Konoha, Was Reported by the Fourth Hokage at the Beginning

The torture of the main character in the early stage is nonsensical. Naruto relied on subjective assumptions to crazily torture a person who didn't know who he was, and who interrogated him like this. Besides, those who have watched Naruto don't know what the art of spiritual transformation is. His acting skills are always poor and crappy, and he doesn't say anything useful.

He tortured the master in the early stage and took revenge in the later stage. I haven't seen the rest yet. What Shen Nong said above was right before it was put on the shelves. If you browse quickly and skip to see the later part, it's okay, but it's a bit emmm... If you like dark style, you can check it out.

The first 50 chapters are all in the introduction, 20 chapters are about being reported, 10 chapters are about being tortured, 10 chapters are about being experimented, and 10 chapters are about discovering the strength. In the middle, there are a lot of passers-by and politics that have nothing to do with the plot, characters, abilities, and foreshadowing. Then chapter 10 is about escaping, and chapter 10 is about being hunted. Then, bang, it's on the shelves

It is extremely poisonous, water-soaked, and it is a 50-50 chance of hitting anyone. Even though the Perfect Jinchuriki is released, ordinary people cannot easily escape from the hands of the Jinchuriki. The host has a strength that is close to a 50-50 split with the Jinchuriki. It was actually almost killed by Minato, the ninja apprentice. Minato's strength was formed in the third station. He was still a scumbag in World War II, and there are also problems with the timeline. The writing gets worse and worse as it goes on, I don't recommend it.

Read it and tell me what you think, starting from the beginning to being reported by Watergate. Although the interaction between Danzo and Hou Fei was too dull, I felt quite hopeful. But after being caught, when Hou Fei started to interrogate, it seemed that before he was sentenced, the protagonist was like a 250, directly admitting that he was not the original, that six-year-old child, directly said that he was a reborn body-seizing time traveler. I have thought about this kind of thing with my brain. After reading so many novels, who would admit it directly? If not, after all, he is still one of his own. It is unlikely that Hou Fei will use the queen. He uses the tricks to torture the protagonist to learn the truth, and as long as he can perfectly synthesize chakra and perfectly control chakra, he can say that he has awakened the blood sacrifice... Then the matter will be solved. Even if it is not solved and is under surveillance, it will be like this. But when it comes to saying it, it is not one of his own, but the enemy, the enemy. He has many ways to deal with the enemy. After all, Naruto, a perverted person, makes you think about it. He has to endure it. Will he be so tolerant to the enemy? , And this world is not one of those passionate worlds, where there are many ways to torture people...,,,, In so many novels, I have never seen many of them speak out about this matter. They have kept it in their hearts for a lifetime. Only those who are very strong will speak out. After seeing the protagonist admit that he was soul-wrestled, I felt that this book was about to be finished. Coupled with the abuse at the end, I wrote several more chapters.

Poisonous weeds, everyone, run away. First, the author should be a fan of Yunhuo. Second, abuse the master. Third, the plot logic of pure text is too poor.

It's like I've never seen a woman before. A female character is fair-skinned, beautiful, and has long legs. She's disgusting and poisonous.

I have read so many books, and for the first time I want to scold them for writing rubbish.

Not to mention how the 7-year-old Minato knew how to identify spies. It was impossible for Minato to rush over to see the Hokage. Minato attracted attention only after he became familiar with Kushina. At the age of 7, he was at best a commoner kid who just went to school, and his talent had not yet been realized. And it doesn't make sense that the third generation can directly send ANBU to arrest people just based on Minato's words. Moreover, after writing that the protagonist is captured, it is also possible to immediately start the conversation between Suisandai, Danzo and the advisor.

What the hell did I watch? I actually made it to chapter 40

It's a book that's not easy to read, even if it abuses the owner, the settings of the cloud are countless, and you can find countless loopholes casually.

There is no development at all in the plot for almost 20 chapters, and the plot is just rambled on.

I have written so many pieces, but no actual progress has been made. It's so cool! ! !

Conspiracy theories cannot be written in a dark way. This kind of writing is usually full of resentment. It makes everyone unhappy except for beautiful women. Even the dogs passing by are willing to die. There are also beatings of this one and that one, and they keep killing and killing. They are very violent and seem to be just to cater to certain groups of people and then run away.

AI writing is nothing interesting

I wrote fifty chapters of nonsense at the beginning, you are awesome, you are very good at it, why not go through it in two or three chapters, you know how to torture readers, slip away

The protagonist was originally a thief who stole the body of a Konoha villager. Although it was not intentional, it is true that he wanted to take over Kimura Yoshi's life after taking the body. No matter how evil the third generation is or what their purpose is, from the reader's perspective, it is only natural that the third generation will treat the protagonist after discovering that the protagonist is a thief. As readers, we simply cannot refute it. But why didn't the author write in the beginning that the protagonist is Kimura Yoh? The protagonist was originally reincarnated, but due to his strong spirit, he fell into a deep sleep, and then slowly developed the consciousness of Kimura Yoshi. It was not until Kimura Yoshi suffered a nervous breakdown due to the death of his parents that he was able to recover his memory. In this way, it is the third generation and Minato who are at fault. The protagonist can stand on the moral high ground and point fingers. Revenge is natural and justified. The reader's sense of satisfaction will also be enhanced, unlike the thief who feels aggrieved.

I have some ideas, but not many. As I write them, they become poisonous points. The author probably wanted to portray how an ordinary person could survive in the world of Naruto, but after reading about 20 chapters, I felt that the protagonist was mentally retarded, and I instantly lost the desire to continue reading. It's 2023. You can have a weak protagonist in online novels, but you can't have a weak mentality. A protagonist who has no authority and can only be incompetent and furious. My suggestion is to just die and finish it and then start the next one.

This is the beginning of my favorite book I have read for so many years. It is written by a super wimp who needs a sense of empathy.

Now there are still articles that abuse the main text. It's outrageous. The remnants of the old era, get out of here.

Yep, the protagonist said he wanted to take revenge, but in the end he only killed some supporting characters, or they were made up.

What's on this label? The writing is terrible and I can tolerate it, but the writing is completely different and I can't stand it.

Invincible, imaginative, funny, sinister, calm and cautious. Where did the tag come from? It's so humorous.

The author pulled a big lump, it's so disgusting

The Holy Mother bitch who didn't want to destroy the world after being tortured like this

It's all shit except penetration and torture

Persecution paranoia? I can't find any good points in this book. Awesome, are you trying to gain popularity in the fandom? Are you writing about Naruto?

I saw this book from other book reviews and came here to see how rubbish it is.

It's so exciting in the later stages. I feel like the author is too rigorous. I support you. The recommendations and monthly tickets are all yours. I kneel down.

It's a very pure YY article, and I can't understand it even if I don't have a little bit of darkness in my heart. Anyway, I think it's very good, it's written in a parallel world like Marvel. Finally, he returned to the world of Naruto to collapse and destroy all the things and people that were bad to him. I really agree with that sentence, I am the only one in heaven and on earth!