Above Reality

Recommended words: The world setting has a sense of mystery and visuality. The protagonist travels through the game at the beginning, and gradually adapts to and becomes familiar with this ordinary and strange world. The author's description of daily life is more mature and vivid, which makes people feel comfortable. He also does not forget to create some suspense and conflicts in daily life, which can better allow readers to see the reality of the world. Finally, the academy stream that is about to begin gives people a very solid feeling - the feeling that at least there is a main line to get familiar with the world setting. Rating: B Category: Fantasy - Another World Attributes: Fantasy, Time Travel, Mystery, Daily, Academy Flow Testing Suggestions: First of all, this introduction... I don't know whether it is imitating Mystery intentionally or unintentionally? Lost in thought. And this category is obviously fantasy. Why choose fantasy? Is it because fantasy is not easy to sign (laughs). There are no other problems with the story. The writing is quite mature. Although I am not interested in the Western setting, I still find it interesting. {"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New book trial"}

After reading ten chapters, Shen Nong tested the book, and all opinions represent my personal views only. This book gave me a strong sense of déjà vu. It was so ordinary and everyday. The detailed descriptions made me a little, how should I say, irritated. I didn't push much of the plot in one page, and only described some messy things. For example, in one page, I used a 22-point font. The appearance descriptions of the two female characters or the female supporting character took up a whole page. I skipped them all and didn't read them at all. If I want to say that you are stupid, then someone will definitely come out and tell you that this is a free chapter, and you will leave without reading it. Forget it, it is not important. Let me make it clear that the books I read are a bit heavy-duty. The descriptions are strange enough, and fantasy can arouse my interest in reading. However, I felt very sleepy while reading this book and it was not interesting. After reading ten chapters, I came here to review it. I didn't read the rest. Maybe it has changed. Finally, I have a question. I don't know if you guys have seen Lord of the Mysteries or The Whisperer, but I can't remember. These three books all give me very similar feelings. I suspect that the authors all came out of the same training camp, or even the same writer. They have a Western fantasy background setting + a Cthulhu-style extraordinary approach + a plain writing style. After Mystery became popular, I borrowed a lot from Mystery. To be honest, these three books of yours are pretty good. At least the plots are well designed and there are no obvious poisonous points. But, alas... When I read Mystery for the first time, I just thought it was well-written. I have read many similar books. When I read My Girlfriend again, I just felt that My Girlfriend's writing is extremely awesome. It can stimulate readers' interest in reading while maintaining complicated details. It's so awesome.

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Let me tell you my opinion, which only represents my personal opinion. If you don't like it, please don't criticize it. First, the narrative of the story is quite confusing. There are no words or structures to convert here and there. It is recommended to add some words, such as school, class, church, which big shot's mansion, bar, market and other nouns before writing them. The second point is that it is recommended to read it from the perspective of the protagonist as a time traveler, with puzzles and puzzles to solve. If there is a hidden secret, the protagonist must be aware of it and solve it step by step. The viewing experience will be much better. It is enough to know the secret of the protagonist's life in the early stage. Just mention it casually. Don't insert too many elements in the middle. The protagonist will slowly unravel it by himself. The structure and logic of the story will not be too dramatic. Third, how to improve the protagonist's extraordinary system? The role of the crow has not been revealed. The protagonist is not in a hurry to gain knowledge in this area. Others use him as a guinea pig, and they run around arrogantly, not wanting to improve their strength. Fourth, the separation is quite severe. The protagonist is a little more cautious in the early stage, but later on he dares to let down his guard. Why be cautious in the early stage?

I like this style. The details have a sense of design and experience, but the pace is too fast and I feel a little dizzy. Maybe my brain capacity is not big enough.

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Chapter 17 The prototype of the Colt long sword is the Colt M1873 cavalry model. The rest is up to you to use your imagination. If you know how to draw, I will give you some help.

The foreplay is too long, too wordy, and cannot attract people to continue reading.