chapters, the writing was vague and boring.
What does the stuff in the wedge have to do with this novel?
How long after Madarao died was Sasuke born?
The first paragraph about fusion and then the paragraph about sleeping are really good, but then I didn't understand it.
To be honest, I didn't understand what he was writing. His introduction is quite good. But when you see the real content, it's completely messed up and completely different from what the introduction says. You'd better not read his introduction and just talk about it.
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Let me create a page to record what I personally think is a problematic part of the book.