Only Then Did I Catch Bai Yueguang, My Childhood Sweetheart Became Anxious.

In order to leave a message, I rushed to 500. For all those who read the book later, you can run away after reading the free chapter. The back is full of water and ugly.

This book is a bit rubbish. The system still sucks. The author abuses just for the sake of abuse. I can't stand it anymore.

I just want to say one thing. If you write it like this, then everyone will not read it anymore. It will really piss people off. If someone sees this kind of plot in the future, they may abandon the book directly, but I have been chasing it for so long. I hope you can write it better, at least the readers will not be angry to death after reading it.

I don't know what happened. I haven't read novels for a while. At that time, I only read this book at the starting point (I saw the latest chapter at that time). Now I have time to come back and read it, but I didn't expect why I feel that I am leaning towards Xianxia now. I am very surprised how you can be biased towards Xianxia. I just saw the chapter name before and felt something was wrong. Today I saw my personal history record, Xianxia 1%? I have read two books at Qidian. They are basically urban. The result is Xianxia, ​​which is quite outrageous. I looked back at it again in the past few days, and I still feel pretty good. It was good in the early days, but it changed after the military exercise. Although I returned to campus later, it seemed different from before, and I started to fight against the family power. But weren't we music in the beginning? If Lin's music level is now very high and he can no longer write, wouldn't he still have a company? When I go abroad, I have more opportunities, and I can write. If it doesn't work, you can reshape Chen Wan and other female supporting characters, or reshape Yan Yu. Personally, I feel that Yan Yu is dispensable now. A military exercise has left the heroine for nearly a hundred chapters. I can't understand it In short, this book was quite good at the beginning. I just regarded it as a dream. Now that I have woken up from the dream, it is time to go. Thank you!

It reads like a piece of shit but seems to have nuggets of gold in it.

After living for more than 20 years, all I read was pirated. Today I paid for a novel for the first time. It was so damn good.

If you drop the chain at the critical moment, come on

This time it's okay, I can see that there has been improvement. The overall article is not as good as before. As for the quality problem... It is actually worse than before, which is normal because the original main line has actually ended a long time ago, and now there is nothing to write. It is best to find a new main line, a main line that can be written all the time, rather than a small copy like this that can be completed in a few pictures, otherwise the quality will definitely be worse, but the progress of the article is better than before.

Next, let's focus on writing about the career line. The male protagonist's system has not yet been officially revealed. Chen Wan should write less about this line. She is also a poor person, and she also paid for her own mistakes. Since the author did not write her as a woman in other novels, she is also a kind person, at least not bad in nature, so I still hope that she can have a good ending even if she cannot be with Lin Yi. Don't be ruined casually. She should also have a new beginning of her own.

Isn't it the fault of the boys and their father that the heroine is like this? Although she is also at fault, anyone who has been pampered like this since she was a child will become like this 😅

Well, I can only say that existence is reasonable.

Hello author, there is no use in deleting the post. If you don't read it, it means that the problem is gone. The content of the current article is really difficult to understand and accept. This is not an actual situation that can be changed by hiding one's ears and stealing the bell. If you are stubborn and insist on going your own way, then believe me, you will be the author who suffers in the end. The reason why I posted that post was not to scold you, but to sincerely help you. If I'm not willing to help you correct the problem, I can just leave it alone. But the previous part of your article has attracted me, and I want to help you improve rather than insult you. I hope the author understands our painstaking efforts. In addition, if this post is still deleted by you, then I will leave it and will not read or post it again. Hope you can understand this

​ What I wrote today was very to my liking, but it's over. Just like the male protagonist expressed, 'I've given you my sincerity, but you've been perfunctory to me. It's over, everything is over. ' To me, the male and female protagonists have already gone in both directions, and the female companion knows that she cannot keep the male protagonist and chooses to leave. This is the end, and nothing else matters. Let me summarize: the male protagonist's parents are one of the biggest poisonous points in this game. They have instilled in the male protagonist the idea that the family is poor since he was a child, which will give the male protagonist the cowardly idea that my family is poor and cannot compare with others (the reality is the same. Instilling the idea that the family is poor in a child will have great harm to the child's psychology, and it is easy for the child to have the illusion that he is inherently inferior to others. If not adjusted in time, it may accompany the child's life). Then the male protagonist is instilled with the idea of ​​a knight and a princess, and this is instilled together with the female partner's parents. This is particularly tricky, because the princess can only marry a prince. If she marries someone else, she is not a princess, and the knight can only protect the princess. This is a slavish idea, but the male protagonist's parents still instilled it, which is completely irresponsible for their son. There are also a group of people who obviously have money but still leave their children to live in the care of others, which further aggravates the hero's inferiority mentality. Finally, the male protagonist's parents have no intention of letting the male protagonist inherit the family business. The reason is very simple. They are completely free-range without any planning, without any conversation about the future, without any care. Complete free-range care. Management skills must be cultivated. No one can manage others well without cultivating management skills. Why are management talents mostly rich instead of poor? Because the rich have the capital to cultivate management skills, the rich have the capital to plan time, and the rich have the capital to try and make mistakes, but the male protagonist has no management skills. Finally, I would like to say that what you write, author, is not water, but the sea (●°u°●)​"

