Mystery: I Am the King of Elden

Does the author really understand the Circle of Elden? There is actually something similar to the magic circle in Mystery, called Sefirot Look at who plays the Sefirot in Mystery, and who of the low-sequences can play this kind of thing In addition, the faded ones are essentially weak demigods, and ordinary people cannot bear the big runes If the protagonist is really the King of Elden, according to the rules of the Mysterious world, he should be at least a Sequence 4 demigod. With a big rune on his body, he is more likely to be a Sequence 2 angel.

It's not very watchable because the author's protagonist lacks personal charm! The protagonist is a second time traveler who has experienced countless adventures. Regardless of his ability or thinking, he is so stupid. How can he be the King of Elden? ! !

This power is the reason why you become the king. In other words, if the protagonist loses his power, what qualifications do he have to be called the King of Elden? 😜

Why don't you go and look at the book Embers in Mystery, look at other people's ashes, and then look at your Faded One, why did you pull it off here?

There is only one protagonist, and the protagonist is not very qualified.

Due to the comments from many readers, I am re-considering the plot and characters of the book when it was first published. Readers who have already read it do not need to read it again. I will retain all the original information. When I first wrote the book, I considered that there would be more mysteries and fewer old men, so I used Klein from the Tingen period as a reference for the character design of the protagonist during the same period. However, I later felt that it was not enough and began to shape the character of the reckless lady. In the transition, I failed to reflect the character of the 'King of Elden' in the early stage. The protagonist of sequence nine is more like a 'useless person'. I learned from the pain and decided to start rectifying the early chapters, and make them more satisfactory to more people before they become too big.

Hello author, reality is not a game, and IQ is not game intelligence. A person who does not study hard and is good at learning will not reach the top of the border.

The description of the main character is really too drawn out. You are about to become a king. Not only are you so powerful, but you also have a weak mentality.

What I thought was the battle between the Magical Ring System and the Secret System, but after reading Chapter 50, the protagonist Mao didn't know how to do it. I was on the warrior path and the Magical Ring System was taken away by others. What's the use of you?

After reading the reviews, I feel that the book I read is not in the same world line. Although this book is a bit slow in the early stage, it seems that the pace is much faster than the original Lord of Mysteries, and the characters are not that unbearable. The interaction with Xiao Ke is also quite interesting. It seems that many people are used to the invincible flow and cannot accept the protagonist who needs to grow up. And I think the protagonist is not slow to grow up. Although he is a little reckless, the faded ones with the old ring are different from the complex characters in the mysterious world. The faded people seem to have used some conspiracy to kill all the way. They are used to being in a head-to-head world, and it is difficult to adapt to the mysterious world. Isn't it more suitable for the image of the faded person who plays the role of the old ring manipulator? Furthermore, I see that so far, the protagonist has not performed any operations that have lost his IQ. He can fight when he needs to and kill when he needs to, and he is not afraid of other people's power. I feel that some people are really used to God's perspective. I think this protagonist doesn't know as much information as the readers. Besides, wouldn't it be interesting to see the interaction between the protagonist who is completely unfamiliar with the world and Xiao Ke? (By the way, the author Nan Tong writes well🤩) I feel that some people can't even read three chapters when they encounter something they can't understand, so they just use the keyboard to output their negative emotions, and then throw away their hands and leave. It's so cool. That's all I have thought about, and I can't think of too much. I hope the author can learn from it after reading it, and correct it if there are any bad things. You must also stick to your own rhythm. There are many people who support you. Update quickly, update quickly, gkd. ps: Although this book review took me five minutes to write after a full meal, I still hope that the author will be moved after reading it. It would be better if he could add an update for me (●°u°●)."

The character design of King Elden is still too high. The protagonist does not look like a king.

Speechless, you are probably a player's play, not a king's king. To be honest, if I write according to my settings, it will probably be more interesting and I can write more smoothly.

