A Dao Companion in Battle Through the Heavens, Starting with Xun’er

I think Xiao Yan has an easy time seizing any opportunity, but Xun'er's is the only one that's difficult for him. Xiao Xun'er had secretly fallen for Xiao Yan when she was six or seven years old, after he touched her body. It would be difficult for someone who wasn't from the Xiao family to make a move on Xiao Xun'er before Xiao Yan. In addition, Xiao Xun'er did not admire the strong.

The distance between the Black Corner Region and the Central Continent is such that even a Dou Zong expert would need at least half a year to cross it. However, if one travels through a spatial wormhole, it only takes a month. But constructing a spatial wormhole is extremely difficult, and it requires frequent maintenance.

Currently, most of the female characters displayed on the character wall are from the Gama Empire. There are some that aren't on the wall. Xiao Yu and Xiao Mei of the Xiao family; Linfei, the Snow Fairy of Blackrock City; Princess Yaoyue of the Empire, Yaoye; Moonlit Serpent; Green Barbarian of the Heavenly Serpent Palace The academically trained Ruolin, Hu Jia, Han Yue, Liu Fei, and Ye Xinlan;

Well, the protagonist has only just reached the Douling cultivation level and he's already creating an extraterrestrial inner demon? That's a bit too hasty. The method of integration is also very crude. The outside world could have invaded the world in a subtle way, and then the protagonist would slowly discover the changes in the world. Now, even a broken version of an extraterrestrial boss at the Demon Emperor level would be enough to instantly kill the protagonist.

Wow, I took a look at the character rankings, and it's almost become a list of beauties! They've really left no one behind!

The writing style is alright, but this is absolutely terrible. I've read eleven chapters and I still haven't cultivated that technique or used those rewards.

Without Gu Xun'er's concerns, and with his god-like perspective, Xiao Yan was nothing in the early stages; even with Yao Lao, it wouldn't matter.

I feel pretty good right now.

The original title was "In Battle Through the Heavens, Three Thousand Companions". It's frustrating that my application failed the review. [Battle Through the Heavens Fanfiction] I, Su Chen, am a time traveler. At eighteen, Su Chen, who had survived until the system awakened, began his journey as a top-tier player.

The fight scenes were written so awkwardly, it felt like watching a shonen anime. But anime isn't awkward because you can't understand Japanese and there are visuals to support it. The novel should be written more normally, and the plot felt a bit padded.