Martial Arts Begins in a Small Mountain Village

It doesn't appear at all that the village chief's family was kind to the protagonist. If it hadn't been for the cheat, he would have been so seriously injured and had no one to take care of him, and he would have died at home. There is no follow-up Seeing that the male protagonist is capable, he uses various excuses to build relationships. Why! If I will never take care of you, and no one will care about you when you are in trouble, what use will you need from those people after you survive? To increase the burden on yourself? Also, since the village chief is a teacher and has some prestige in the village, the protagonist's parents saved his life. The male protagonist's parents are gone, and the male protagonist is alone. How can he survive if he doesn't sneak around the village? If the village chief really wanted to repay his kindness, he would definitely take the hero over to live together and repay the hero's parents for saving their lives. The male protagonist no longer has to sneak around the village in order to survive. Later, the male protagonist got cheats, became more capable, and acted as if he cared about the male protagonist, so I stopped being disgusting. At this time, he doesn't need anyone else's care at all, okay? The author also made the male protagonist very happy, which left me speechless. The night you just traveled through time, without a plug-in, you would have died again. If the author wrote about that night, and the village knew that he was seriously injured by the villagers during the day, and took him home to take care of him, the male protagonist would have some reason to be grateful. It's not like the village chief didn't know that a seriously injured person had no one to take care of him, and he didn't even know whether he was dead or alive. He didn't even go to see how the situation was going the next day? With such a serious injury, he will definitely not be able to go out to find food. Send him some food. The village chief did nothing. You later wrote that the village chief cared about the male protagonist, and I was speechless. You call this caring? The hero is still very happy. How mean-spirited he must be!

A pound of pork costs 10 copper coins, and a bed costs only five copper coins. Author, do you think it's reasonable?

In the wild mountains and ridges, if you hear someone saying that they want to kill you, you still don't know how to strike first. You have to fight with the person desperately, and then fight back. It's the same old routine, find a village girl before you even start. Holy mother bitch.

The writing is okay, but don't be dissatisfied when it comes to you as the author. Where did this spiritual pet manual come from?

If you don't like reading my books, you can scold them, but don't write them off.

See Chapter 10. The protagonist distributed wild boar meat to the village yesterday, but today he was reported by his neighbors. Although the protagonist passed the test, he immediately gave another chicken drumstick to the neighbor Uncle Zhao who had just reported him. It's better to give up on this book decisively.

Protagonist group, happy every day.

A small land dragon, the viper most resembles a dragon.

There is something wrong with your thinking. He was beaten violently by the villagers at the beginning. What he said was that the villagers were right and the protagonist was wrong. The problem is that the villagers are most likely to be vicious, and there are only a handful of good people. Your worldview and values ​​are too crooked.

The writing is bad enough and the plot is okay, but it's awkward

It is paradoxical. The underwear of ancient girls was called "dudou", and there was no title for parents. Looking at the combination of modern and ancient, I don't like it. It is either modern or ancient, neither fish nor fowl. Leave

Is there so much rubbish in a small mountain village? All of them are aimed at the protagonist. I don't know what to think.

There are too many private conversations, can't we write a serious story? Author.

It's too white, and it's a really stupid story... The protagonist is uneducated and doesn't know a word of Chinese characters, but he can flirt with the village chief.

The author should not deliberately increase the difficulty of the protagonist and should think of a reasonable way to write it. If the plot is reasonable, it will naturally give a sense of immersion, otherwise it will be really difficult to follow

The motivation and goal of doing things are unclear, the writing is not smooth enough, and there is no sense of substitution. I don't know what to do or why to do it? There may have been modifications, and it seems that the context does not match the context.

Happy Protagonist

I just want to know what his parents left him? ? Can't believe it after you get it?

Realism is of little use in the gray areas where real light cannot shine, and it has to be a dark forest. Don't talk about everyone being equal. What you see is only limited by your ability. When your ability reaches a certain level, what you see will make you very disappointed in the human race.

Is this year's novel genre plagiarism? Does the plagiarized content of this novel look familiar?

Another book that adds strength to death. Obviously this world is not normal, simple power is just the foundation, the extraordinary system is the most important... The breathing technique is really useless? Only a few dozen or two hundred points can reach an extremely high level... As a result, I would rather spend a hundred thousand points to increase my strength than to add skills that are really useful. I feel like I have been fooled. Test your IQ repeatedly. Perhaps it is for this reason that it has turned away all readers. Half a million words, only a few dozen fans. Still not sure what's going on?

This book is heart-wrenching to read, it's best not to read it, it's a plot-based and awkward. Lese

There is nothing wrong with the plot. The writing style is a bit rushed.