Naruto: Son of Indra

Since the original work shows too little at this point in time, a lot of original work needs to be done. In line with the principle of being integrated into the original work, these original plots will also be connected with things in the original work. For example, the sprites appeared in the theatrical version and were said to have almost destroyed the world, so this statement was adopted. Therefore, the sprites in this book have been strengthened as much as possible to suit the setting. Of course, some people expressed confusion about the netherworld part. It may be that my expressiveness was not quite right, which led to some misunderstandings. This Netherworld is the other side of the entire present world. The Ninja world is just a planet in the present world. Thousands of dead souls are numerous to the Ninja world in this period, but they are like water splashes to the present world. In fact, even for the ninja world a thousand years later, tens of millions of people are not very many. Since I only saw Boruto Ichimaruko reincarnated as Momoshiki in Boruto, there may be some discrepancies in the construction of the "Otsutsuki God Clan". If it can be updated to the time when the God Clan comes to the world, it is not known whether a lot of reference will be made to Boruto (probably not, because I haven't finished it yet).

The son of Indra, from the Ninja sect to the Warring States Period and then to the Ninja Village, there are at least thousands of years in between. Thousands of years of history are blank. Before this time, I can only create my own plot, and there seems to be nothing to write. Moreover, if the protagonist cannot develop his family into a country or even a legend for thousands of years, it will be in vain. Other time travelers have reached their peak in the ninja world in just a few decades or ten years and unified the ninja world. As the protagonist, you have not unified a continent and developed your family into a god.

I'm complaining about it, but the author's level and writing skills are still there. The only thing that makes me feel fragmented is that there are too many things added, especially the monsters, which are easily comparable to the Ten-Tails. At present, whether the Hokage is one or two, the Ten-Tails is the top. Level ceiling, there has not yet been a creature more terrifying than the Ten-Tails. From the attitude of the Otsutsuki clan, we can know that the Ten-Tails of the original Kaguya is considered a good thing among the Otsutsuki clan, but your tens of thousands of dead souls + a monster are comparable to the Ten-Tails? Also the mastermind of Hei Zetsu, Hei Zetsu knows so much and is so awesome, but the original work ended up being so rubbish after a thousand years? Let's talk about the emergence of the underworld. I think there's nothing wrong with you joining the underworld to improve your world view, but let's just say you're in the underworld, isn't it a little too awesome? Thousands of dead souls that are comparable in energy to the Ten-Tails. The underworld doesn't even bother to send one of them? The underworld is so awesome, how can it take ten Ten-Tails to get someone from the underworld to come out? That Otsutsuki is just a bastard. After all, Otsutsuki sent many tribesmen all over the world to search for Kaguya, who was suspected of becoming the Ten-Tails. Even the underworld didn't bother to pay attention to it. This shows that anyone sent by the underworld can crush Otsutsuki. And that god of death, the original death Gods are all things that have been played to death by the ninja world. The second generation and Orochimaru are squeezing wool every day, not to mention the six paths hanging on the wall. They don't take life and death seriously at all. This shows that the underworld of the ninja world is basically nothing. Come to you, the six paths are afraid of this and that, what the hell is this? When you construct a worldview, you must take these things into consideration. I won't go into details about the many flaws in it. In short, the worldview you construct is terrible. The underworld can pop up, but it cannot be too unnatural. Your overall strength in the underworld can indeed be stronger than Otsutsuki, but no matter what, it must be on the same level as Otsutsuki. Otherwise, the original work showed Otsutsuki planting trees all over the universe, destroying planets, and playing with time and space. If he wasn't awesome, he would have been destroyed by a certain boss. If he was not destroyed, he would become more and more rampant, which shows that Otsutsuki's strength in this world is basically a first-class existence. In addition, the Japanese worldview and real bosses are actually not rich at all. Japan In this world, there are many humans who kill gods and hunt demons. This shows that Japan's entire world view has top-level combat power in the three realms In short, the elevated Black Zetsu in the underworld is too cruel, and the Six Paths are too rubbish. If we summarize the world view, the level of Six Paths is also a small overlord in the universe, and those who are out of the underworld The overall strength of the underworld should be inferior to that of the world as a whole. There are many places that the underworld cannot control or dare not control. The Ninja World can be controlled by the underworld, but if there are several Otsutsuki in charge, the output will not be proportional to the income. This is the right way, and Otsutsuki should not be like the ordinary underworld. Don't show up at every turn to be comparable to the Ten-Tails, scare the Six Paths at every turn, Otsutsuki, who seems to be chopping down humans and the planet like trees, is too rubbish. Keep up the good work. The writing is still very good. At least I, an eight-year-old bookworm, won't feel unfamiliar reading it.

One thing I want to complain about is that regarding Kaguya's creation of the White Zetsu army to resist the aliens, it would be better to throw them all into the Box of Six Paths Sage's Bliss. At least the ones that come out will basically have the strength of a jounin to a shadow.