I don't know if you will delete the post, but there are some things I still want to say. I think the plot twist you wrote in the early stage is a bit blunt, and the characters are not vivid and three-dimensional. The characterization is related to the power of writing. It is difficult to see the results for a while, but the plot, I think it can be more bloody. For example, after being rejected at a birthday party, the male protagonist is captured by a series of actions of the female Qingmei, and becomes a bitch again. . Then after being hurt once, I decided not to lick it again. It feels more reasonable. After all, Qingmeima, it is not easy to let go of the relationship of more than ten years. The sudden loss of something cherished will make people feel hesitant and confused. If there were some psychological descriptions or other descriptions, the plot and characters would be more fleshed out. Also, I just think that if this is the first book you have written, why do you need to set a fan value before you can comment? It is not ruled out that malicious comments will mess with your mentality, but you may also lose some good suggestions? For novice writers, reviews also indirectly represent a kind of popularity. Don't think that having too many negative reviews will stop newcomers from reading the book. In fact, there are many S-readers in the starting point. The more they criticize the book, the more they read it. There are many reviews. At least the book still has the value of discussion. It's sad that some people have no reviews. You are not a genius writer. He also set up a fan value to speak, and cut off his own means of making money. If you don't believe me, just look at it. For example, when I see a book with few reviews, I just don't read it. The starting point is a buyer's market. If you don't make money by writing books, you can think I'm farting. If you make money by writing books, it's actually good to listen to more comments. In addition, it is too early to put it on the shelves. . . . To be honest, there are many Qidian books. I have only read the first dozen chapters of your book, and I don't find any highlights. The system is also mediocre. Is it a master skill at the beginning? ? The pace shouldn't be so fast, as you won't be able to see the male protagonist's growth and transformation at all. I subscribed just to post a comment. This is what makes me the most angry. You can earn me five hundred coins, but that's it.

I really don't know what to say when I see this. Are the protagonist's parents so irresponsible? If Chen Wan and Xia Mei succeed, they will really work for the Chen family for a lifetime, and they will use their own son as a nanny and slave. I can only laugh and push my son into the fire pit. If he is outstanding, he will not be happy. He has to raise him to death to be happy. I suspect that the protagonist's father and Xia Mei are the same family.

Is this plot too slow? In addition, what I most want to complain about is the male protagonist's parents. They are so rich and don't allow the male protagonist to receive a good education?

I hope the author will sort out the outline and think clearly about what kind of ending he wants to give everyone. After the disgusting thing like Xia is killed, his father should be expelled from the board of directors. Chen Wan should not be described in such a despicable way. Let her learn how to respect and love others and then everyone can live well. The protagonist and the heroine can make love and pretend to be cool, not just for the sake of abuse. Chen Wan's OOC is too serious. Are you sure that writing the hero's former love as a chicken will make us readers like it?

How can I put it, it feels like 💩 is mixed with gold nuggets The content and plot are relatively old-fashioned. The parents and brothers are simply outrageous. I hope the plot design of the next book will be more reasonable. I have some imagination.

She said it was the first time. On her wedding day, she said she wore crotchless pants to tan when she was a child 😄😄😄

After reading it, I felt that the male protagonist's parents were out of their mind.

The more I write, the more senseless I become. My parents treat their son like this. No matter how poor I raise my son or my rich daughter, there is no way to raise him like this. He might as well be his future father-in-law. The same goes for the protagonist. He has done it all over again. He still worries about this and that. If I am so good, how can I pay for this and that?

After the appraisal is completed, this book is purely 💩, not even as good as the Dragon King's Son-in-law and Overbearing President's articles in early YY

Seeing this made me angry. Let Chen Ji end quickly. You know that gringo is a scumbag. Knowing his background, he told his parents that we were friends. I am speechless. Let Chen and the gringo get along quickly. If you haven't written anything, just write that the gringo has AIDS, he had sex with Chen Wan, and Chen Ji also has it. That shit about the Chen family was revealed. There is a problem with Niu Meng Enterprise's dairy products. Going bankrupt becomes Don't be disgusted readers. After all, the protagonist has a system. Is his personal ability so inferior to his IQ?

Can you please hurry up and finish the filming of Chen Wan? I can't stand it anymore

The son said that he was drunk and told idioms. The father didn't even think about what the problem was. He directly defended the person named Xia. If he hesitated for a moment, I would treat you as a rude person. There was no suspicion at all. This brain is really like a pig that just caught the wind and took off.

You must have masochistic tendencies to write about people who are so aggrieved. Who in a normal family would be able to hold back in such a situation, and even talk to his father in such a f*cking nice way. Until now, I thought it would be more comfortable to write. If the next chapter is so aggrieved, I really can give up.

After so many years of reading, this is the first time I have abandoned a book after reading so many chapters. This book is really poisonous to a certain level. The most unbearable reason why I gave up the book is the protagonist's father. I really didn't expect such a father to exist. It is really unbearable.

The author is absolutely NT, he just likes to talk nonsense, and the author's father must be like this too 😅

It's so funny that the author deleted the post 🤔 It's not allowed to say that it's not written well, right?

I hadn't read it in almost a year, and when I saw the title of the last chapter, "Return to Blue Star," I knew I had to give up on the book. What I want is just a campus romance novel, a fun novel, not cultivating immortals or interstellar travel. This is too far. From being rejected by Bai Yueguang to counterattack, to family quarrels, and finally returning to Blue Star, it is really hard for me to imagine the later plot. To be honest, I really liked this book at first, but the plot changed so unexpectedly that I lost my enthusiasm for the book. In my words, this book is "difficult to accept." It's because of the book, not the plot. Well