Hongloushi

I sort of know. You write so many words and your writing is okay, why are you not famous? Can you read it yourself? The first one said he was leaving, and the second one entered Rongguo Mansion. Why don't you just move in? Disgusting people!

There are too many cases of forced pretense. You go to a poetry meeting and don't read poems, just play martial arts competitions, and scold others for not working hard. If the people who go to the poetry club are all dandies addicted to pleasure, will what you say be useful? Will people think deeply about these words that they have long been tired of hearing? If your logic is consistent, the plot won't be so awkward.

Why would you go to this muddy soup of Jia Mansion after being reborn and passed the examination?

Dashun, this country's name is not pleasing to the eye. Shun was established by thieves and has misled our country for hundreds of years.

Speaking from my personal point of view, Mingjiao and Jinshi don't go well together, which is weird.

The beginning is weird. From the perspective of a traveler, "you can't have anything to do with Jia's family" and "cut off". At the same time, you provoke people's servants for no reason, and after beating people, they don't leave but continue to pretend. It's okay if I like the power of the Jia family, but I don't have to have a high-minded inner drama of "I can't get into this lazy quagmire" while following the crowd. Readers are not stupid. Anyone with a discerning eye can tell whether you want to enter Jia's house or not.

Don't be too spoiled by maids or dotes on women too much. Don't be too modern about what the practices were in any era.

An illegitimate child who won the imperial examination and went to a cesspool like Jia's Mansion not only brought humiliation to himself, but also revealed his shortcomings (illegitimate child) to the outside world. In the future, if you want to develop an official career, who can think highly of you as a bastard? It was a good day, but the Mingjiao came out. Poison wow.

Forget it about the heroine Baochai, she has too much on her mind

A bloody plot. I couldn't stand it anymore and left.

It really doesn't work, I can't stand it anymore, the routine from ten years ago

Fans of Red Mansion basically say that the Jia family is on the wrong team, but it would be ugly to die if they were on the wrong team. I feel like the Jia family was caught committing a crime, and the emperor just wanted to kill the chicken to scare the monkeys.

This protagonist is so disgusting. He's just pretending. If you don't know how to pretend, don't pretend. The ball isn't there yet. There are all kinds of forced pretense. When you get stronger, won't it be natural if you continue to pretend? It's really disgusting to have a bunch of people accompany you to show off when you have to be nothing.

The author himself was speechless and collapsed the book. At the beginning, he set up such a pretentious character, but in the end, he became entangled in the house. He is just a bastard. Instead of trying to make a career outside, he actually wastes his time arguing with the Jia family. After reading chapter 50, he couldn't stand it and gave up. When I think back to what Feng Ziying said at the beginning, I want to laugh.

This book will have a much better look and feel if all the Mingjiao content has been cut out. What a pity.

I would call this book one of the worst Red Mansion fan fiction books.

The first chapter is enough; I have been in the exam for more than ten years, and I don't know the national figures and biographies; Jia's family has two princes, and the nobles represent the flag. You can see it when Jia Jing is under house arrest; what small things do you only see in your eyes?

While emphasizing that he does not want to be dragged down by his ancestral home, he is also entangled with Rong Ning's second house, playing both roles and standing. Abandoned

You win. I persisted for five chapters and still couldn't hold on.

By the way, considering the main character's intentions and not wanting to rebel, isn't it a bit redundant to bring in a Mingjiao?