The Weird Game Starts with Swallowing Evil Spirits

The setting is good, but the plot needs polishing. It feels like the protagonist is being led along all the time and has no ability.

Please, dear bosses, try to catch up to the latest chapters. Lao Mao bows to the bosses!

This book is okay! It's really good, there's no one there.

I'm reading the first dungeon now, and I'm actually interested in the introduction. I originally thought it was an invincible cool article based on plug-ins to cause trouble in the dungeon. But how can I put it, the process of the dungeon is too obscure, I can't understand it at all. The protagonist can overclock the brain, but it has no effect on passing the dungeon. When the first event passed, all I saw was memories and discussions with companions. As a result, the three people had no constructive opinions and actions. I am not saying that the author is bad, but I think the behavior of the protagonist and supporting characters should at least be meaningful in the process of describing the plot. Even if it is wrong, it can also reflect the growth of the protagonist on the other side, such as changes in thinking patterns and behavior patterns. The protagonist is quite passive as the plot progresses. The events resolved online by agents also use fairly vague descriptions, just like plot killings. On the contrary, it made things even more confusing. My other side killed three corpses for me? I have become more powerful, but I still find out the truth and then passively wait for the plot to develop. All in all, I feel like I may have skipped dozens of chapters. In the beginning, it was said that the dungeon was difficult, in the middle, it was said that the dungeon consciously wanted to harm me, and in the end, it was still my own person after the trial. As a reader, it is somewhat unclear whether the description is the subjective judgment of the protagonist or the setting of the book. So be it.

The logic is not bad, the plot is a bit slow, and the game style is a bit low. Even the game is messed up by players, and it can still be entered randomly. . . A little speechless

This overclocker is not smart either. From the three corpses and a series of soulless monsters, it is obvious that the second personality is the BOSS.

The author writes so well, if you keep at it, sooner or later you will become a Platinum Master. Believe in yourself and God will reward those who work hard!

Looking forward to it, come on, author😁

The author's writing is so good. If you stick to it, sooner or later you will become a master.

To tell the truth, it's written so well that it doesn't poke a needle! It's just that the first copy is a bit long and a little slow. However, I feel that from the moment the young master of the Gao family came out riding the dominant machine girl, the whole story became more conflicting. I hope I can stick to it and finish it. Come on! It's not a lot of money, but I'll give you a small reward of 500, so don't give it up!

It would be much better if the word "devour" in the introduction is changed to "eat"

It's indeed possible. I hope there will be more people, otherwise I'm afraid there will be no more people.

It's well written, but why is no one talking in it?

It's a little slow to warm up, but it's full of sincerity. It's a good food.

The first three chapters are a bit pretentious and long-winded, but still readable. Wait until I look back

Really well written