The Wizard Pursues the Truth

When I wrote my book, I followed the outline without reading reviews or asking the editor. Those who know how to see will see it, but those who don't can't help it. If you have read enough, I will recommend it. If you have not read enough, the editor will put it on the shelf. I have saved a manuscript of 40,000 to 50,000 words, published it all on the shelves, and subscribed to it, so I will update it 12,000 times a day. If you have diarrhea, you will lose four thousand!

Originally, I didn't want to bb because I haven't paid yet, but the more I read, the more uncomfortable I feel, so I will briefly express my personal opinion. First of all, let me praise you. I really like this kind of golden finger. There is not so much description. It is more like a personal talent. I like this feeling. And then the feeling of learning to become stronger is also very good. The character of the protagonist is also very good. These should be considered advantages Then let me talk about some points that make me feel uncomfortable. First of all, it is the data. Since you have considered the mental constitution When these things are digitized, you should be more careful. If the data appears often and you occasionally get it wrong, it's okay, because if it appears often, I usually won't look at the data anyway, unless there is an important ability. But the data in Chapter 5 and Chapter 17 are not consistent. In fact, I didn't notice it. It was posted by someone in the comment area and I saw it, and then I felt uncomfortable. Although I knew it was harmless, I felt a little uncomfortable. Also, I forgot the name of the fire-type witchcraft. I don't know if I missed it or if it's just that, you just marked it with 13 degrees. Anyway, the first thing I saw was that I was confused. Then I read an explanation in the comment area and said it was energy level and reluctantly accepted it, but it really affected the perception. After complaining about the data, I started complaining about the plot The first one is this golden finger. It takes seven days to analyze things and a low-level witchcraft. It is acceptable now, but what about the later stage? Although the mid-term has not yet arrived, we can use the protagonist's guess to tell us readers that it will become more powerful in the future. I don't know about others, but my words feel inexplicably restricted. Then the plot of the attack on the wizard ship is really somewhat inexplicable. 1 Has no reason, 2 has no follow-up, and even to the point. I didn't ask about this incident after that. There were terrorist organizations claiming responsibility for the incident during 911, so it was very baffling. This kind of plot feels real if you think about it for a moment There is also a plot where the protagonist does not get on the ship. Inexplicably, a woman comes to save the protagonist, and then a wizard inexplicably saves the woman and signs a contract with the protagonist. . . I'm even more speechless And what is this wizard's heart again? Isn't it just that the protagonist is floating, and then the jellyfish makes the protagonist feel awe again. It would be really embarrassing to use such high-level words for such a simple thing Finally, the plot in the mainland is really more bloody. The wizard family kills people for no reason. I can't understand what the quota is for? Are they really a family that has been developing here for hundreds of years? How many people can they recruit at one time? Just forget about killing and still find a killer? Seeing this, I really felt that my IQ was hit hard. The last part of the plot that I didn't understand the most was that the protagonist was asked to kill those people. It can be understood as training the protagonist, but um, he was so careless in his first conversation after the third meeting? Then put up a shield (personal thoughts, I don't mean to teach the author how to do things, just complain about some plots that I feel are not good). The last personal feeling is that the turning point of this book should be the inexplicable wizard attack, and then it feels like it has become bloody.

It must be complained that a third-level wizard apprentice who has not completed the balance of mind, body, and soul cannot even defeat the ultimate wizard apprentice in the author's book. Instead, he covets the origin of an evil god who is equivalent to a second-level wizard (although it is only one-fifth of the origin, but the evil god has completed the unity of body, spirit, and soul, and is a third-level wizard). Experimenting with the evil god's origin, relying on the nightmare wizard system and elemental wizard system that he is only a second-level wizard apprentice, succeeded without paying any price. It is normal for the protagonist to cheat, but it must be well-founded and reasonable. When the author describes it, the evil god who is the old enemy of the wizard only reveals himself at the beginning, and it strengthens his mental attacks, which is very unreasonable. Under the huge power gap, all the actions of the protagonist are ridiculous. If this loophole is not taken seriously, this book might as well be written as a cool article.

Don't train, please. Once I think of a wizard turning into a muscular tyrant, I feel very painful.

Shennong has just finished reading it and has a pertinent suggestion for latecomers to run away. This book has too many flaws. Of course, some people who particularly like wizards can choose to read it. After all, they all like it very much. It is not a problem to endure it. First of all, it takes 1.05 Million words to become an official wizard. It is second only to the super-dimensional warlock in all wizard novels. The writing is not very good. It can only be said to be average, and it is considered poor among medium, so I really can't stand it because the protagonist is so stupid. He can save a lot of trouble with just one sentence, but he doesn't deliberately intensify the conflict. The pace is so slow. Who has the patience to play with the author? The updates are getting slower and slower. The author also insisted on delaying the promotion of the realm and not being promoted to an official wizard. Then he sent out a leaflet saying that he was promoted to a million words, but the result is more than 1 million words. He has not been promoted yet, and there is no credit.

Why does your wizard writing smell like fantasy...

Another sarcastic face protagonist. . Could the conflict be any more embarrassing? 😅

The introduction is like the pie that the boss draws for you. The content is the actual situation. There are too many problems. Typos and nonsense are mostly minor problems. The biggest problem is the audience. The introduction seems to say that this is the story of a rational wizard seeking the truth. The content is a bunch of chicken-skinned nonsense and a bunch of grinding plots to reduce intelligence. It is like saying to watch a rocket, but it turns out to be a flying monkey. You thought it was a hard-core academic genre, but it turned out to be a cheat.

It was pretty good around the 100th chapter, but it got worse as we went on. A group of people were left shocked and rightly shocked. Except for the protagonist, all the supporting characters were brainless. The rhythm of the story was mindless and cool. I couldn't bear to comment without comment.

Eight years later, Chapter 167 has not yet reached the third level of wizard. I am afraid your eye of truth is blind.