Volleyball Boy, Supreme Attacker

To be honest, it's not wise to enter Karasuno. Volleyball shounen comics are inherently character-building. Not to mention our own team, every other team basically has a few characters that everyone remembers. Aojo's King, Iwaki, Mad Dog, Shiratori's Ushijima, Five Colors Tendo, including the Cat Team, Owl Team, etc. Even the Snake Team, which only appeared once, has the captain and his girlfriend showing off their affection in the national competition. Not to mention that not only the protagonist enters Karasuno, but also brings a quasi-ace and a libero. It's easy to conflict with the original characters. If you don't grasp it well, the original characters will collapse. I would like to have an author who can write about the two years of high school that are not mentioned in the original work. After the third-year senior left in the second year, Karasuno didn't even enter the national competition. The Tatsuno who entered was eliminated in the second round. In the third year, Karasuno was ranked fourth in the country. But it is true that there are very few fans of Volleyball Boys nowadays, and the well-written ones are even more pitiful. It is said that Heizi's basketball game was also ruined later on.

The journey that started with volleyball in childhood This book assigns the king a top 4 attacker in the country A fan from Qingcheng's perspective

I look forward to this being the second Little Volleyball fanfic I can read from Qidian. Com

I found that your invisible protagonist is very good at being invisible. You can completely open a new book and write your own volleyball boy. There is no need to write it as a "fan".

I think it's difficult to write since entering Karasuno. Volleyball is no better than baseball. There are fewer people on the field, and there is no substitute rotation. When entering Karasuno, you have to squeeze out the status of the popular characters in the original work. It is difficult to balance the drama. I think the author has a very difficult time writing these interpersonal relationships. Then the author doesn't have that kind of passion when writing about the game. It doesn't matter if he doesn't have passion. You can write how strong the protagonist is once he surpasses him. It's just fun, but there is no result... You have also read "The Journey that Started in Little Volleyball". Why was that book so successful? Because the protagonist is uniquely strong and so is the role of the character, it is easy for us to get involved in the protagonist when we read the book. So the cheating and group portraits mentioned in the comments of this book are actually secondary. The most important thing is whether it is fun. Don't think it's too strong and unreasonable. It's reasonable to think too much when writing a novel. Unless you are a master, it will be difficult to write. The author's writing is good, come on!

In fact, the biggest problem is that playing with strong teams is mostly written about passion, but other less famous teams also have to be described in a large way, which is a bit tiring.

If there are too many jokes, it would be a bit boring.

I hope it's more fun not to go to Karasuno

I felt bored after entering Karasuno. I was too concerned about the original characters. There were too many people and sophistication. There were too many things to do and the progress was slow.

What would you do if you traveled to the world of small volleyball with the 2Ksports system? What would you do if you got Shannon Brown's body template? Watch Ichinose Guren use his own abilities and scientific training methods to train an invincible volleyball team that competes across the country. {"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New Book Trial Reading"} Book title: "Volleyball Boy, the Supreme Attacker" Type: Animation Doujin Word count: 170,000 words Status: Serialized Introduction: The story of Ichinose Guren traveling through the world of small volleyball with the 2Ksports system, taking Hinata's Yukioka all the way across the country, and then leading Karasuno to the top. Evaluation: This is the second volleyball fanfic that I am interested in reading after Akashi Asuka. The male protagonist of this book, Ichinose Guren, took advantage of his family's advantages to transfer the animation from his previous life to the world of small volleyball, completing the primitive accumulation and rapid development of the family's capital. The system in this book does not have a strong sense of existence. It only provides a physical fitness template, and the rest still requires training by the protagonist. The male protagonist's character template is trying to be closer to Aizen, and various anime memes emerge one after another, which feels quite interesting.

Are there any of you who went to Aoba Castle West? What the king lacks is a general who can fight for him and kill the enemy. It is a pity.

I don't know if you've noticed it, but Japan's defeatism is actually very serious. Many comics end up trying their best to finish second or third.

You don't need to write a protagonist at all. You can just write the characters in the original work. You described the protagonist so powerfully that he became invisible. Please write a fanfic. The purpose of fanfic is to highlight the protagonist, not the original work. OK, if you want to write about the atmosphere of the team, you can write the team atmosphere of the characters in the original work. There is no need to write the protagonist. Why do you want to add a protagonist? It's cool to just highlight one thing when reading fan fiction.

It's well written, why are so many people criticizing it? But it's not very clear why the author considered bringing money into the team (junior high school team). The feeling of group portraits is not established, which weakens the creation of the original characters, and the people I bring are also missing something. The sky is full of stars, high school duel with friends. Why don't you join other unknown teams and write more original works to train yourself. The feeling of not being able to go up, not being able to go down, feeling constrained. But the look and feel is still okay.

Why is it updated every day lately? No one reads it, right?

After a while, to be honest, the writing style is a bit immature, but I can see the author's efforts to describe each scene to the readers. However, it is recommended that some unimportant scenes should not be too detailed and leave room for the readers' imagination. A writer once said: "An article that is too full is not a good article~" So if you want to write again, I suggest you take the test Consider local details, mainly to express the shocking feeling of scoring by the protagonist or your favorite character. Excess can be expressed by scores, how many versus how many, and how many versus how many cutscenes. It is also recommended that the author can play the small volleyball game a few more times, pay attention to the arc of the characters in the lens, and express the visual effect in words. I hope the author will get better and better, come on!

It feels like it deviates a bit from the original work, and the writing is a bit nonsense. Whether it is Kitagawa No. 1, Senkuni Middle School or Kosen Academy, they are all strong schools in the original junior high school student competition. But what the hell is Shiratorizawa Junior High School? ? Isn't Shiratorizawa a high school?

🙂 I've never watched mini volleyball, but I'd like to ask if it's also super volleyball.

The author has not created a group yet

Give me a monthly ticket and the author will update quickly

How should I put it? The writing is pretty good, but it just feels a bit lacking in meaning.

I just want to ask where Shimizu-senpai went. This monk team is so boring.

When I look at the table of contents, I feel like there are still a lot of things that haven't been written yet. Why is it just finished?

Dude, did the one who wrote that book change his vest and write about volleyball again?