Arrive in a new world I find that my former power has gone out and become something that people in this world are robbing I have to fight to get it back step by step What does this mean? I really can't figure it out Isn't the writing method unique to ancient Chinese literature?

To be honest, after watching it, I felt it was a bit distorted and inconsistent. The protagonist does not look like the King of Elden, but a bit like a faded person who just left the church. I suggest you modify it.

In fact, it is difficult to use the old ring as a background. It is unreasonable for someone with the power to become a king to have soul penetration. Wouldn't it feel good for a strong man who can crush a lot of demigods and possess all the big runes to have soul penetration? The Faded Ones were very strong when they first appeared, and later on they got all the big runes and became equivalent to gods. If it can also penetrate the soul, it is also awesome. If you use the Fading Ones as a starting point, it will be easier to write than King of Elden. If you want to write a powerful protagonist but dare not give high strength, this will lead to a very cut-off when reading the book. This garbage monster can actually torture the King of Elden, that's about it.

The writing is quite good. Why do some people in book reviews think that the protagonist is not strong enough...

​​Just use the fact that the protagonist crosses the border as a background board to connect the mysterious world with the Elden world. Don't worry too much about whether the protagonist is strong or not. Can you give me your own thoughts? It only talks about the strength of the protagonist, not the setting or plot. I can completely accept that the protagonist is weak in the early stage. There is a certain logic to this. Some people compare it to the undead person next door, but I don't think it's necessary. After all, next door is a person wearing a body, and here is a person wearing a soul. Moreover, whether a person is strong in the borderland depends not only on combat experience and ability, but also on runes. In the mysterious world, runes do not exist. The protagonist is still soul-pierced, and the body is not his own. Therefore, it is definitely okay for the protagonist's physical fitness to be similar to that of ordinary people or a little higher, and it is normal to be lower than that of high-series people.      ，（），（，）， Another key point is that no matter in the author's setting, the protagonist is a prayer, warrior, mage or induction. The protagonist must have been able to defeat the Black Sword Assassin and the Black Sword without being injured in the past (it may not be accurate, but it is similar). After all, the destiny of death cannot stick. Therefore, the protagonist may be aware of and react to the enemy's attacks, but is unable to dodge or defend due to physical limitations. I personally like the story written by the author. He respects the original settings of both parties, but also has his own ideas. The description and plot advancement are not delayed or watered down. As long as it doesn't ruin the character, don't make outrageous poisonous points, and doesn't cause logical confusion, there will definitely be a lot of people chasing it when the number of words goes up. Come on!

There are no more embers, The foreign god in the new book Bloodborne also has some personality in him. You king, alas

Sure enough, you still have to have a wife. In a mysterious world, it would be too cliché to be able to solve the low-sequence enemy protagonist every time they appear. As a warrior, you don't have many specialties outside of combat to avoid high-sequence enemies. Naturally, you need a helper, so Lani's appearance is the most suitable. As a warrior character, a mage is needed to make up for the shortcomings. Currently, as a low-sequence person, he needs high-sequence people to occasionally help, but the protagonist, as an outsider, dare not rely on the righteous god. Then there is only one option for Lani. Lani, who can formulate laws after obtaining the magic ring, is at the level of the King of Angels to the True God. Even if she is damaged due to time travel, it is reasonable to maintain a high-sequence level.

A very, very, very regretful book. What a great subject matter. I hope someone can continue it...😐

Is this a eunuch? It's a pity, I really enjoyed watching it.

Xiba, I found a eunuch after voting for the monthly ticket! Pain! It hurts so much!

This article is about to be reset for the last time, adopting the opinions of most comments and revising the previous plot.

Is it the fault of you scoundrels?

What a pity, a rare good article

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I can't stand it. There are too many magical rings mixed in. I can't understand it. I feel that the plot is too confusing.

A rare and mysterious fan whose logic and IQ are online. PS: Take advantage of "Mystery: Path of Paradox"