The Great Wizarding Voyage

Su Geng, I can't sleep at night, I'm looking down on someone in just one chapter (50 cents a piece, remember to delete the content in brackets)

The golden finger is used too frequently. Strictly speaking, the golden finger is a fortune-telling, or even worse, a prediction. There is no charge for using this cheat in the book, and no CD is used. No matter what the protagonist does, it can be used anytime and anywhere. This is outrageous. The protagonist is like a manipulated puppet. In addition to this problem, another problem is that the cost and profit of potions are too high. From my understanding, except for special potions and normal potions, the profit of potions, plus cost and failure rate, should be 3-5 times the best. Even if the protagonist has extraordinary talent, the best is only 8, but for the potions in the book, the protagonist's profit is more than 15 times. Except for these 2 problems, everything else is pretty good. I was writing about a wizard before. Instead of writing about fantasy and immortality.

It's nice and smooth. Is the author writing a combination of the adventure of the Great Voyage and the wizard's path? The most exciting voyage I have ever seen is the script for the final evolution of Pirates of the Caribbean. In the climax of the entire book, the protagonist's legendary battleship is impressive.

Come on, update soon, the writing is really good!

I can only say that I finally found a book that I can read. There are too many books written by primary school students now.

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There is nothing wrong with the book, the writing is fluent, but there is just a chance. I look forward to the book becoming a god.

The author is great. Nowadays, everyone likes to read genius novels. Not to mention that the protagonist is a genius in all aspects, but I hope he has some talent in a certain aspect. It just doesn't have a golden finger, it just rises a little slower.

Looking at the title of the book, I thought of Beihaiju's extraordinary voyage😃

Wan Ding's capital, Su Geng Ye Mei 😁