My AI Turned into a Cyber Monster

The technology feels okay, but the social structure and character conflicts are too disgusting and forcefully arranged. The development of the plot is beyond people's expectations and there is no suitable explanation.

Playing too much with h stalks makes you look greasy. In addition, the taste of the white text is too strong, 985 was written as a junior college, and the national science and technology competition was written as a municipal folk cooking competition. The character of Xiaoying was given to the male protagonist before it was even established, without even a name. The author most likely mapped his own fantasy onto it, but the readers failed to empathize. The plot is too fast and confusing, and there are too many supporting characters. It can be seen that the author tried very hard to put together interesting points, but the result was just the opposite. The male protagonist's cheats are also not clear. If he really relied on his own abilities instead of system cheats, and his abilities were so incredible, he would have taken off long ago. He couldn't wait until the college competition to start pretending.

It's so exciting to watch. The protagonist always doesn't care when NPCs pick things up. If you don't care, don't write this kind of plot. Just mess around, right?

Don't let the chapter names fool you, family members. Who knew that such a clichéd chapter names are actually the main text?

You are so awesome and you are still worried about 💰? Still care about your diploma? The logic doesn't make sense. Forced to install B. The dominance of the artificial intelligence future basketball star. Is it so unremarkable? How can readers buy into today's novels if you write them like this?

How to put it, the protagonist keeps showing off his super abilities, and I keep belittling the others Such as "You are just a mere... How can you do it" "We can't do it, how can you do it" Then the protagonist shows off again, and the other characters are belittling. It's very, very uncomfortable to watch o(╥╥)o It's obvious that they have shown super skills, but the supporting characters show that it's enough if we have... Why use the protagonist? When we encounter a problem, the protagonist is showing technical solutions and belittles it.      985，，，，，（，）

The rhythm is completely messed up and the writing is extremely renaissance. I don't recommend it to those who have been reading online articles for more than a year.

All I can say is that the plot of this book is the same as it was more than ten years ago. The villain is the ultimate brainless and crazy provocation to the protagonist. It's completely mindless to trample on the protagonist. Whether it was the people on the field or the staff at the police station, they all seemed to have lost their minds and directly mocked and stepped on the protagonist. How could a normal person do that? And many plots feel completely mindless. Extremely bloody. Brother, what era are you in? Did you still think that it was just as popular in 2000 as Long Aotian's show-off and slap-in-the-face style, the Bingwang school beauties?

Why does it feel like a book written by AI? The story is wrong, the plot is messy, and the characters are distorted.

I was confused after reading the beginning. The top science and technology competition in the country is so valuable. Why is there a problem of teammates committing evil acts? We have reached the top five, what kind of price does it cost to have someone sabotage it? My father, the director, is not short of money and connections, but he is short of fame. Isn't it true that what a talented financial student knows best is value evaluation? There is another one who is a relative of the principal and is snobbish, but when you reach the top five, you will know that you are capable! It's impossible for her not to be friends, right? Is the author new? The character conflict may be copied from other books, but it is really inappropriate. The teammates in the preliminary round may cause sabotage because it is for gold plating. But when it comes to the top five, it's not suitable because the value is high and they will automatically protect their own interests. And generally large-scale competition universities will have instructors, and the teachers will definitely check everything in advance. Doesn't the protagonist even know to check it in advance?

In the beginning, except for the protagonist, everyone else is the villain, right? !

After I removed my brain, I felt like my skull was melting.

The writing is messy and I don't even know what to write. This book can't be read without thinking.

Novels like cyberpunk, as long as they have a female protagonist, will be a hit on the street. People who come to read cyberpunk are not here to see you fall in love or are otakus. I don't know the positioning of cyberpunk. No wonder I can't eat shit 🤔 It's not specific to any book, because it's all rubbish.

What the hell is this? It's rubbish. This book can make me live stream and eat on my phone.

You can't massacre the Japanese devils, you can't destroy the white world. Are you a writer taking money from foreigners? 눈_눈

The compositions of high school students are not so messy. The author should start practicing his writing by imitating them.

Normally, the plot is about someone being suspected and framed, and then everyone is a villain. The conflict is too far-fetched. To sum up the weirdness in Xiaobai's novel

Let's revise it again, the plot is a bit baffling!

The subject matter and the name are both very good. I suggest changing the author, it will definitely become popular.

Contest everything! :!

Let's just say everyone is a bad guy, just pretend to be tough.

It started with a live game. The audience and teammates looked down on the protagonist, and there were shady scenes. It was not pleasant to watch at all. I don't want to see the protagonist rely on cheats to make a comeback. I just want to see the protagonist hack all these supporting characters to death, okay? Who reads your novel just to show off and get slapped in the face?

The conflict at the beginning is too far-fetched, everyone in the world is fucking bad 💣. The author's professional knowledge should be no problem, I don't understand it anyway, but judging from the comments, it should be from a related industry. But the plot is really written like shit💩🌚npc There is no good guy and all the villains, and passersby ridicule and look down on the protagonist. It's really (ﾉ｀Д´)ﾉ💩I can't stand it

The more the author writes, the more it becomes ancient martial arts fantasy.