It was good in the beginning, but I didn't want to read it since Ninja Village. There seemed to be many reasons. The relatives and friends from the protagonist's era were just passing by, the time span was too big, there was no historical gap, and there seemed to be nothing to say about the common problems of many novels. The characters in the book see from a limited perspective. As a reader, you have a God's perspective looking at the overall situation. The protagonist is squandering the innocence of an idealist. The ending may be good, but the actions of the protagonist must always be covered up. Only at the final point can it be considered in the sun. The protagonist lacks an impulse. Like Uchiha, it originates from the heart, emotions, and ideals. It is not an irrational beast. I want to do it, not what I should do. The former is selfish desire and human nature, and the latter is reason and divinity. No matter who changes to whom, it is a sublimation. The protagonist is simply the latter. The protagonist is just coping. He has no real inner impulse to do anything and pursue power. Because of Otsutsuki, he cultivates geniuses. Because of Otsutsuki, he breaks through the bottom line of ethics. It is still because of Otsutsuki. The protagonist never said why he must face it or how to do it. Face it, and there is no struggle for psychological breakthrough in this process. The protagonist should just do this. He is a time traveler, so he must face difficulties and break through difficulties. He is the ancestor of Uchiha, so he must protect his descendants. He is the master of the ninja sect, so he must restore his past glory. The protagonist only seeks to do his job in his position, not his position

Ijanaki and Izanami were developed by the later Uchiha. Asura, you have the Six Paths to transform the Buddha into thousands of hands. Hashirama has Immortal Techniques, so you have the Six Paths, right? Isn't that awkward? Also, there were not so many escape techniques during the Ninjutsu period. You might as well just blur the flames and thunder and lightning, the earth and the flowing water, and blur them. What's the point of creating all these?

The author's magical transformation of the world view is too outrageous, especially the underworld. The more I watch it, the more awkward it becomes. It's so troublesome to strengthen the sprites and black Zetsu. If they were so awesome, they wouldn't have been suppressed and the other would have been a gutter rat for thousands of years.

... Ancient martial arts novels in the skin of Naruto are awkward to watch and not interesting at all.

Wearing the skin of Hokage, it is like turning into the Ten-Tails. It's also a ninja that opens its mouth and shuts its mouth. This time traveler is useless.

Hei Zetsu, with his strength, is planning to use the Thousand-Year Eye of the Moon as a container. He might as well lie in wait for twenty or thirty years, plotting to use Asura and Indra's chakra to open the Eye of Reincarnation, and use him as a container to resurrect Kaguya.

The author forgot to write about the old character Gamamaru. Gamamaru was later the Great Toad Sage of Mt. Myoboku, who lived from the time of Otsutsuki Kaguya to Boruto. If Hagoromo had not learned the power of nature, the Sage of Six Paths would not have had the strength to have sex with Kaguya Otsutsuki. The representatives of Earth's native monks may not be human beings. Perhaps the "psychic beasts" (tolerate the term of the times) are the masters of the earth.

I thought he was the son of Indra in Indian mythology

Black Zetsu may indeed have jumped out several times in the course of a thousand years. Otherwise, how can we explain the origin of the Eternal Mangekyō Sharingan? It is very likely that it really succeeded in defrauding several reincarnations of Indra's chakra and created an Eternal Kaleidoscope that only lacks Asura cells. The difference between Madara and them is that he used Izanagi to have the Resurrection Armor. After Black Zetsu failed, he could hide again and wait for an opportunity to tamper with history and erase his traces.

Weird, so weird.

How can I evaluate it? It's a fire shadow with an ancient martial arts flavor. . . You should at least follow the style of Japanese works😅😅😅, your painting style is so different, it's too dramatic, right?

If these two came to the world of Naruto before Kaguya Otsutsuki, then would there be another legend of a horn-haired immortal in the world of Naruto? So how will the Naruto storyline develop next?

It is said that the protagonist was born in the era of the Six Paths Sage a thousand years ago, but in the end he returned to the old path of one village and one country in the original work. The Nine-Tails Rebellion did not give Uchiha Fugaku the power, and it felt like the night when his descendants would be exterminated was not far away. Scientific ideas, social system ideas, productivity development and the like were not spread at all. They said they wanted to fight against Otsutsuki. If there is a way to live forever, they will not tell their descendants (such as the three great immortals who have practiced natural energy and lived for thousands of years).

This period is very embarrassing, because it is very likely that Hei Jue is secretly watching, and it is difficult to accomplish what you want to do, and you have to do it secretly without letting Hei Jue notice it.

I haven't read it, but judging from the comments! I think the God of Death was definitely created by the Six Paths, or the underworld was created by the Six Paths to contain chakra! In the world of Naruto, the Six Paths shared chakra to give the world a spiritual body and a soul.

After reading about twenty chapters, the writing feels very good and feels comfortable. It's just a bit obscure for me, and it's difficult to understand after reading it quickly, but fortunately There are a lot of secondary settings, but they are basically based on the original settings for expansion or rationalization. Currently, I haven't seen in the text the uniquely insane characters with outrageous brain circuits and the arrogant "sharp comments" in Naruto fandoms (I don't dislike harsh comments, After all, there are a lot of unreasonable logical bugs and setting bugs in Naruto, but the arrogance written in the text is disgusting, which makes the protagonist and the whole book look particularly petty) My overall feeling at the moment is that it is a fantasy world based on Naruto , but after all, it is a fan, although I personally like it But to be honest, this kind of thing is not very popular in the fandom market.

Although, when I saw Indra, I thought of the picture of the Emperor of Heaven being beaten violently.

Catch a bug and add some details.

It's a fate. I just read your book. The beginning part is very good. The writing skills are very sharp. It's much better than that book, at least it says goodbye to the kindergarten style. As long as the storyline and the IQ of the supporting characters are on point, it will definitely be a good book~ Come on.

After a while of not reading it, I forget about this book. I feel like I've read it but not yet read it 😥

It's too bland, add some scenes between Kaguya's lineage.

It's not a good click. I'll just take a look at it and I can't describe anything.