Gou Assists in the Demon Slayer Division

It's well written. The only person I hate is the prince. I can't figure out why this prince can become the prince. He has no ability, strength, or influence. He is also extremely vicious and lawless. The minister's relatives and the prime minister's relatives dare to attack. Without hiding anything, even the emperor is not so good. He can become the prince. Is he the only son of the emperor?

This plot made me laugh to death. How stupid and cowardly does this prince have to be to do this? If you really did this, you would have been whipped to death by your own father. You wouldn't think that a mere sixth-level prince is nothing, would you? The royal family's face is greater than all family ties. This kind of useless prince can't finish everything cleanly and is still a waste.

In system writing, it is not popular nowadays to personify intelligence, nor is it popular to kill off the protagonist without hesitation. Today's system writing is more rigid, and does not even provide instructions.

The dog author has been quite negative recently. He worked overtime every day and his salary was reduced. He also had to code when he came back at night. I apologize for the inability to reply to cute comments in time. A new book is about to set sail. I hope everyone will support it. Please donate your favorites and tickets sent by the system to the dog author, so that the dog author can get excited and write more exciting stories.

Every chapter makes me feel smart. I feel sick to my stomach after reading too much. After reading 8 chapters, I feel defeated and I really can't resist it.

If it's too deep, I can't understand it; if it's too shallow, I'd say it's awkward; if it's more daily life, it's just superficial; if it's more fighting, it's just a novice. People who like it generally don't speak, and those who speak are not good at it. You can give your opinions. If you really think it's not good, just give me something specific. I've all studied Chinese, and the author listened. If you change it, then continue watching. If you don't listen, then stop watching. Furthermore, even if you consume it, it is a reasonable consumption. When you go to buy a pancake, you can ask him to use healthy ingredients, but you can't ask the boss to give you a dog if you pay 4,600 for 20 pancakes. Even if your 4,600 is enough to buy a dog.

To be honest, it's quite satisfactory. It feels good but not too good. It's a bit tasteless.

After looking at it, none of the younger generation has any brains. The older generation feels that it is completely supported by a few people. The emotional processing of the characters is more messy than life.

I don't know why, but I can't read this book. You can't even see it without using your brain.

System personification is not a problem, the main problem is that the writing is a bit boring

I started to feel unhappy when the protagonist killed someone at the gate of the Prince's Mansion. I felt so unhappy

The introduction is a bit weak, it could be changed to: There is a guy in the Demon Slaying Department who is untouchable. Every time a skeleton monster passes in front of him, a few ounces of oil will be squeezed out of it.

Chapter 1: The protagonist is arguing with the system? Are you the author of Qidian?

I don't know why, but it looks a bit messy.

The logic is so irrational. . .

Personally, I feel that the plot arrangement is not very reasonable. It's so fun to slay demons, and it's like child's play.

Looking at the back, the male protagonist is not the emperor's son, right? What kind of plot is the most beautiful man at the foot of the imperial city being the successor?

Nowadays, there are novels about embarrassing conversations with the system... I look down on it.

After reading a few chapters, I stopped reading and felt something was wrong.

There were too many awkward conversations with the system, and there was a feeling that women couldn't walk. However, the protagonist's sense of control standing behind the scenes was quite interesting.

Let me tell you something, this book has almost 200,000 words, and the results are average, so I want to put it on the shelf, and then spend a few cents of my pocket money to buy some hair growth shampoo (I am writing a novel recently, and I am almost scratching my bald head) So I shamelessly asked for an initial subscription to make the book's results better. At least it deserves the editor's attention. As a repayment, the author will post more updates before it is put on the shelves, so that those who like this book can read as many free chapters as possible, and every penny you can save on subscription money is worth a penny. Five to the ground and give a gift to save your life.

Not bad, who did the author offend? There are not so many people who criticize me for writing a lot worse things than you do.

The subject matter is very good, the ideas are very good, and the plot is also very good, but the writing style is not good and the foreshadowing is not good. Legendary Brain: Got it Hands: You come, you come, you come

How should I write about the realm after the protagonist reaches the first level so early?