After the Spiritual Energy Exploded, I Took the Planet to Ascend

Not bad, no big problem. It's just that I don't recommend writing emotional scenes later on, because nine out of ten female videos will fail if they write emotional scenes.

The story should be a good one, but it feels like the heroine does not look like a fairy in her previous life. She looks like she has grown up in this life. She often behaves childishly.

I wanted to take a screenshot but could not capture it: the current interface involves private content and screenshots are not allowed. Heaven and earth conscience, I just want to take a screenshot to show that I can't open the book. I prefer this kind of setting type of article, but I can't read it...

This is the first time I publish a book on Qidian. I hope readers and friends can leave comments and feelings after reading it, and give me suggestions~ No matter good or bad, you can help me improve~ If you like my story, you can click to favorites and recommend votes, thank you~😁😁😁

Why does opening the book fail? Deleted?

I have just recovered my anger, why do I feel like anything that pops up is better than the heroine? Why is the heroine's cultivation speed slower than theirs? I have never understood what it means to write like this? The heroine was a cultivator in her previous life, and she also awakened her memory. It stands to reason that the heroine's cultivation level should be the highest, and it's not like she lacks resources. Those who are better than the heroine, let alone geniuses, you said so yourself. The heroine must stabilize her realm when practicing. Those who are stronger than the heroine must have an illusory realm. Don't write them as if they are very powerful and not just waste piled up by resources.